for A Gacha Addict in the One Piece World!14h c92 Mugen-Muse
Yeah, Captain Luffy has a good point.
Honestly, Sabo with any Devil Fruit has the potential to be OP if he can thoroughly leverage the fruit's power. Probably.
Yeah, Captain Luffy has a good point.
Honestly, Sabo with any Devil Fruit has the potential to be OP if he can thoroughly leverage the fruit's power. Probably.
5/17 c92 supboyyyyy93
I'm surprised Brynlee didn't tell Nami and Sanji about Nojiko and Zeff, that would've been crazy to see their reactions. If I was Brynlee, I would've been really freaked out, especially with Nojiko. Imagine seeing someone you've known for years as an older sister for years only to realize it's been an illusion that whole time and suddenly remember that he was your brother along. I'm surprised she hasn't been questioning if everything was in the right universe or something like that. Honestly, I don't really care if Brynlee reveals the gamer system or not. I don't think it's really relevant to the straw hats anyways. As for Sabo, I'd go with clear clear para. Invisibility just means free haki powered punches to the face, lol. Haki Logia Paramecia
I'm surprised Brynlee didn't tell Nami and Sanji about Nojiko and Zeff, that would've been crazy to see their reactions. If I was Brynlee, I would've been really freaked out, especially with Nojiko. Imagine seeing someone you've known for years as an older sister for years only to realize it's been an illusion that whole time and suddenly remember that he was your brother along. I'm surprised she hasn't been questioning if everything was in the right universe or something like that. Honestly, I don't really care if Brynlee reveals the gamer system or not. I don't think it's really relevant to the straw hats anyways. As for Sabo, I'd go with clear clear para. Invisibility just means free haki powered punches to the face, lol. Haki Logia Paramecia
5/17 c92 LairaCapulet
Nich Chapter. i know i didn't comment in a long while. But i still enjoy the story very much. I tend to wait for a lot of chapters to accumulate as i read relatively fast.
if we have to choose and that are the only option than i think Lightning would be a more op. Resons why: Enhanced hearing which would be great fir spying. Clear would be good for that as well But considering who he would have to spy on its to assume that they have haki so there's a high chance he could be sensed. With the lightning (if we talke about enel) he could be out of reach and still hear them. same applies to battle he could be sensed and depending on the environment a silhouette may be seen. with lightning he can sip in and out in a flash. only high level Kenbusho haki would be able to predict where he appears.
Personaly i would choose neather as the seem to be a boring and to strait forward in approach and are taken by story relevent characters. If its for the story: you already changed Blackbeard. if you change up that as well you could make it way harder for yourself to make the story make sense.
If i would give him a fruit i think I'd go with something strange that seems harmless but has extrem damage potential. Like sound. Seem pretty harmless at first but right frequency and bam.
Or how about something extremely strange like the ability to controll the sphincter of living beings. It could be a suprise taktic in battle (enemy suddenly has to poop) or a torture method if someone isn't allowed to. A other idea would be total controll over Hair. (Growing and everything from every one) Just saying most people have hair somewhere on ther body. That would be different and if used correctly still op.
Well thats my opinion.
Nich Chapter. i know i didn't comment in a long while. But i still enjoy the story very much. I tend to wait for a lot of chapters to accumulate as i read relatively fast.
if we have to choose and that are the only option than i think Lightning would be a more op. Resons why: Enhanced hearing which would be great fir spying. Clear would be good for that as well But considering who he would have to spy on its to assume that they have haki so there's a high chance he could be sensed. With the lightning (if we talke about enel) he could be out of reach and still hear them. same applies to battle he could be sensed and depending on the environment a silhouette may be seen. with lightning he can sip in and out in a flash. only high level Kenbusho haki would be able to predict where he appears.
Personaly i would choose neather as the seem to be a boring and to strait forward in approach and are taken by story relevent characters. If its for the story: you already changed Blackbeard. if you change up that as well you could make it way harder for yourself to make the story make sense.
If i would give him a fruit i think I'd go with something strange that seems harmless but has extrem damage potential. Like sound. Seem pretty harmless at first but right frequency and bam.
Or how about something extremely strange like the ability to controll the sphincter of living beings. It could be a suprise taktic in battle (enemy suddenly has to poop) or a torture method if someone isn't allowed to. A other idea would be total controll over Hair. (Growing and everything from every one) Just saying most people have hair somewhere on ther body. That would be different and if used correctly still op.
Well thats my opinion.
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10Marcii Winters
No, yeah, while Sabo with the Rumble Rumble fruit would be incredibly overpowered, narratively, he would benefit more from gaining the Clear Clear fruit
He's already pretty heckin powerful with just his Haki so really, a fruit to help him with his Revolutionary work would probably work best
Although, from what I understand, the Clear Clear fruit only really hides someone from visual sight so working in the New World or in Mariejois would still be incredibly risky with all the powerful Observation Haki users there
This is more a question of whether you want to write Sabo as fearsome power in the world (thus the Rumble Fruit) or whether you want to focus more on his sneaky revolutionary activities (thus the Clear fruit)
10Marcii WintersNo, yeah, while Sabo with the Rumble Rumble fruit would be incredibly overpowered, narratively, he would benefit more from gaining the Clear Clear fruit
He's already pretty heckin powerful with just his Haki so really, a fruit to help him with his Revolutionary work would probably work best
Although, from what I understand, the Clear Clear fruit only really hides someone from visual sight so working in the New World or in Mariejois would still be incredibly risky with all the powerful Observation Haki users there
This is more a question of whether you want to write Sabo as fearsome power in the world (thus the Rumble Fruit) or whether you want to focus more on his sneaky revolutionary activities (thus the Clear fruit)
5/14 c91 supboyyyyy93
So, that's what Vivi found, lol. I was wondering what was it that made Nami so angry at Brynlee. Busted, can't wait for next chapter to see how she'll explain this one.
So, that's what Vivi found, lol. I was wondering what was it that made Nami so angry at Brynlee. Busted, can't wait for next chapter to see how she'll explain this one.
5/9 c1 Nyra Callen
Hi, I'm Nyra Callen ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!
Hi, I'm Nyra Callen ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!
5/5 c1 Jessiparkee
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story paints such a rich and immersive picture, full of visual potential just waiting to be brought to life. I’d love to help translate that into a cover that not only reflects the heart of your work but invites others into it at first glance. Whether it’s capturing the intensity of a climactic moment or the quiet power of a single, emotional beat, your story deserves a visual that does it justice..
As I was reading, I couldn’t help but see the world unfolding so vividly in my mind the emotions, the atmosphere, the rhythm of each moment. Your story paints such a rich and immersive picture, full of visual potential just waiting to be brought to life. I’d love to help translate that into a cover that not only reflects the heart of your work but invites others into it at first glance. Whether it’s capturing the intensity of a climactic moment or the quiet power of a single, emotional beat, your story deserves a visual that does it justice..
5/1 c1 Galagiri
I quite adore the concept of a Randomizer. Nothing worse than an SI bitching and moaning about only~ being an Uchiha, Senju Uzumaki with canon knowledge and decades of mental experience on top of their peers. No, they need more, more, more! Truly, those "authors" seem to write for the sole purpose of edging themselves off in the most inconvenient way possible.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to this story.
I quite adore the concept of a Randomizer. Nothing worse than an SI bitching and moaning about only~ being an Uchiha, Senju Uzumaki with canon knowledge and decades of mental experience on top of their peers. No, they need more, more, more! Truly, those "authors" seem to write for the sole purpose of edging themselves off in the most inconvenient way possible.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to this story.