
6/15 c16 DragonTetho
heh another one for our boi EMIYA Sherou's harem. truly he has the scariest skill
heh another one for our boi EMIYA Sherou's harem. truly he has the scariest skill
6/15 c16 The Black Latios
Amazing job. Hope the next part is just as good. Will we see them attempting an actual summoning?
Amazing job. Hope the next part is just as good. Will we see them attempting an actual summoning?
6/15 c16 gularadato
I enjoyed reading it too. It is good thay you had fun writing it. I think a second edit would be good because there were some grammatical errors. It had a bang and an emotional ending too so that was great. Of course you cannot write Shirou without him going through a lot of physical pain and still coming up on top, because he is just HIM. Fafnir's perspective was great too.
I enjoyed reading it too. It is good thay you had fun writing it. I think a second edit would be good because there were some grammatical errors. It had a bang and an emotional ending too so that was great. Of course you cannot write Shirou without him going through a lot of physical pain and still coming up on top, because he is just HIM. Fafnir's perspective was great too.
4/14 c2 tahmedov92
Cool fic so far but I have few . Shirous projections are equal to Archers by the end of UBW due to the way it works. Instead of manually tracing them he "pulls" them out of the RM, so no degradation further than 1 rank is possible. Stuff from HF is a skill issue of that Shirou as shown by him projecting only 4 leaf Rho Alias while UBW Shirou projected the full one. Not saying that he is as good as archer tho since he would still be worse at reinforcement, alteration etc
Cool fic so far but I have few . Shirous projections are equal to Archers by the end of UBW due to the way it works. Instead of manually tracing them he "pulls" them out of the RM, so no degradation further than 1 rank is possible. Stuff from HF is a skill issue of that Shirou as shown by him projecting only 4 leaf Rho Alias while UBW Shirou projected the full one. Not saying that he is as good as archer tho since he would still be worse at reinforcement, alteration etc
3/8 c15 Ariadne Venegas
Battles are difficult to understand while reading and writing them is too. But I think you did a good job of it. I lost my self in some points but I think it was more my trouble with battles that anything. I had missed this fic!
Battles are difficult to understand while reading and writing them is too. But I think you did a good job of it. I lost my self in some points but I think it was more my trouble with battles that anything. I had missed this fic!
2/20 c1 Sunny us
Your story was a joy to read! The characters felt real, and your emotional narration kept me hooked. I’d love to see it in comic style looking forward to more of your stories!
Your story was a joy to read! The characters felt real, and your emotional narration kept me hooked. I’d love to see it in comic style looking forward to more of your stories!
12/25/2024 c14 shadyxlr
Just found this story and I love it. Hope for more and I can't wait to see where it goes
Just found this story and I love it. Hope for more and I can't wait to see where it goes
12/7/2024 c13 Star
Stupid shirou... Doncha know not to lead a yandere on?
Stupid shirou... Doncha know not to lead a yandere on?
12/6/2024 c12 Star
Can't believe an Archer shoots an arrow that can destroy Mozart's shields, lord chaldeas and rho aias in a single attack and shirou doesn't even try to record it in his marble.
This is the one major factor why I hate fgo. In it's aim to make a unique and entertaining story but primarily cuz it's client base consists of horny children, type moon continues to give a positive spin to established villains like jack the ripper, Elizabeth bathory, etc etc. it's understandable if a king like saber alter is portrayed in a slight positive light as a leader who had to make tough decisions. It's not right to take characters like bathory and say she was misguided and innocent.
As I said in earlier chapters, you need to be more clear with your fight scenes. Again in this chapter, it wasn't clear if Saber Alter was angry at Jeanne alter for stealing her kill or bcoz she recalled vlad before he could be struck down?
In both berserker and Lancer fights, the servants had their saint graph damaged which would normally kill a servant but in both cases they disappeared before they could be finished off... Did they survive or did Jeanne let them dissipate as to not give saber alter the satisfaction of a finisher?
Can't believe an Archer shoots an arrow that can destroy Mozart's shields, lord chaldeas and rho aias in a single attack and shirou doesn't even try to record it in his marble.
This is the one major factor why I hate fgo. In it's aim to make a unique and entertaining story but primarily cuz it's client base consists of horny children, type moon continues to give a positive spin to established villains like jack the ripper, Elizabeth bathory, etc etc. it's understandable if a king like saber alter is portrayed in a slight positive light as a leader who had to make tough decisions. It's not right to take characters like bathory and say she was misguided and innocent.
As I said in earlier chapters, you need to be more clear with your fight scenes. Again in this chapter, it wasn't clear if Saber Alter was angry at Jeanne alter for stealing her kill or bcoz she recalled vlad before he could be struck down?
In both berserker and Lancer fights, the servants had their saint graph damaged which would normally kill a servant but in both cases they disappeared before they could be finished off... Did they survive or did Jeanne let them dissipate as to not give saber alter the satisfaction of a finisher?