for Archer, the Sorcerer5/9 c6 Number XLVII
"My body is made of swords."
"My blood is swords. My heart is swords."
"Domain Expansion: I Love Swords So Much."
"My body is made of swords."
"My blood is swords. My heart is swords."
"Domain Expansion: I Love Swords So Much."
5/9 c6 Lazy Servant
Thanks for the chapter.
The chapter feels like half the end of arc and half start of other arc.
Thanks for the chapter.
The chapter feels like half the end of arc and half start of other arc.
5/7 c6 
1SentinalSlice
So I always forget, but does Shirou have cursed energy in this? Considering that we now know Illya was born normally just like EMIYA, and she has cursed energy, and she likely had any natural magic circuits she was supposed to originally have.
I’m still hoping we see what effect of EMIYA’s soul being in a human body has, it should be strengthening the body to match a level closer to or at the same level as the soul, per both JJK rules, well Mahito’s ones, and Fate rules, which Emiya personally would likely follow since it’s about mindset and technique application, and he likely knows how bodies change to match their souls.
I’m wondering if we could see Emiya do a domain expansion and then on top of that do UBW. That would be really cool.
Or maybe he could summon UBW with cursed energy instead. I just hope that you really make it clear whether he has been learning to use cursed energy at all.
1SentinalSliceSo I always forget, but does Shirou have cursed energy in this? Considering that we now know Illya was born normally just like EMIYA, and she has cursed energy, and she likely had any natural magic circuits she was supposed to originally have.
I’m still hoping we see what effect of EMIYA’s soul being in a human body has, it should be strengthening the body to match a level closer to or at the same level as the soul, per both JJK rules, well Mahito’s ones, and Fate rules, which Emiya personally would likely follow since it’s about mindset and technique application, and he likely knows how bodies change to match their souls.
I’m wondering if we could see Emiya do a domain expansion and then on top of that do UBW. That would be really cool.
Or maybe he could summon UBW with cursed energy instead. I just hope that you really make it clear whether he has been learning to use cursed energy at all.
5/7 c6 1Spoodster21
Just want to leave a comment that I'm a fan of you deciding not to have Shirou meet Illya. whether she remembers her past life or not, meeting Illya will only make her more likely to get involved with whatever mess Shirou will get himself in. so yeah, pretty in character.
Also about Archer upping the intensity of his training, I'd say it's not that hard to imagine. when you're already grown and have life long experience fighting, just following comfortable pace of growing up with the body of a kid will gnaw at your mind in someway. adding on this is mister wanting to see everyone around him smile in a world where curses ruins innocent lives. There's no way he'll just 'enjoy' his childhood, ideal be damned. Illya and the other kids was just a wake up call.
In short, this Archer wanted to become stronger not because of chasing a dream, but because he can from his past experience, and someone had to do it. Though finding the right balance not to make him too naive and still Shirou-like will be tough.
1Spoodster21Just want to leave a comment that I'm a fan of you deciding not to have Shirou meet Illya. whether she remembers her past life or not, meeting Illya will only make her more likely to get involved with whatever mess Shirou will get himself in. so yeah, pretty in character.
Also about Archer upping the intensity of his training, I'd say it's not that hard to imagine. when you're already grown and have life long experience fighting, just following comfortable pace of growing up with the body of a kid will gnaw at your mind in someway. adding on this is mister wanting to see everyone around him smile in a world where curses ruins innocent lives. There's no way he'll just 'enjoy' his childhood, ideal be damned. Illya and the other kids was just a wake up call.
In short, this Archer wanted to become stronger not because of chasing a dream, but because he can from his past experience, and someone had to do it. Though finding the right balance not to make him too naive and still Shirou-like will be tough.
5/6 c6 ImHateful
I hate this chapter simply because of your decision on not having Shirou meet her and having us wait on it for how many chapters, especially with your infamous breaks in between the chapters, you never know how long it will be until you have them meet, it could be this year or the next year, and that's frustrating, she's right fucking there, I don't want to wait months IRL for the two to meet, I had the song ready and everything and was ready for the emotional scene and yet you jerked it, I'm so pissed if Shirou doesn't march his ass to where Illya is at next chapter, I'm going to fucking rage, he should be there for her not have her go her whole childhood without him, this shit is so frustrating. Unless you're making her as the pairing in this story and don't want it to be weird and that's why you're separating the two until they're teenagers then fine but if it's just for no reason besides Shirou being stupid, fuck that. But even then if you're making her as the pairing, it's still not a good choice of sperating the two for years, both of them are mentally adults, Illya was stuck in a child's body but she was older than Shirou, (Not Archer) but I think she was 18. It would be better to develop her with Shirou rather than just wait
I hate this chapter simply because of your decision on not having Shirou meet her and having us wait on it for how many chapters, especially with your infamous breaks in between the chapters, you never know how long it will be until you have them meet, it could be this year or the next year, and that's frustrating, she's right fucking there, I don't want to wait months IRL for the two to meet, I had the song ready and everything and was ready for the emotional scene and yet you jerked it, I'm so pissed if Shirou doesn't march his ass to where Illya is at next chapter, I'm going to fucking rage, he should be there for her not have her go her whole childhood without him, this shit is so frustrating. Unless you're making her as the pairing in this story and don't want it to be weird and that's why you're separating the two until they're teenagers then fine but if it's just for no reason besides Shirou being stupid, fuck that. But even then if you're making her as the pairing, it's still not a good choice of sperating the two for years, both of them are mentally adults, Illya was stuck in a child's body but she was older than Shirou, (Not Archer) but I think she was 18. It would be better to develop her with Shirou rather than just wait
5/6 c6 2Not-Quite-Old Man
Ah Gojo, you forget.
Shirou might be twice as bright as everyone else in that shining future… but the candle that burns twice as bright, lasts half as long.
Ngl tho, I loved that last line in the chapter.
TFTC. o7
2Not-Quite-Old ManAh Gojo, you forget.
Shirou might be twice as bright as everyone else in that shining future… but the candle that burns twice as bright, lasts half as long.
Ngl tho, I loved that last line in the chapter.
TFTC. o7
5/6 c6 Insulted Fan
Um...Why didn't Ilya just solve her problems herself? She's a very powerful mage, so a Spirit like that couldn't cause her any problems.
Um...Why didn't Ilya just solve her problems herself? She's a very powerful mage, so a Spirit like that couldn't cause her any problems.
5/6 c6 Mugen-Blade
I just read the chapter and i have to ask: Is this really EMIYA or is it Shirou Emiya? Because his behavior in this chapter feels at odds with the 'cool as a cucumber even under pressure' Counter Guardian.
I just simply do not see EMIYA having this poor grasp on his emotions anymore that the whole matter with Illya would drive him back to be obsessed with something again like he did when he was alive with his dream of becoming a hero of justice and specially after going recklessly at something without caring about anything else was what got him into his own personal hell.
Sure, the matter was certaintly important to him given his past life but i would have expected him to deal with it in a more controled and mature manner than simply letting himself be driven by the nose by those feelings. Like, just right after coming out the hospital what was the first thing he did? Go and hack and slash monsters as if he were a RPG character that would level up by killing a pile of monsters? What would that accomplish?
EMIYA knows what do to become stronger and he doesnt necesarily needs get more skilled because he already has more experience than any living Sorcerer dealing with supernatural stuff and the only thing he needs is to get his body into shape but burning his own at this stage will only left him with a worse base later on due overly damaging it before it even finished maturing. He should know that but it certaintly doesnt feel like it here and in fact, if this were Shirou i would say it would be perfectly in character but not for EMIYA.
There is also the matter with the Jujutsu side of stuff, EMIYA may not have too much cursed energy but he still has some that he has no bothered to do something with it... When he at the very least could make a bidding bow to surrend what little he had for more physical power like a Heavenly Restriction which would help him a lot to get his body to perform at a level he would feel acceptable
I just read the chapter and i have to ask: Is this really EMIYA or is it Shirou Emiya? Because his behavior in this chapter feels at odds with the 'cool as a cucumber even under pressure' Counter Guardian.
I just simply do not see EMIYA having this poor grasp on his emotions anymore that the whole matter with Illya would drive him back to be obsessed with something again like he did when he was alive with his dream of becoming a hero of justice and specially after going recklessly at something without caring about anything else was what got him into his own personal hell.
Sure, the matter was certaintly important to him given his past life but i would have expected him to deal with it in a more controled and mature manner than simply letting himself be driven by the nose by those feelings. Like, just right after coming out the hospital what was the first thing he did? Go and hack and slash monsters as if he were a RPG character that would level up by killing a pile of monsters? What would that accomplish?
EMIYA knows what do to become stronger and he doesnt necesarily needs get more skilled because he already has more experience than any living Sorcerer dealing with supernatural stuff and the only thing he needs is to get his body into shape but burning his own at this stage will only left him with a worse base later on due overly damaging it before it even finished maturing. He should know that but it certaintly doesnt feel like it here and in fact, if this were Shirou i would say it would be perfectly in character but not for EMIYA.
There is also the matter with the Jujutsu side of stuff, EMIYA may not have too much cursed energy but he still has some that he has no bothered to do something with it... When he at the very least could make a bidding bow to surrend what little he had for more physical power like a Heavenly Restriction which would help him a lot to get his body to perform at a level he would feel acceptable
5/6 c6 Greyfox2
This is a good way to wrap up the childhood arc, it finished gracefully, without need of more being said. Looking forwards to the middle school arc!
This is a good way to wrap up the childhood arc, it finished gracefully, without need of more being said. Looking forwards to the middle school arc!
5/6 c6 Harris Hussain
Ilya? Damn. I really hate it where other charcters appear in the crossover. So ima have to drop it. It was a cool story so far but this is just a pet peeve of mine.
Anyways, I wish you the best of luck!
Ilya? Damn. I really hate it where other charcters appear in the crossover. So ima have to drop it. It was a cool story so far but this is just a pet peeve of mine.
Anyways, I wish you the best of luck!