
6/25/2024 c53
4Imagination94
Wow, what a great chapter! I'm not much of an action reader and sometimes find myself skimming parts of fanfics where there are battle scenes, but I read every word of that and was completely gripped. Looking forward to the next chapter - although I still think it is harsh that they get restriction for going out!

Wow, what a great chapter! I'm not much of an action reader and sometimes find myself skimming parts of fanfics where there are battle scenes, but I read every word of that and was completely gripped. Looking forward to the next chapter - although I still think it is harsh that they get restriction for going out!
6/24/2024 c53 Wren22
Well! I didnt see THAT coming! Poor Harry. How much more can he cope with?
Brilliant chapter.
Well! I didnt see THAT coming! Poor Harry. How much more can he cope with?
Brilliant chapter.
6/2/2024 c8 InfluxM
Severus should never have been around children. He still behaves like a child himself.
Severus should never have been around children. He still behaves like a child himself.
6/2/2024 c50 Wren22
Thank you for a wonderful chapter. I love how you have the ability to make Harry’s emotions dance off the page and the interaction between him and George breaks my heart. You portray Harry’s vulnerability so vividly and I really hope George’s reassurances allow Harry to begin to realise it’s not his fault. Both Snape and Harry are walking an emotional tightrope and I can’t wait to see how you continue to develop their fragile trust in each other.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter. I love how you have the ability to make Harry’s emotions dance off the page and the interaction between him and George breaks my heart. You portray Harry’s vulnerability so vividly and I really hope George’s reassurances allow Harry to begin to realise it’s not his fault. Both Snape and Harry are walking an emotional tightrope and I can’t wait to see how you continue to develop their fragile trust in each other.
5/26/2024 c48 Loopygirl1
You have a brilliant writing style! You really make the characters come to life, showing their inner thoughts while not being overdone. I was gripped the entire time and couldn't put this down. There are a couple of spelling errors if you ever want advice on those but honestly the writing is so amazing I barely noticed. I can't wait to read more of your work. I really love how you have developed Harry, extending on his power slowly and letting him grow in confidence. I can't wait to see what he'll do with his abilities now he is very clearly a match for Voldemort.
You have a brilliant writing style! You really make the characters come to life, showing their inner thoughts while not being overdone. I was gripped the entire time and couldn't put this down. There are a couple of spelling errors if you ever want advice on those but honestly the writing is so amazing I barely noticed. I can't wait to read more of your work. I really love how you have developed Harry, extending on his power slowly and letting him grow in confidence. I can't wait to see what he'll do with his abilities now he is very clearly a match for Voldemort.
5/26/2024 c48 Imagination94
Loved this chapter, and I'm so glad that Snape found out that Draco was hurting Harry before it could go any further. Interested to see what his reaction will be to Harry saying he can remove the Dark Mark.
Loved this chapter, and I'm so glad that Snape found out that Draco was hurting Harry before it could go any further. Interested to see what his reaction will be to Harry saying he can remove the Dark Mark.
5/23/2024 c48 Guest
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5/24/2024 c48
19Binte Muhammad
really, really hope severus doesnt scare harry away, they need each other

really, really hope severus doesnt scare harry away, they need each other
5/22/2024 c48 Hermlils
No child should have to go through any of that. you write very well, continue please
No child should have to go through any of that. you write very well, continue please