for A Change in the Urðr1/7 c1 draque-potter
Just wanted to thank you for a marvelous tale. I just completed ot in a singles sitting. I think I'll wait until tomorrow to see what else you have posted.
Just wanted to thank you for a marvelous tale. I just completed ot in a singles sitting. I think I'll wait until tomorrow to see what else you have posted.
12/31/2023 c1 keht.jelicho
Theo and Blaise are likely to become Hadrian's attendants in death, like the two named ones of Hel's (G names but I cannot rememer), and Hermione is likely to be quite happy to work with that bedouin from the Library of alexandria when she passes.
Theo and Blaise are likely to become Hadrian's attendants in death, like the two named ones of Hel's (G names but I cannot rememer), and Hermione is likely to be quite happy to work with that bedouin from the Library of alexandria when she passes.
12/15/2023 c1 Akisull
This was an interesting, though a little short, story. So thanks for that.
The only criticism I have is that there were no markers for scene change or the like when the POV changed between characters, which made it a bit difficult to keep track of who was talking at which point, since there were a few times that the POV switched unexpectedly between Harry and others.
But all in all the story was quite well written and the grammar was generally very good, not to mention that the plot itself was interesting as I already said. So, thank you and keep up the good work. )
This was an interesting, though a little short, story. So thanks for that.
The only criticism I have is that there were no markers for scene change or the like when the POV changed between characters, which made it a bit difficult to keep track of who was talking at which point, since there were a few times that the POV switched unexpectedly between Harry and others.
But all in all the story was quite well written and the grammar was generally very good, not to mention that the plot itself was interesting as I already said. So, thank you and keep up the good work. )
11/26/2023 c1 thanks a lot
for sharing this
for sharing this
11/23/2023 c1 
8MythsterBlack
On this one, I was at first confused by the use of words I never heard of or could figure out how in the world you managed to get a keyboard to spell that way.
My text to speech reader did a double take and waged its digital fingers at you, and it decided, with my help, to alter the word meanings like that strange word for Norse magic to... well... MAGIC! (grins) What was it soreror or something like that? It did not compute, so I had to change it. (grins) No offense intended. (grins)
BTW how did you get a computer keyboard to spell like that? Those keys are NOT NOT NOT on my keyboard. (grins)
8MythsterBlackOn this one, I was at first confused by the use of words I never heard of or could figure out how in the world you managed to get a keyboard to spell that way.
My text to speech reader did a double take and waged its digital fingers at you, and it decided, with my help, to alter the word meanings like that strange word for Norse magic to... well... MAGIC! (grins) What was it soreror or something like that? It did not compute, so I had to change it. (grins) No offense intended. (grins)
BTW how did you get a computer keyboard to spell like that? Those keys are NOT NOT NOT on my keyboard. (grins)
11/18/2023 c1 Annie Magus
Great story! Well written. Well researched. Lovable/interesting characters. Thank you for writing!
Great story! Well written. Well researched. Lovable/interesting characters. Thank you for writing!