for Snow On The Beach2/19/2024 c3 Allear
Bella seems so unhappy. Not with her move back to Forks or with her engagement to Edward. But day to day life seems to overwhelm her. Inconsequential things like a coffee stain or a flirty waitress drag her down in a spiral of low esteem, insecurity, and hopelessness. In real life, I would advise her to resume therapy and check her blood status. It could be something hormonal or lack of a vitamin and whatnot. It's a pity that she doesn't look forward very much to her wedding day. I guess she responds a bit poorly under pressure. Alice should know this by now, but it's also completely understandable that she didn't think of that since she was overjoyed with the news. I really like that you write your characters with depth (that leaves room for the reader's interpretation and speculations). There's definitely a story to tell here, and it's going somewhere. Btw, loved the cameo from the music legend!
Now, let's see about Jasper's story!
Bella seems so unhappy. Not with her move back to Forks or with her engagement to Edward. But day to day life seems to overwhelm her. Inconsequential things like a coffee stain or a flirty waitress drag her down in a spiral of low esteem, insecurity, and hopelessness. In real life, I would advise her to resume therapy and check her blood status. It could be something hormonal or lack of a vitamin and whatnot. It's a pity that she doesn't look forward very much to her wedding day. I guess she responds a bit poorly under pressure. Alice should know this by now, but it's also completely understandable that she didn't think of that since she was overjoyed with the news. I really like that you write your characters with depth (that leaves room for the reader's interpretation and speculations). There's definitely a story to tell here, and it's going somewhere. Btw, loved the cameo from the music legend!
Now, let's see about Jasper's story!
2/2/2024 c6 it's simply me n you
Great story! These 2 are so good together.
Love how the small town celebrates everything so enthusiastically
Great story! These 2 are so good together.
Love how the small town celebrates everything so enthusiastically
1/15/2024 c6 Jenycullen
So fun getting to spend time with these two again. I really loved it, thank you!
So fun getting to spend time with these two again. I really loved it, thank you!
12/31/2023 c6 Guest
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