for Legacy of the Basilisk6/12 c51 Fenrir070
Outstanding! I really can't wait to see what you do with the various planes being "opened" to Harry now. I'm definitely wondering what the Khan will think of Harry's "dimension hopping iron horse", the brothers may be getting a lucrative order in the future... More fun characters introduced in this chapter while old favorites also make an appearance. Thanks for writing and posting.
Outstanding! I really can't wait to see what you do with the various planes being "opened" to Harry now. I'm definitely wondering what the Khan will think of Harry's "dimension hopping iron horse", the brothers may be getting a lucrative order in the future... More fun characters introduced in this chapter while old favorites also make an appearance. Thanks for writing and posting.
6/12 c51 QuarrroX
As always, amazing chapter, new theories and the situation unravels, cant wait to see more, I would love to see some development of Hadrian’s bond with girls and the new lady, maybe some Black Family time? And most importantly, when will Hadrian realize who he really is? What the retribution from Fate for his kill of Zorasomthing will be? Great work, have a nice day
As always, amazing chapter, new theories and the situation unravels, cant wait to see more, I would love to see some development of Hadrian’s bond with girls and the new lady, maybe some Black Family time? And most importantly, when will Hadrian realize who he really is? What the retribution from Fate for his kill of Zorasomthing will be? Great work, have a nice day
6/6 c50 ninja4643
hi i just have a question when are you going to update this story i like this story very much thank you signed the ninja
hi i just have a question when are you going to update this story i like this story very much thank you signed the ninja
5/19 c1 LongWang
Man sry but it looks like you took chinese fanfic and erased some parts and the rest was written by AI… I really like the idea and character develpoment and everything it is just horrifying to read. Still thanks for effort
Man sry but it looks like you took chinese fanfic and erased some parts and the rest was written by AI… I really like the idea and character develpoment and everything it is just horrifying to read. Still thanks for effort
5/14 c8 
18Otspock
I am sorry, I was really enjoying your story, but the last two chapters have been very difficult to read because of the frequent tense changes. I will try to keep reading, but it is really bothering me.
18OtspockI am sorry, I was really enjoying your story, but the last two chapters have been very difficult to read because of the frequent tense changes. I will try to keep reading, but it is really bothering me.
5/1 c2 Tsaimath
Wait, "nothing like this happened in the Wizarding world for fifty years"
So Voldemort's first rise, ending about eleven years ago was what? A hallucination?
I'm the first to admit my dislike of Ron but this is a little... Blergh
Wait, "nothing like this happened in the Wizarding world for fifty years"
So Voldemort's first rise, ending about eleven years ago was what? A hallucination?
I'm the first to admit my dislike of Ron but this is a little... Blergh
4/26 c50 Fenrir070
Well, if there was one way that could possibly make "your" Harry any cooler you've gone and done it by giving him the baddest bike in existence. Speaking as a life long biker I heartily approve and endorse this. Sister Maribel is rapidly becoming one of my favorites which is saying something as you've brought so many awesome characters (good, evil and neutral) to life in this work it practically screams for it's own wiki. Loved the surprise at the end and looking forward to seeing just how it turns out. Thanks for writing and posting.
Well, if there was one way that could possibly make "your" Harry any cooler you've gone and done it by giving him the baddest bike in existence. Speaking as a life long biker I heartily approve and endorse this. Sister Maribel is rapidly becoming one of my favorites which is saying something as you've brought so many awesome characters (good, evil and neutral) to life in this work it practically screams for it's own wiki. Loved the surprise at the end and looking forward to seeing just how it turns out. Thanks for writing and posting.
4/25 c50 Guest
Thank you for this new chapter.
Thank you for this new chapter.
4/25 c1 Celestialcanvas
Hi wolf970 ,
I recently came across your story and was truly impressed it has so much potential for visual adaptation. The way you’ve built the characters and scenes really stood out, and I couldn’t help but picture it as a comic or animation.
I'm a professional artist, and I specialize in creating high-quality comics and animations on a commission basis. If you ever consider bringing your story to life visually, I’d love to chat about the possibilities and my rates.
Feel free to reach out anytime:
Email: celestialcanvas000 gmail .com
Discord: celestialcanvas000
Twitter: celes_canvas_
Looking forward to your response!
Warm regards,
Celestial
Hi wolf970 ,
I recently came across your story and was truly impressed it has so much potential for visual adaptation. The way you’ve built the characters and scenes really stood out, and I couldn’t help but picture it as a comic or animation.
I'm a professional artist, and I specialize in creating high-quality comics and animations on a commission basis. If you ever consider bringing your story to life visually, I’d love to chat about the possibilities and my rates.
Feel free to reach out anytime:
Email: celestialcanvas000 gmail .com
Discord: celestialcanvas000
Twitter: celes_canvas_
Looking forward to your response!
Warm regards,
Celestial
4/24 c49 ZH99
so here's one thing I've been wondering for a bit, given how you're putting some 40k into the mix and how BIG astartes can be. How tall is Harry gonna get? Is he gonna be like a magical master chief thats gonna be 7feet tall and built like a truck? cause that would be pretty cool. I mean he's come out taller every time hes come out of the stone circle, as of now he's 6' tall and he's still 13/14, he's entering puberty and he still has tons more to grow. Im sure people would like to know if its going in that direction. I mean I can already see him being 7'4" and with the armor he'll probably be taller. But just wondering.
so here's one thing I've been wondering for a bit, given how you're putting some 40k into the mix and how BIG astartes can be. How tall is Harry gonna get? Is he gonna be like a magical master chief thats gonna be 7feet tall and built like a truck? cause that would be pretty cool. I mean he's come out taller every time hes come out of the stone circle, as of now he's 6' tall and he's still 13/14, he's entering puberty and he still has tons more to grow. Im sure people would like to know if its going in that direction. I mean I can already see him being 7'4" and with the armor he'll probably be taller. But just wondering.
4/18 c49 BillBrink
You are an amazing wordsmith. I love your descriptions. I'm guessing you were/are a gamer by some of the terms you use and your description of your AU. It is well done.
I also appreciate your use of numbering short chapters since you post such long sections of your story. This enables me to be able to break away and find my place without difficulty later.
Really, the only problem I have is your use of so many OCs. I sometimes get lost when they reappear because I don't remember their character.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
You are an amazing wordsmith. I love your descriptions. I'm guessing you were/are a gamer by some of the terms you use and your description of your AU. It is well done.
I also appreciate your use of numbering short chapters since you post such long sections of your story. This enables me to be able to break away and find my place without difficulty later.
Really, the only problem I have is your use of so many OCs. I sometimes get lost when they reappear because I don't remember their character.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
4/18 c49 Guest
Thank you for posting this well written chapter.
Thank you for posting this well written chapter.
4/18 c41 2Aceofspades2255
Only issue I have is that military nicknames are 99.99% insulting by nature. So like instead of “god” for a marksman/ sniper. Give him like pork chop causes he’s a hungry bastard that’s eats to many pork chops or has a weird obsession with them. Fuck my buddy was nicknamed firehose cause he got drunk and pissed himself in front of the whole unit. It’s little things like that. Or John McPhee was delta and he was nicknamed shrek. It’s little details like that that add humanity to terrible moments. And it’s funny to see what talented authors can come up with.
2Aceofspades2255Only issue I have is that military nicknames are 99.99% insulting by nature. So like instead of “god” for a marksman/ sniper. Give him like pork chop causes he’s a hungry bastard that’s eats to many pork chops or has a weird obsession with them. Fuck my buddy was nicknamed firehose cause he got drunk and pissed himself in front of the whole unit. It’s little things like that. Or John McPhee was delta and he was nicknamed shrek. It’s little details like that that add humanity to terrible moments. And it’s funny to see what talented authors can come up with.
4/18 c49 Fenrir070
It was a hell of an experience reading this chapter. Had some of everything except romance and it was all done well enough to pull you in and not let you go until you read the last sentence. I believe I've said it before but I'll reiterate that you've got a fantastic way with descriptive phrases - "...silver so pure it reflect lies as distortions." or "rooted like an ancient tree still standing through countless storms." are two that caught my attention. Fantastic talent with that and a great "naming sense" which I've always admired in authors like Glen Cook's "Garrett" series and "The Black Company" series very different series but both with exceptional people/place/thing names. Some authors write a fantastic story but just ...fail when it comes to names. You've definitely got the knack so kudos to you. Can't wait to read more about the Iron Nun. I was going to compare her to an aging Clint Eastwood like Gunny Highway from "Heartbreak Ridge" but then she went and got "upgraded and renewed" which makes her even more badass. Great work, thanks for writing and posting. P.S. Loved the nod to Fenrir's bike at the gnome brother's shop.
It was a hell of an experience reading this chapter. Had some of everything except romance and it was all done well enough to pull you in and not let you go until you read the last sentence. I believe I've said it before but I'll reiterate that you've got a fantastic way with descriptive phrases - "...silver so pure it reflect lies as distortions." or "rooted like an ancient tree still standing through countless storms." are two that caught my attention. Fantastic talent with that and a great "naming sense" which I've always admired in authors like Glen Cook's "Garrett" series and "The Black Company" series very different series but both with exceptional people/place/thing names. Some authors write a fantastic story but just ...fail when it comes to names. You've definitely got the knack so kudos to you. Can't wait to read more about the Iron Nun. I was going to compare her to an aging Clint Eastwood like Gunny Highway from "Heartbreak Ridge" but then she went and got "upgraded and renewed" which makes her even more badass. Great work, thanks for writing and posting. P.S. Loved the nod to Fenrir's bike at the gnome brother's shop.