
5/10 c85 Hello
Another great chapter, can barely wait for the next one. I like how you show the difference in perspective between characters, hinata thinks she can beat dino, while felix knows she can’t, it shows that some characters have information that other’s don’t in a subtle way. Keep up the good work
Another great chapter, can barely wait for the next one. I like how you show the difference in perspective between characters, hinata thinks she can beat dino, while felix knows she can’t, it shows that some characters have information that other’s don’t in a subtle way. Keep up the good work
5/10 c85 Guest
Good chapter, interesting explanation regarding time travel and dimension travel.
Good chapter, interesting explanation regarding time travel and dimension travel.
5/10 c85 Guest
nice little tidbit about the past of the primordials
nice little tidbit about the past of the primordials
5/10 c85
3Blackplant
I'll have to correct you on a lore point. Devils' souls don't vanish if they die. That only happens when they are killed with the holy element. Remember that Cleria Belial's soul shows up in Heaven of all places.
That point of critique aside, this was a good chapter. I'm looking forward to more.

I'll have to correct you on a lore point. Devils' souls don't vanish if they die. That only happens when they are killed with the holy element. Remember that Cleria Belial's soul shows up in Heaven of all places.
That point of critique aside, this was a good chapter. I'm looking forward to more.
5/5 c6 Brendan147
Just thought id let tou know i love this story would love to see him go to one piece and start out with some form of limiters so he has a challenge
Just thought id let tou know i love this story would love to see him go to one piece and start out with some form of limiters so he has a challenge
5/3 c84 Guest
Othinus making some moves
Othinus making some moves
5/3 c83 Guest
Finally, good chapter though yes the story can be slightly sped up without affecting the plot and character development.
Finally, good chapter though yes the story can be slightly sped up without affecting the plot and character development.
5/3 c84 vallabhvvaidya007
Author-san, the story pace has dipped quite a bit. Pls include more content in a single chapter rather than overextending a single narrative. Overall good so far. Keep it up
Author-san, the story pace has dipped quite a bit. Pls include more content in a single chapter rather than overextending a single narrative. Overall good so far. Keep it up
5/3 c83 Dananator
I hope Hinata dresses up for Felix in the same outfit she wore to Rimuru’s feast in the canon timeline. You know the backless dress Rimuru tried to take a picture of but Ciel stopped him from doing so.
I hope Hinata dresses up for Felix in the same outfit she wore to Rimuru’s feast in the canon timeline. You know the backless dress Rimuru tried to take a picture of but Ciel stopped him from doing so.
4/26 c82 Guest
nice bonding scene between Felix and Luminous
nice bonding scene between Felix and Luminous