for Remnant's Serrated Sun7/17/2024 c6 ulttoanova
I enjoyed this, I hope you continue it. I don't have much else to say though.
I enjoyed this, I hope you continue it. I don't have much else to say though.
3/15/2024 c6 BNGR
I really do wish that you are able to continue writing this. Ive genuinely enjoyed reading this.
I really do wish that you are able to continue writing this. Ive genuinely enjoyed reading this.
2/6/2024 c6 PJSch
Cant say anything about Argel Tal, but the Fight was Great and Satisfying to me, am a bit miffed that Argel wont get to use more Glavanus Parts for his Outfit tho and please give us more it is such a great read
Cant say anything about Argel Tal, but the Fight was Great and Satisfying to me, am a bit miffed that Argel wont get to use more Glavanus Parts for his Outfit tho and please give us more it is such a great read
12/29/2023 c6 Ree
First I would like to address my previously posted comments.
After re-reading them, I found them erratic at best, and almost contradictory at worst. So I shall endeavor to post more streamlined comments.
As for your question. I indeed agree that you do Argel great justice… yet I only ask that you add in a tinge a cynicism and hate into the character, and direct those strong emotions towards Erebus… for, while he indeed has been purged of Chaotic taint, a few lingering “side effects” would be pleasant to view, and that few would not hate Erebus for such a terrible betrayal. To see him outgrow those things over time and eventually mature into a saint-like, yet still human character (like the persons from the literature of Dostoevsky who often battle quite frankly TERRIBLE thoughts, impulses, and desires) would also be interesting. This is just some food-for-thought for yourself and the general audience to consider. I pray blessings upon you and wish you luck in your endeavors in both FF and in the real world. Toddles!
First I would like to address my previously posted comments.
After re-reading them, I found them erratic at best, and almost contradictory at worst. So I shall endeavor to post more streamlined comments.
As for your question. I indeed agree that you do Argel great justice… yet I only ask that you add in a tinge a cynicism and hate into the character, and direct those strong emotions towards Erebus… for, while he indeed has been purged of Chaotic taint, a few lingering “side effects” would be pleasant to view, and that few would not hate Erebus for such a terrible betrayal. To see him outgrow those things over time and eventually mature into a saint-like, yet still human character (like the persons from the literature of Dostoevsky who often battle quite frankly TERRIBLE thoughts, impulses, and desires) would also be interesting. This is just some food-for-thought for yourself and the general audience to consider. I pray blessings upon you and wish you luck in your endeavors in both FF and in the real world. Toddles!
12/17/2023 c3 
1MercenaryGrok
Extremely rare I follow stories, but when I do… They arr usually really well crafted. Thanks man! I hope for your success in the future!
1MercenaryGrokExtremely rare I follow stories, but when I do… They arr usually really well crafted. Thanks man! I hope for your success in the future!
12/17/2023 c6 benjadu22
well that was a good plea, for my part I feel that it was just enough, and for Algiers it's the same, I haven't read all the books of the horus heresy and worse from what I know about Algiers you are doing well, keep it up
well that was a good plea, for my part I feel that it was just enough, and for Algiers it's the same, I haven't read all the books of the horus heresy and worse from what I know about Algiers you are doing well, keep it up
11/14/2023 c1 Ree
Mind you, they are only 40x stronger compared to 40k Marines, since 29k/30k Marines are 50% stronger that factor is then halved.
Mind you, they are only 40x stronger compared to 40k Marines, since 29k/30k Marines are 50% stronger that factor is then halved.