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1/19 c3 Sideways8
I didn't like some of the names I came up with and decided revamp them.

Ripjaws- Creep Dive
Wildmutt - Pound Dog
Upgrade - Wreck-nology
Wildvine - Guy Trap
Spitter - Puffer Freak
Buzzshock - Watts Up
Frankenstrike - Die Voltage
Upchuck - Flung-lashing

Also I love your work please keep writing
1/19 c3 5SilverXSilver
I absolutely loved the way you portrayed the whole frenemy relationship between Garp and Roger. easily one of my favorite parts of the chapter. though the reveal that Ben is part of this worlds history and had some influence on Joy Boy was also a crazy reveal I wasn't expecting. I can't wait to see how you expand on this in the future! You got something real interesting in the makings here!
1/19 c3 jabari.lewis237
Great story and what an interesting take for certain change of events. Please take your time quality of quantity.
1/19 c3 2itspowertime
This was a great chapter and a good start for luffy's way into becoming the pirate king, although it may be even more complicated. Moving on, devil fruits exist cause of the Codon Stream, that's clever, wonder if they'll be other fruits based on the aliens or vice versa.

Also, will Luffy eat or not the Nika Fruit? I know it would make him too OP (Even if he's too good natured and dumb) but still, the world needs Joy Boy. Or will he have him as a transformation?
So then the question remains... Who will become the warrior of liberation?

Finally and most shocking. There was a Ben Tennyson here?! And what happened to him. I suspect the WG thought he was a threat and took care of him.
1/18 c3 GameMax10
Holy shit this was so gooood
Ben 10 being the Past of One Piece, Jesus Christ that's awesome!
Now Luffy gonna travel with Shanks? Oh boy can't wait!
12/4/2023 c2 itspowertime
This, is interesting. I LOVE IT! This is a very eye catching of what if Luffy got the omnitrix. It has been done, true. But getting it when he was young makes it look better than getting it when he's already developed the Gum Gum fruit's powers. Also, anothe thing I appreciated is Garp knowing about the pyronites. Does that mean Garp is aplumber or are the Plumbers liek the Marines? I wanna know more.

Also, is Luffy gonna eat the Gum Gum fruit (seeing that it's existant is very integral to the plot later on)

Whith that I bid goodbye and a whole truck of kudos to you, hope to see more.
11/8/2023 c2 jabari.lewis237
Great chapter so is there no more pirates and marines? Also gomu gomu where is the fruit. I mean if the omnitrix found him then why not the fruit as it is said to have a will of it's own like other devil fruits. So would it not also find luffy.
11/2/2023 c1 Sideways8
I felt like coming up with some names for Luffy's aliens. Just thought it be fun.

Original - New Name

Ripjaws - Crocjaws
Wildmutt - Wolfwrath
Ghostfreak - Frightmare
Grey Matter - Brainiac
Four Arms - Cuatro Man
Stinkfly - Stinkbomb
Heatblast - Hothead
Diamondhead - Rock Solid
Upgrade - Mechanize
XLR8 - Speed-Star
Cannonbolt - Rolldozer
Wildvine - Root Hack
Spitter - Spit Valve
Buzzshock - Electricky
Arctiguana - Absolute Zilla
Blitzwolfer - Howlitzer
Snare-oh - En-strangle
Frankenstrike - Mortal Coil
Upchuck - Regurgi-Gate
Ditto - Copy Brat
Eye Guy - Eyefright
Way Big - Supersize
10/31/2023 c2 GameMax10
Holy shit Shanks is a plumber!?
10/30/2023 c2 5SilverXSilver
I'm definitely curious to see how you'll be incorporating the Plumbers into the One Piece world. Are they exclusively Marines, like a secret branch of the Navy? I can't wait to see.

Also, we definitely cannot allow Luffy to name his aliens, or we'll be stuck with 'Fire-guy' and 'Fast-guy'.

One of the transformations I'm most interested in seeing has got to be Grey Matter. Like...a smart Luffy. Even just saying it out loud is strange.

Keep up the good work!
10/30/2023 c2 Sideways8
Please don't tell me Luffy names his aliens. Everyone knows how bad he is at naming things
10/30/2023 c2 Trueopulence
So shanks is here, does Uta exist?
10/28/2023 c1 jabari.lewis237
This looks like it will be a great story but where is the gomu gomu fruit after all the devil fruits have a will of there own so the gomu gomu no mi fuit should come soon it did indeed find luffy
10/27/2023 c1 9Drake G. Reaper
Gotta ask does Luffy's Gum-Gum abilities carry over to his aliens because that could be a lot of fun to see.
10/26/2023 c1 Trueopulence
Luffy with the Omnitrix is definitely an interesting premise as for the rails of canon with this type of crossover it might be non existent

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