for Memory
2/28/2004 c3 Kate
Really good. Can't wait for more.
7/28/2003 c3 
9Lady LoreneLooking good. Gets a lttle confusing in who's talking, but still good.
7/26/2003 c3 28Nice-oneThis is a nice story. I like the idea. You might wanna make the chapters a bit longer though. And you would probably get more reviews if you would except anonymous reviews, but I guess that's up to you.
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