for A Ruinous Gift5/7 c27 ScientistXxXxX
SilviaNorton's analysis of this story in WormFanfic reddit really puts all the crap you dispaly in this fic to light and in your other fics by association and same elementd too really
SilviaNorton's analysis of this story in WormFanfic reddit really puts all the crap you dispaly in this fic to light and in your other fics by association and same elementd too really
4/29 c27 michaelfriede61
You know what I would love to see? Your Harry Potter and Luna wreaking havoc on Worm. The endbringers can hit other cities and ignore Brockton Bay because frankly why not? and thus as you said in your A/N they can be treated as over the horizon problems.
I also think that this story could have continued fine if the Endbringers didn't hit BB. They didn't have to, Eidolon doesn't have subconscious control over where they hit, the shard does the decision making for the autonomous weapons platforms (the Endbringers). Just, as you said, lessons learned.
You know what I would love to see? Your Harry Potter and Luna wreaking havoc on Worm. The endbringers can hit other cities and ignore Brockton Bay because frankly why not? and thus as you said in your A/N they can be treated as over the horizon problems.
I also think that this story could have continued fine if the Endbringers didn't hit BB. They didn't have to, Eidolon doesn't have subconscious control over where they hit, the shard does the decision making for the autonomous weapons platforms (the Endbringers). Just, as you said, lessons learned.
4/26 c1 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo mi vida hermosa
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo mi vida hermosa
4/26 c2 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo mi vida ️ te amo
Dios te bendiga Jesús te amo mi vida ️ te amo
4/17 c17 
53ack1308
Loving the fic so far.
Came here on someone's recommendation, and I'm rather enjoying it.
Kind of a funhouse mirror reflection of my fic A Darker Path, with some amusingly similar story beats, while still being entirely different in tone and theme.
The bit where she took down Glory Girl and stole her tiara, for instance. Or how she encouraged Panacea to express herself more thoroughly via her power.
Will definitely be reading on.
53ack1308Loving the fic so far.
Came here on someone's recommendation, and I'm rather enjoying it.
Kind of a funhouse mirror reflection of my fic A Darker Path, with some amusingly similar story beats, while still being entirely different in tone and theme.
The bit where she took down Glory Girl and stole her tiara, for instance. Or how she encouraged Panacea to express herself more thoroughly via her power.
Will definitely be reading on.
4/5 c26 Apatheticprince
What a journey. What an interesting premise and intense beginning. What an unmitigated disaster of an ending. You spent so long constructing an incredible story, and finish it like this? It's the literary equivalent to painstakingly baking an enormous, elaborate cake, and then haphazardly smearing it with diarrhea and calling it good enough. If you ever find yourself written into a corner like you say you feel, I would highly recommend just letting the story quietly die rather than... This. You say Taylor escalated beyond where anyone could pose a reasonable threat? You have authorial remit to simply contrive something to limit her power. I am, frankly, baffled and infuriated. Do better for any future readers you might have.
What a journey. What an interesting premise and intense beginning. What an unmitigated disaster of an ending. You spent so long constructing an incredible story, and finish it like this? It's the literary equivalent to painstakingly baking an enormous, elaborate cake, and then haphazardly smearing it with diarrhea and calling it good enough. If you ever find yourself written into a corner like you say you feel, I would highly recommend just letting the story quietly die rather than... This. You say Taylor escalated beyond where anyone could pose a reasonable threat? You have authorial remit to simply contrive something to limit her power. I am, frankly, baffled and infuriated. Do better for any future readers you might have.
3/26 c17 Malicethroughthelookingglass
"You are on this council, but we do not grant you the rank of villain "
"You are on this council, but we do not grant you the rank of villain "
3/8 c27 DiabolicGod
Not a big fan of the ending, but don't really dislike it either, and I liked the story as a whole.
Thanks for writing and posting your stories, you made quite a few of my days ;)
Not a big fan of the ending, but don't really dislike it either, and I liked the story as a whole.
Thanks for writing and posting your stories, you made quite a few of my days ;)
3/5 c27 Zenoen of Astora
Excellent story. The priest was probably my most liked character other then Taylor.
Very well done and keep up the fight many people will talk crap about a author because they don't like something they read in the story. Your stories have many fans that do enjoy them though so thanks a lot for continuing to write.
Excellent story. The priest was probably my most liked character other then Taylor.
Very well done and keep up the fight many people will talk crap about a author because they don't like something they read in the story. Your stories have many fans that do enjoy them though so thanks a lot for continuing to write.
3/3 c27 vera841
Ah I was hoping this would go on for a bit longer, but understandable if you felt that you had to end it sooner rather than later. Epilogue was excellent.
Thank you for sharing another great story.
Ah I was hoping this would go on for a bit longer, but understandable if you felt that you had to end it sooner rather than later. Epilogue was excellent.
Thank you for sharing another great story.