for No Good Deed Goes Unpunished11/3/2024 c4 Hail Lord Archanfel
If you did a time skip, where would you place it now? And how is dear Zenon doing?
If you did a time skip, where would you place it now? And how is dear Zenon doing?
11/3/2024 c2 Fernizer
Thanks for the chapter!
I'm back for another one and I'm satisfied and smiling so overall I think I liked this one.
Imagining the littlest of Midgar's royals waving around was so much fun that I didn't expect it. She was kinda spoiled in as a teen so this 'strict but kind teacher' Naruto should do her some good.
I'm a little on the fence about how far he goes with Zenon. From one side, Zenon is and would have been a douche if nothing changed, so considering how much of an ass he would have been it's better to just remove him from the picture, either permanently or not. On the other hand, even if Zenon did what he did, does it warrant so much needless torture? Wouldn't it be better to just end his free trial of being alive?
One of my greatest fears is being prisoner of my own body (aka fully, completely paralyzed) so I may be a bit biased, but it seems a bit excessive, especially for Naruto. But I want to hold my judgement on that as I don't mind Naruto that kills and tortures, I just don't like that in excess in Naruto. So I will wait for (hopefully) reading more chapters before deciding if I like how you wrote that part of him here or not.
And NEW FOX HAS ARRIVED! You hinted (or rather spelled) in last chapter's author's notes that it would happen, but I wasn't sure how long it would take him (I'm not the best with the timeline of Kagejitsu). What would Kurama think!? Such a betrayal! Exchanging old, grumpy overgrown furball for newer, younger, cuter model?
'What could possibly go wrong?' I mean those are famous last words for a reason, aren't they? Good for you Naruto that you are a main character or that could be something more than occasion to rescue a damsel in distress.
Thanks for the chapter!
I'm back for another one and I'm satisfied and smiling so overall I think I liked this one.
Imagining the littlest of Midgar's royals waving around was so much fun that I didn't expect it. She was kinda spoiled in as a teen so this 'strict but kind teacher' Naruto should do her some good.
I'm a little on the fence about how far he goes with Zenon. From one side, Zenon is and would have been a douche if nothing changed, so considering how much of an ass he would have been it's better to just remove him from the picture, either permanently or not. On the other hand, even if Zenon did what he did, does it warrant so much needless torture? Wouldn't it be better to just end his free trial of being alive?
One of my greatest fears is being prisoner of my own body (aka fully, completely paralyzed) so I may be a bit biased, but it seems a bit excessive, especially for Naruto. But I want to hold my judgement on that as I don't mind Naruto that kills and tortures, I just don't like that in excess in Naruto. So I will wait for (hopefully) reading more chapters before deciding if I like how you wrote that part of him here or not.
And NEW FOX HAS ARRIVED! You hinted (or rather spelled) in last chapter's author's notes that it would happen, but I wasn't sure how long it would take him (I'm not the best with the timeline of Kagejitsu). What would Kurama think!? Such a betrayal! Exchanging old, grumpy overgrown furball for newer, younger, cuter model?
'What could possibly go wrong?' I mean those are famous last words for a reason, aren't they? Good for you Naruto that you are a main character or that could be something more than occasion to rescue a damsel in distress.
11/3/2024 c4 Malakoda
Chapter was very short. I hope your next Chapter for this Fic will be way longer. I really like the story so far and would like to see how Naruto and Shadow will interact.
Chapter was very short. I hope your next Chapter for this Fic will be way longer. I really like the story so far and would like to see how Naruto and Shadow will interact.
11/3/2024 c4 HurZysn
thank you for the update Neon. I look forward to the next. update when you can and I wouldn't mind seeing this updated more often
thank you for the update Neon. I look forward to the next. update when you can and I wouldn't mind seeing this updated more often
11/3/2024 c4 MatthewGremory
Seeing Iris like this was so cute; in the anime, she's a bit bland, so seeing your version of her is very gratifying. I hope you can write more of this story in the future because there are very few Naruto fanfics in The Eminence in Shadow universe.
Seeing Iris like this was so cute; in the anime, she's a bit bland, so seeing your version of her is very gratifying. I hope you can write more of this story in the future because there are very few Naruto fanfics in The Eminence in Shadow universe.
11/3/2024 c4 Afilix
Un capítulo bueno para esperar el próximo y muy tierno además
Un capítulo bueno para esperar el próximo y muy tierno además