for I am here12/25/2024 c1 Jolly Baron
Your tribute story to Bray Wyatt (Windham Rotunda) and Jon Huber (Luke Harper) captures a heartfelt and emotional reunion between two beloved figures in the wrestling world. Here’s a review of your story, highlighting its strengths and areas for improvement:
### Strengths
1. **Emotional Depth**:
- The story effectively conveys the deep sense of loss and longing that both characters feel for their families and friends. The imagery of Jon Huber sipping a beer while reminiscing about his loved ones sets a poignant tone.
2. **Meaningful Dialogue**:
- The conversation between Jon and Windham is touching and reflective. It emphasizes themes of love, faith, and the importance of cherishing relationships, which resonates well with readers who have experienced loss.
3. **Tribute to Legacy**:
- By incorporating elements of their wrestling personas and personal lives, the story pays tribute to their legacies in a respectful manner. The mention of their impact on fans and the wrestling community adds depth to the narrative.
4. **Original Song Lyrics**:
- The inclusion of the fan-made song lyrics adds a unique touch, enhancing the emotional atmosphere of the story. It serves as a fitting backdrop to the themes of living without regrets and the hope of reunion.
### Conclusion
Overall, your tribute story is a heartfelt homage to Bray Wyatt and Jon Huber, capturing the essence of their characters and the emotional weight of their legacies. With some enhancements in character development and pacing, it could resonate even more deeply with readers.
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Your tribute story to Bray Wyatt (Windham Rotunda) and Jon Huber (Luke Harper) captures a heartfelt and emotional reunion between two beloved figures in the wrestling world. Here’s a review of your story, highlighting its strengths and areas for improvement:
### Strengths
1. **Emotional Depth**:
- The story effectively conveys the deep sense of loss and longing that both characters feel for their families and friends. The imagery of Jon Huber sipping a beer while reminiscing about his loved ones sets a poignant tone.
2. **Meaningful Dialogue**:
- The conversation between Jon and Windham is touching and reflective. It emphasizes themes of love, faith, and the importance of cherishing relationships, which resonates well with readers who have experienced loss.
3. **Tribute to Legacy**:
- By incorporating elements of their wrestling personas and personal lives, the story pays tribute to their legacies in a respectful manner. The mention of their impact on fans and the wrestling community adds depth to the narrative.
4. **Original Song Lyrics**:
- The inclusion of the fan-made song lyrics adds a unique touch, enhancing the emotional atmosphere of the story. It serves as a fitting backdrop to the themes of living without regrets and the hope of reunion.
### Conclusion
Overall, your tribute story is a heartfelt homage to Bray Wyatt and Jon Huber, capturing the essence of their characters and the emotional weight of their legacies. With some enhancements in character development and pacing, it could resonate even more deeply with readers.
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4/1/2024 c1 
122otherrealmwriter
This is a sad little story here. But it was written pretty good. Nice job.
122otherrealmwriterThis is a sad little story here. But it was written pretty good. Nice job.
3/24/2024 c1 KR Duelist's Stepmom
My name is Corey Villoria nee Chase. My stepson KR Duelist aka Kristoffer Villoria is writing fanfictions and I am so proud of him !
Too his haters please stop bullying him ! He is such a good boy; helping around the house, joking around and cheering me up, and more importantly keeping my pussy warm whenever his dad is on a business trip.
Let me describe his cock; it's nine inches in length and 4 inches in girth. It's the best thing a stepmom can ask for. Like when he enters me I can't help but mewl and moan in delight. Weve done it around the house; the kitchen, the living room, and even at the porch one night when I was waiting for him to come home. The point is he is much more manlier than all of his bashers combined ! You are just jelous of him !
There was one time that I got stuck in the washing machine and like any good stepson, he helped me out by using his manly cock, stuffing it inside me, and using it as a wedge to pull me out. We then proceeded to do it in the laundry area.
I am so proud of you my darling boy ! Don't give up and keep writing those Kamen Rider fanfics !
To his bullies and haters, PM me so we can negotiate ! I am willing to do anything for him !
Chaos Control !
Praise Hyper Shadow 2024 !
I am definatly not the other handsome author I mentioned above !
eqge
My name is Corey Villoria nee Chase. My stepson KR Duelist aka Kristoffer Villoria is writing fanfictions and I am so proud of him !
Too his haters please stop bullying him ! He is such a good boy; helping around the house, joking around and cheering me up, and more importantly keeping my pussy warm whenever his dad is on a business trip.
Let me describe his cock; it's nine inches in length and 4 inches in girth. It's the best thing a stepmom can ask for. Like when he enters me I can't help but mewl and moan in delight. Weve done it around the house; the kitchen, the living room, and even at the porch one night when I was waiting for him to come home. The point is he is much more manlier than all of his bashers combined ! You are just jelous of him !
There was one time that I got stuck in the washing machine and like any good stepson, he helped me out by using his manly cock, stuffing it inside me, and using it as a wedge to pull me out. We then proceeded to do it in the laundry area.
I am so proud of you my darling boy ! Don't give up and keep writing those Kamen Rider fanfics !
To his bullies and haters, PM me so we can negotiate ! I am willing to do anything for him !
Chaos Control !
Praise Hyper Shadow 2024 !
I am definatly not the other handsome author I mentioned above !
eqge
1/2/2024 c1 Joseph Robinette Biden Jr
Shadow my awesome grandson me and the rest of our family love you very much. Stay awesome and always be good. 1234
Shadow my awesome grandson me and the rest of our family love you very much. Stay awesome and always be good. 1234
12/14/2023 c1 Jeongyeon - Shadow's Mistress
안녕하세요 하이퍼 섀도우! 이 이야기를 잘 하셨습니다! 그만둔 KDLE과는 달리 당신은 진정으로 역대 최고의 팬픽 작가입니다. 나와 여자들은 빨리 너한테 그룹 입으로 다시 한 번 해주고 싶어!3g
안녕하세요 하이퍼 섀도우! 이 이야기를 잘 하셨습니다! 그만둔 KDLE과는 달리 당신은 진정으로 역대 최고의 팬픽 작가입니다. 나와 여자들은 빨리 너한테 그룹 입으로 다시 한 번 해주고 싶어!3g
11/29/2023 c1 Ella Maria Manko
This is the best story ever ! I hope it gets a movie adaptation like the Avengers !
10/10 would suck Hyper Shadow 2023's massive big black cock over and over until I choke !
Chaos Control !
Praise Hyper Shadow 2023 ! gqgeqgee
This is the best story ever ! I hope it gets a movie adaptation like the Avengers !
10/10 would suck Hyper Shadow 2023's massive big black cock over and over until I choke !
Chaos Control !
Praise Hyper Shadow 2023 ! gqgeqgee