for Harry Potter and The Great Escape to China Part 22/8 c1 Guest
The humor and original storyline is refreshingly brilliant.
I happy to see Ron find his own path without being in Harry’s shadow.
I was even more happy to see Hermione join Harry at his school. I would be lovely to read a third installment that develops their friendship and romantic relationship. I wholeheartedly believe she would make a great match for him. She cares about him because he’s Harry and not for his status, abilities or wealth.
Thank you for taking this reader on these wonderful adventures. I hope to do so again.
The humor and original storyline is refreshingly brilliant.
I happy to see Ron find his own path without being in Harry’s shadow.
I was even more happy to see Hermione join Harry at his school. I would be lovely to read a third installment that develops their friendship and romantic relationship. I wholeheartedly believe she would make a great match for him. She cares about him because he’s Harry and not for his status, abilities or wealth.
Thank you for taking this reader on these wonderful adventures. I hope to do so again.
12/31/2023 c1 keht.jelicho
loved this story. And actually just your whole Magical China world overall. would totally read an original fic set in the world. Would also read a third part to the story. the Harry Potter canon story backing is over now sure, but there are still plenty more things that could fill a third installment of the story should you choose
it could be covering some of Hermione's culture shock and adaptations, further stories of "potter-luck" adventures, Hermione having female friends (possibly Tingting and the little sister of Harry's one friend), Hermione actually being Good at the poetry battles and how that ends up, Hermione and Harry eventually both getting their magical pets to evolve and then being able to bond with Crookshanks and Hedwig respectively. I want to see the reunion between Bai Di and his family (will his mom try and set Bai Di up with another Tiger?if that happens would she bond with Hermione) I would enjoy Harry and/or Hermione meeting McGonagall again (if the two do end up marrying they could have decided to take a Honeymoon to South America to see the Mayan or Aztec or etc ruins [or possibly their still surviving societies hidden by magic?] and end up running into their old professor in brazil). Dumbledore finally dying (as that would probably be a requirement before risking seeing the Weasley family openly, though harry may be able to go incognito/disguised when Hermione visits- Library of Alexandria after all) Gringotts hiring Apep via Harry to help with cleansing extremely dark tombs/items/curses. Fawkes showing up and presenting Snape or Harry with a phoenix egg. Draco and Astoria visiting when they are older, perhaps Draco even having been curious to go to Nepal to learn more about the "muggle magic" and, if magicals can be sorcerers too maybe even learning it, or at the least getting an update one whether he learned to fly his sword.
what happens with Neville, and can pills cure Alice and Frank. Will harry ever be found by Sirius and remus? Will Harry return to England/the British Gringotts to visit with Warwick in person?
since Harry started training as a Pill Maker earlier will he become a Master even younger than Snape did?
loved this story. And actually just your whole Magical China world overall. would totally read an original fic set in the world. Would also read a third part to the story. the Harry Potter canon story backing is over now sure, but there are still plenty more things that could fill a third installment of the story should you choose
it could be covering some of Hermione's culture shock and adaptations, further stories of "potter-luck" adventures, Hermione having female friends (possibly Tingting and the little sister of Harry's one friend), Hermione actually being Good at the poetry battles and how that ends up, Hermione and Harry eventually both getting their magical pets to evolve and then being able to bond with Crookshanks and Hedwig respectively. I want to see the reunion between Bai Di and his family (will his mom try and set Bai Di up with another Tiger?if that happens would she bond with Hermione) I would enjoy Harry and/or Hermione meeting McGonagall again (if the two do end up marrying they could have decided to take a Honeymoon to South America to see the Mayan or Aztec or etc ruins [or possibly their still surviving societies hidden by magic?] and end up running into their old professor in brazil). Dumbledore finally dying (as that would probably be a requirement before risking seeing the Weasley family openly, though harry may be able to go incognito/disguised when Hermione visits- Library of Alexandria after all) Gringotts hiring Apep via Harry to help with cleansing extremely dark tombs/items/curses. Fawkes showing up and presenting Snape or Harry with a phoenix egg. Draco and Astoria visiting when they are older, perhaps Draco even having been curious to go to Nepal to learn more about the "muggle magic" and, if magicals can be sorcerers too maybe even learning it, or at the least getting an update one whether he learned to fly his sword.
what happens with Neville, and can pills cure Alice and Frank. Will harry ever be found by Sirius and remus? Will Harry return to England/the British Gringotts to visit with Warwick in person?
since Harry started training as a Pill Maker earlier will he become a Master even younger than Snape did?
12/30/2023 c1 Matrixskater
such wonderful stories like nothing i have read of harry potter before. such nice changes of his life and objectives.. a great wonder to read them all. i salute thee :)
such wonderful stories like nothing i have read of harry potter before. such nice changes of his life and objectives.. a great wonder to read them all. i salute thee :)
12/8/2023 c1 
3PoIedra
Love this. You did a great job on world building. Would love to see a third installment on what happened with dumbledor. Thanks for sharing
3PoIedraLove this. You did a great job on world building. Would love to see a third installment on what happened with dumbledor. Thanks for sharing
11/30/2023 c1 montanomoma
I love it! Very well written and amazing ideas! I hope you continue it! I would love to see what happens with Dumbledore!
I love it! Very well written and amazing ideas! I hope you continue it! I would love to see what happens with Dumbledore!
11/24/2023 c1 thanks a lot
for this, for finishing, for sharing ! VERY WELL DONE ! thanks
for this, for finishing, for sharing ! VERY WELL DONE ! thanks
11/25/2023 c0 nif-ravenpuff
What an interesting series! You put so much thought into building this intriguing world. Bravo!
What an interesting series! You put so much thought into building this intriguing world. Bravo!
11/23/2023 c1 8MythsterBlack
Haha, I love the way you polished off Voldemort and his minions.
A giant snake that eats dark magic. Priceless.
I see a new story for me to read has just been uploaded. It's in my que for tomorrow. THX
8MythsterBlackHaha, I love the way you polished off Voldemort and his minions.
A giant snake that eats dark magic. Priceless.
I see a new story for me to read has just been uploaded. It's in my que for tomorrow. THX
11/18/2023 c1 9mysweetkat
Read this in AO3 and it is enjoyable to see how the prophecy is fulfilled without Harry being in Wizarding Britain. Another excellent work!
9mysweetkatRead this in AO3 and it is enjoyable to see how the prophecy is fulfilled without Harry being in Wizarding Britain. Another excellent work!