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4/2 c29 Iersseltje
Wow, that took a twist. At first I suspected that Edward had killed Rosalie, in kind of the same manner.
Great story. Thank you for sharing.
3/12 c29 Guest
All the fucking drama happened right at the end.
3/9 c28 sue1zide
I’m missing something here. What did he mean when he said, “They can’t know “?
3/9 c14 sue1zide
Since she has blackouts maybe she could be considered one of the suspects.
3/9 c13 sue1zide
Doesn’t she remember that she is a married woman? Slut.
Edward is a widower.
3/9 c10 sue1zide
She pisses me off. When does she spend time with her kids or go to the hospital to see her husband?
She has a maid/childcarer and admitted that she doesn’t like to do homework with her kids.
I’m not a fan of this Bella.
Don’t get me started on Edward.
3/9 c9 sue1zide
The way that they’re acting I would think that they conspired against their spouses.
3/1 c30 2TwilightLoverGirl1
Omg this was amazing! I just read the entire thing in a day and it is now 7 am the next day. I suspect a few times that either Bella or Edward was also there that night but i was still shook by thethey can’t knowconversation. Absolutely amazing love it. Im also reading Invisible Strings and that also has me captivated
12/16/2024 c13 Just Sus
Uh-oh! I hope they don't get blamed for EmRose because they're in a relationship. She needs to remember that Emmett is still technically alive and they are still married, even tho' Edward is now a widower! Will Emmett ever wake up?
12/12/2024 c29 marigold123
I thought Bella was the one who killed Rosalie. Admittedly it was to save Emmett. It was the least he (Emmett) could do was to admit to killing Rosalie. Emmett couldn’t be faithful and he needed to let Bella go. I’m glad Bella found happiness with Edward. Thank you for writing.
12/12/2024 c22 marigold123
I’m still thinking somehow Bella was involved in the shooting. I’m not sure why Emmett thinks things will continue normally after his affairs were made public. I feel bad for the kids. Thank you for writing.
12/12/2024 c19 marigold123
I think Renee is obviously a horrible mother…I also think Bella has serious issues. Thank you for writing.
12/11/2024 c12 marigold123
Oh man! I kinda saw that coming. Poor Edward. Thank you for writing.
12/11/2024 c5 marigold123
I’ve been reading and enjoying your story. I don’t think Edward shot Rosalie…but maybe Bella did in one of her blackouts? Just a guess! Reading on. Thank you for writing.
11/24/2024 c29 6Stazwrites
wow nicely done. I was not really surprised with the ending with all the hints within the story... but wanted to know how exactly it must have happened. There are a few flaws here and there but this is fiction so it doesn't matter lol.
Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

With a few edits, may be you could even publish this.

-stz
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