for Family is More Than Blood4/23 c72 SurprisinglyMuggle
I am loving the pace of this fic so far. I usually read stories which are already conpleted and dont know how ibstarted this, but I'm glad i did. Though I am frustrated to not have it completed already. I can clearly see the growth and development in your write-up over time and can't wait to see how it will be altered as per your plot points.
I am loving the pace of this fic so far. I usually read stories which are already conpleted and dont know how ibstarted this, but I'm glad i did. Though I am frustrated to not have it completed already. I can clearly see the growth and development in your write-up over time and can't wait to see how it will be altered as per your plot points.
4/23 c72 scrappy8
great chapter poor Harry getting on the wrong side of his sisters
great chapter poor Harry getting on the wrong side of his sisters
4/22 c72 
1Nightwing2013
A modern Izzy! Nice bait- and- switch! I got really angry for a moment. From a “Voldemort is a terrorist” perspective, imperiusing a double-decker bus to try to ram Shacklebolt (or even the Leaky) would be absolutely diabolical.
Your balance between characters is an amazing feature, and I’m sure it’s difficult to sprinkle only 3 or 4 scenes per chapter, each from a different POV. Unfortunately, this balance tends to make the chapter seem shorter to me. I might just be spoiled and impatient, though.
The dream sequence with the Kenobis was interesting. Is this just a taste of the training that thw Champions are giving him, or was this a first session of its kind?
1Nightwing2013A modern Izzy! Nice bait- and- switch! I got really angry for a moment. From a “Voldemort is a terrorist” perspective, imperiusing a double-decker bus to try to ram Shacklebolt (or even the Leaky) would be absolutely diabolical.
Your balance between characters is an amazing feature, and I’m sure it’s difficult to sprinkle only 3 or 4 scenes per chapter, each from a different POV. Unfortunately, this balance tends to make the chapter seem shorter to me. I might just be spoiled and impatient, though.
The dream sequence with the Kenobis was interesting. Is this just a taste of the training that thw Champions are giving him, or was this a first session of its kind?
4/16 c52 Sunshinetexan
Love the story! But I loose track of some of the information you put in chapters. Are you able to post some of the information again or in a later chapter. I forget which god is in charge of what, what the 10 elements are, and the requirements for magehood among other things.
Love the story! But I loose track of some of the information you put in chapters. Are you able to post some of the information again or in a later chapter. I forget which god is in charge of what, what the 10 elements are, and the requirements for magehood among other things.
4/9 c9 Robin9139
I'm at chapter 9, but with the food sacrifice to the gods, what if the meal is poisoned? Would the gods know? Would a god that favours Harry protect him from the poison? Would they be offended?
I'm going far too deep into this, but I love what I've read so far :)
I'm at chapter 9, but with the food sacrifice to the gods, what if the meal is poisoned? Would the gods know? Would a god that favours Harry protect him from the poison? Would they be offended?
I'm going far too deep into this, but I love what I've read so far :)
3/27 c71 scrappy8
great chapter I hope Sirius is going to be okay
great chapter I hope Sirius is going to be okay
3/27 c71 GreengrassRebel
Voldemort only engages when he has the advantage, smart if cowardly. Some people would doubt that after everything there would be non-death eater sympathizers that would hate the Consortium, and those people clearly haven't been around teenagers. When confronted with such complicated situations many lash out. What they said about Cho was horrendous, and again, people do say horrible things. Great that Trixie and Angie are bonding. And good touch that in canon Emmeline and Madame Bones die around this time (or a month or two down the line) and in this version they suffered yet still sith us. Cocoa is such a nice name for a familiar
Voldemort only engages when he has the advantage, smart if cowardly. Some people would doubt that after everything there would be non-death eater sympathizers that would hate the Consortium, and those people clearly haven't been around teenagers. When confronted with such complicated situations many lash out. What they said about Cho was horrendous, and again, people do say horrible things. Great that Trixie and Angie are bonding. And good touch that in canon Emmeline and Madame Bones die around this time (or a month or two down the line) and in this version they suffered yet still sith us. Cocoa is such a nice name for a familiar
3/26 c68 1Nightwing2013
Beautiful!
The drama at school just won’t let up, will it? Ugh. I dislike ignorance and pettiness.
The battle on the other hand sounds like actual combat, with fast-pacing and limited viewpoints. Was that green lightning an elementally modified killing curse or some kind of electricity and wind combo?
Here’s to hoping that Madam Bones will survive.
Hope to see you soon! Keep up the good work!
1Nightwing2013Beautiful!
The drama at school just won’t let up, will it? Ugh. I dislike ignorance and pettiness.
The battle on the other hand sounds like actual combat, with fast-pacing and limited viewpoints. Was that green lightning an elementally modified killing curse or some kind of electricity and wind combo?
Here’s to hoping that Madam Bones will survive.
Hope to see you soon! Keep up the good work!
3/16 c1 john2406
hey so I'm not really sure if you read these or not but I love your fanfics and I've decided to finally write my own thank you for being one of the authors that inspired me to do so if you have any input or ideas of things I should write please hmu
hey so I'm not really sure if you read these or not but I love your fanfics and I've decided to finally write my own thank you for being one of the authors that inspired me to do so if you have any input or ideas of things I should write please hmu