for No Good Deed Goes Unpunished11/9/2024 c4 Guest
Yes I would like weekly updates and when are you going to update doctor of demons
Yes I would like weekly updates and when are you going to update doctor of demons
1711/7/2024 c4 shinghidorah
i'll be honest, i hate eminence in shadow. the mc is a cringey, edgy, shadow-loving piece of horse dung; typical trash edgy-isekai protag.
one thing i do like about EIS, tho, are the girls and they're downright gorgeous. shame the mc is a piece of horse dung. with naruto here instead of shitty cid (who tf named themselves kagenou?), i might just be invested. heck, i'll probably make my own EIS fanfic some day in the future.
and there's no doubt this'll be a harem. you might as well remove the "Naruto x harem?" in the description; the more the merrier. make it a harem where he's wholesome with the girls (main or otherwise) but ruthless, ambitious, smart, and cunning to anyone who opposes him. i like OP characters who aren't douchebags, and you are by far one of my favorite author in this broken af site when it comes to writing that.
i'll be honest, i hate eminence in shadow. the mc is a cringey, edgy, shadow-loving piece of horse dung; typical trash edgy-isekai protag.
one thing i do like about EIS, tho, are the girls and they're downright gorgeous. shame the mc is a piece of horse dung. with naruto here instead of shitty cid (who tf named themselves kagenou?), i might just be invested. heck, i'll probably make my own EIS fanfic some day in the future.
and there's no doubt this'll be a harem. you might as well remove the "Naruto x harem?" in the description; the more the merrier. make it a harem where he's wholesome with the girls (main or otherwise) but ruthless, ambitious, smart, and cunning to anyone who opposes him. i like OP characters who aren't douchebags, and you are by far one of my favorite author in this broken af site when it comes to writing that.
11/7/2024 c4 xangelicsin
Fun read so far. It will be interesting to see where this story goes. Great work, very much looking forward to more
Fun read so far. It will be interesting to see where this story goes. Great work, very much looking forward to more
11/5/2024 c4 codywhite162
This story continues to be incredible and Iris gets the first ring nice! Looking forward to what happens next.
This story continues to be incredible and Iris gets the first ring nice! Looking forward to what happens next.
11/5/2024 c3 Fernizer
Thank you for the chapter!
Starting with foxes... I like it! Mama Fox is quite forward, but honestly it is quite good strategy. Offer everything she has and focus him on herself - if he is a good guy then nothing should go wrong and if his intentions weren't most pure then she should be able to focus him on herself and make sure her daughter is spared from whatever he could have planned for them. I mean we know it's Naruto, even as cold as he is there is no need to worry, he wouldn't help them just to make them suffer for no reason. She does not.
Though I'm quite curious about that bold font ("Keep. That. Girl."). My first tought was "Kurama, is that you?" but I thought that Kurama wasn't here? Did I miss something? Maybe. Or maybe it will be explained later?
So now I have to wonder and wait for more chapters. Poor, poor me.
Do I spy with my little eye some kind of recreation of Heavenly Transfer Technique (Kumo's jutsu for quick transport)? And is that 9th tier spell of our favourite Sorcerer King? Sword of Promised Victory? His skill list is getting more impressive even if it is just third chapter. I mean just mountain-cleaving swordsmanship is amazing enough, can't wait to see how will he work with all of that.
Why does imagining smoll Delta, be it whining or talking about murderizing people brings smile to my face? I'm not sure but if I'm smiling by the end of the chapter, I call it a good read.
Thank you for the chapter!
Starting with foxes... I like it! Mama Fox is quite forward, but honestly it is quite good strategy. Offer everything she has and focus him on herself - if he is a good guy then nothing should go wrong and if his intentions weren't most pure then she should be able to focus him on herself and make sure her daughter is spared from whatever he could have planned for them. I mean we know it's Naruto, even as cold as he is there is no need to worry, he wouldn't help them just to make them suffer for no reason. She does not.
Though I'm quite curious about that bold font ("Keep. That. Girl."). My first tought was "Kurama, is that you?" but I thought that Kurama wasn't here? Did I miss something? Maybe. Or maybe it will be explained later?
So now I have to wonder and wait for more chapters. Poor, poor me.
Do I spy with my little eye some kind of recreation of Heavenly Transfer Technique (Kumo's jutsu for quick transport)? And is that 9th tier spell of our favourite Sorcerer King? Sword of Promised Victory? His skill list is getting more impressive even if it is just third chapter. I mean just mountain-cleaving swordsmanship is amazing enough, can't wait to see how will he work with all of that.
Why does imagining smoll Delta, be it whining or talking about murderizing people brings smile to my face? I'm not sure but if I'm smiling by the end of the chapter, I call it a good read.
11/4/2024 c4 Roddy G
I think next chapter should be we you introduce delta and then whe can have like a Time skip/Cid POV and him hearing about Naruto aka Nathaniel
I think next chapter should be we you introduce delta and then whe can have like a Time skip/Cid POV and him hearing about Naruto aka Nathaniel
11/4/2024 c4 atengawchok
Yup, let war for his heart begin. Already engage, huh. Can't wait to read more. excellent chapter!
Yup, let war for his heart begin. Already engage, huh. Can't wait to read more. excellent chapter!