4/26 c75 6TheRuinsOfRl'yeh
Fully expecting Qrow to start calling Maria the remnant equivalent of Mrs Robinson, tbh

4/21 c1 2OcciNNiccO
How dose Qrow know lionheart is a traitor
If he was poisoned before getting to the other academy

4/19 c74 VGice
Rip Couer He will be missed. 1935-2025 Ceur Al'Arlon

4/15 c45 Robbler
Hm.
Interesting take.
You obviously accounted for the butterfly effect by having gradual changes that Qriw just cannot control, which is absolutely awesome. Far too many stories tend to treat time travel as a simple "do over".
You also manage to catch the adequate level of humor/drama, which makes this feel quite similar to RWBY (not perfectly the same, but then again it doesn't have to be).

On the other hand, you have him change his weapon, which is one of the few things he can control. Argueably, he wouldn't, at least from my perspective. He knows what is coming and Qrow was always a practical character. Why change his weapon if he has the experience of a life time with his previous one, knowing he will fight for his life sooner or later?
It just feels off to me, but I guess it's perfectly normal for 2 people to understand a character differently.

Him trusting fate with creating his team once again felt off too. He doesn't want to hurt Willow and I can respect that, but Team STRQ was his lifeline. His entire reason for doing all of this was to recreate his team, his family. He even disregarded how his info could help Ozpin in the long run, because he placed his team above that.
Just saying, it's a little weird he'd not decide on creating his team if he had the power and opportunity to do so.

I the same sense, his reaction is far too tame. To him, he just lost out on his family. You portrayed him as shocked and sad over it, but in my opinion he'd be broken.
Every action in his second life so far was more or less to recreate what he knew and he just lost that. His dream, his goal.

All of that being said, you are without a doubt the biggest and best RWBY ff writer on this site and I acknowledge that. The setting is good, pacing is perfectly well done and you generally have good handle on the finer details of characters we know next to nothing about. I actually only ever found one mistake some 20 pages ago where you used "him" instead of "her".

I hope to see you continue writing stories in the years to come.
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And don't let nasty vampires bite ya.

Robbler out.

4/12 c74 Guest
Time and place, Raven. Time and place. Even she admits she deserved that hit from Summer.

The girls are pissed at Qrow.

Qrow has some 'splaining to do. It'll be easier now that the VSS came up with his cover story for him.

Qrow seems to have duped Ozpin successfully.

Oz and Maria get ready to go to work. Wonder if we'll get more of Ozpin's underworld contacts than an offhand mention.

4/12 c74 Guest
He knows how to fool Ozpin, but not how to fool those around him.

A bit of a problem considering how the pieces are falling outside of this incident... Especially if the spies take a notice and look into Ozpin or him into them.

4/12 c74 Guest
Maria kind of reminds me of Raven from Relic of the Future. I feel like Qrow is going to end up in a scenario where he’s forced to spill, or the relic of knowledge will come into play.