
9/18/2010 c6 Bramber
This story needs to be bigger in length to be precise and add xomething sbout Bray and Amber having another baby to male your story sound better and more intelligent
This story needs to be bigger in length to be precise and add xomething sbout Bray and Amber having another baby to male your story sound better and more intelligent
3/20/2006 c1 Darcy
New here and just read this.
This story is...really really dumb
New here and just read this.
This story is...really really dumb
6/11/2004 c6 Cat
Wow this story is great, which is saying alot as I normally don't read stories that arn't about Ebony. I really lilke this one as it is really well written with an origanal pairing!
Wow this story is great, which is saying alot as I normally don't read stories that arn't about Ebony. I really lilke this one as it is really well written with an origanal pairing!
7/23/2003 c2
9Lady Lorene
This is something different. I can't wait to read more. Cloe's reaction will be priceless.

This is something different. I can't wait to read more. Cloe's reaction will be priceless.
7/17/2003 c2 Dangly Legged Owl
Write on, you have a reader! (And I bet many people read this, they just don't review.) I think you could include a bit more details, but apart from that, good story.
Write on, you have a reader! (And I bet many people read this, they just don't review.) I think you could include a bit more details, but apart from that, good story.