for A lewd reality took me in9/22/2023 c2 Piveloco
Puedes haser una historia sobre lemy loud
Puedes haser una historia sobre lemy loud
9/14/2023 c1 Guest
My advice:
Well, first thank you for picking up where Geo left off.
My advice is: update once a month at least, include tons of sex (that’s what we’re here for) and really lean in to the breeding and maledom/femslave aspects of it, even more than Geo did. Also, this is just a personal request, but a threesome with Maggie and Luan ending with both of them pregnant (lots of master-slave talk too) would be peak.
My advice:
Well, first thank you for picking up where Geo left off.
My advice is: update once a month at least, include tons of sex (that’s what we’re here for) and really lean in to the breeding and maledom/femslave aspects of it, even more than Geo did. Also, this is just a personal request, but a threesome with Maggie and Luan ending with both of them pregnant (lots of master-slave talk too) would be peak.
9/13/2023 c1 Gin jin
I think your story would be better if you spaces In between Sentences, kinda hard to read with the words Jumbled together.
I think your story would be better if you spaces In between Sentences, kinda hard to read with the words Jumbled together.
9/13/2023 c1 Piveloco
Chingon para empesar la trilogia
Chingon para empesar la trilogia
9/12/2023 c1 Guest
Huh Lynn Sr bring on Lincoln’s side don’t see that often neat
Huh Lynn Sr bring on Lincoln’s side don’t see that often neat
9/13/2023 c1 
7Mr. Freeman
Impressive. Please, keep this story, going, I really hope you won't take a long time like Geo. What I want to see eventually, is Lincoln getting a defense familiar on his birthday.. a shy but cute defense familiar, kinda like Kon from Tokyo Ravens.
7Mr. FreemanImpressive. Please, keep this story, going, I really hope you won't take a long time like Geo. What I want to see eventually, is Lincoln getting a defense familiar on his birthday.. a shy but cute defense familiar, kinda like Kon from Tokyo Ravens.
9/12/2023 c1 63Geo Soul
Uhhhhh Dude I'm flattered and All but You forgot to also Credit Aegis999 after all he's my Co-writer and gets equal billing but other then that the story is decent but its still a tad TOO similar to TA so for chapter 2 try making a few changes and adding in some differences to help it stand out more that way no one would think you're ripping it off.
63Geo SoulUhhhhh Dude I'm flattered and All but You forgot to also Credit Aegis999 after all he's my Co-writer and gets equal billing but other then that the story is decent but its still a tad TOO similar to TA so for chapter 2 try making a few changes and adding in some differences to help it stand out more that way no one would think you're ripping it off.