for Mothers and Daughters12/20/2024 c1 rachlnoah
Your story is beautifully written, with a perfect blend of emotional depth and tension. The family dynamics you’ve portrayed between Alexis, Kristina, Molly, and Sam are incredibly compelling. The delicate subject of surrogacy and the raw emotions it brings out in Alexis highlight the complexity of family relationships. You’ve captured Alexis’s inner conflict and love for her daughters so well—it makes her relatable and human.
The dialogue is natural and flows effortlessly, drawing the reader into the heart of the conversation. Kristina's fiery reaction and Alexis’s cautious, loving response feel authentic and add layers to their bond. Sam's supportive stance balances the scene beautifully, showing the strength of sibling relationships amidst challenging decisions.
Switching to Carolyn’s story brings a different kind of emotional intensity. Her longing to reconnect with Lizzie and the pain of being estranged are palpable. The voicemail scene is heartbreaking, and it makes the reader empathize with Carolyn's struggles. The transition to the ER scene adds urgency and drama, keeping the narrative engaging. The sudden car crash emergency is a powerful way to pull the reader further into Carolyn’s world, showcasing her professionalism and compassion even while dealing with personal pain.
Your ability to intertwine family drama with high-stakes moments is remarkable. The pacing is spot on, and the shifts between emotional beats and action scenes keep the story dynamic and captivating.
This story has a lot of heart, and your writing brings out the complexity of relationships and emotions beautifully.
Keep up the fantastic work this is the kind of storytelling that resonates deeply with readers!
Your story is beautifully written, with a perfect blend of emotional depth and tension. The family dynamics you’ve portrayed between Alexis, Kristina, Molly, and Sam are incredibly compelling. The delicate subject of surrogacy and the raw emotions it brings out in Alexis highlight the complexity of family relationships. You’ve captured Alexis’s inner conflict and love for her daughters so well—it makes her relatable and human.
The dialogue is natural and flows effortlessly, drawing the reader into the heart of the conversation. Kristina's fiery reaction and Alexis’s cautious, loving response feel authentic and add layers to their bond. Sam's supportive stance balances the scene beautifully, showing the strength of sibling relationships amidst challenging decisions.
Switching to Carolyn’s story brings a different kind of emotional intensity. Her longing to reconnect with Lizzie and the pain of being estranged are palpable. The voicemail scene is heartbreaking, and it makes the reader empathize with Carolyn's struggles. The transition to the ER scene adds urgency and drama, keeping the narrative engaging. The sudden car crash emergency is a powerful way to pull the reader further into Carolyn’s world, showcasing her professionalism and compassion even while dealing with personal pain.
Your ability to intertwine family drama with high-stakes moments is remarkable. The pacing is spot on, and the shifts between emotional beats and action scenes keep the story dynamic and captivating.
This story has a lot of heart, and your writing brings out the complexity of relationships and emotions beautifully.
Keep up the fantastic work this is the kind of storytelling that resonates deeply with readers!
11/30/2024 c97 
20jrchandlerfan1
Hey Cameron- Yeah, April and I are getting an upstream error on the board too. I'm thinking we'll continue next weekend and do smaller scenes during the week.
20jrchandlerfan1Hey Cameron- Yeah, April and I are getting an upstream error on the board too. I'm thinking we'll continue next weekend and do smaller scenes during the week.
11/30/2024 c97 Guest 40
Jrchandlerfan1-hi srry on my end it went down so I'm hoping itll be soon on again
Jrchandlerfan1-hi srry on my end it went down so I'm hoping itll be soon on again
11/25/2024 c78 48Nickels39
Yesss Jake tell him like it is started reading this and I'm already obsessed
48Nickels39Yesss Jake tell him like it is started reading this and I'm already obsessed
11/23/2024 c97 Guest
Great chapter. I love the whole "Lucy Sue" thing you've got going on here. It kind of reminds me of that Halloween episode of The Simpsons where Ned Flanders ruled the world.
I'm glad Felicia, Alexis, and Nina are getting the chance to experience their kids as children, even if it's not real. Little Frankie definitely has Felicia, Mac, and Cody wrapped around her finger.
Great chapter. I love the whole "Lucy Sue" thing you've got going on here. It kind of reminds me of that Halloween episode of The Simpsons where Ned Flanders ruled the world.
I'm glad Felicia, Alexis, and Nina are getting the chance to experience their kids as children, even if it's not real. Little Frankie definitely has Felicia, Mac, and Cody wrapped around her finger.
11/22/2024 c97 2Spideygirl99
Awe I love this alternate reality chapter. Lucy and her magic pocket watch transformed all of the moms back in time so that they could raise all of their children together as it was supposed to be. And I love it Lucy and Kevin and their daughters are the royal family. Of course haha Queen Lucy.
Awe I love it how in his fantasy, Cody, Maxie, Georgie and Frankie are all of Mac and Felicia's children. And we see the rivalry of Maxie and Frankie start. And Frankie really does have both of her parents wrapped around her finger. Awe poor Felicia can't figure out what is up since she was just in the hospital waiting room and then back a whole bunch of years to when all of the kids were young.
And awe I love that Alexis and Julian are together in this fantasy too and that Sam, Lucas, Kristina, Molly and Leo are all of their children.
Wow even as a child Nelle was a menace for locking Willow in the closet and then lying about it. I guess some things don't change. Even a younger setting and with her family all together like it should have been Nelle is still the troublemaker.
I love this alternate chapter and can't wait to see more.
2Spideygirl99Awe I love this alternate reality chapter. Lucy and her magic pocket watch transformed all of the moms back in time so that they could raise all of their children together as it was supposed to be. And I love it Lucy and Kevin and their daughters are the royal family. Of course haha Queen Lucy.
Awe I love it how in his fantasy, Cody, Maxie, Georgie and Frankie are all of Mac and Felicia's children. And we see the rivalry of Maxie and Frankie start. And Frankie really does have both of her parents wrapped around her finger. Awe poor Felicia can't figure out what is up since she was just in the hospital waiting room and then back a whole bunch of years to when all of the kids were young.
And awe I love that Alexis and Julian are together in this fantasy too and that Sam, Lucas, Kristina, Molly and Leo are all of their children.
Wow even as a child Nelle was a menace for locking Willow in the closet and then lying about it. I guess some things don't change. Even a younger setting and with her family all together like it should have been Nelle is still the troublemaker.
I love this alternate chapter and can't wait to see more.
11/22/2024 c95 20jrchandlerfan1
OH and Michael told Jason that Drew and Willow slept together, so Jason went over to the Qs and beat Drew up WHILE DANNY AND SCOUT WERE UPSTAIRS. They were asleep apparently, but they very well might not have been. Carly actually called Jason out on this. I was actually on her side, except she didn't know about Drew/Willow. JASON DID NOT CARE THAT DANNY AND SCOUT COULD'VE SEEN IT. He said it had to be done. So he essentially admitted that he cares about Michael more than Danny (and Scout). But I'm sure this will just be swept under the rug. If it was anyone else, Julian, AJ, etc., the kids would've witnessed it and everyone would lay into him.
20jrchandlerfan1OH and Michael told Jason that Drew and Willow slept together, so Jason went over to the Qs and beat Drew up WHILE DANNY AND SCOUT WERE UPSTAIRS. They were asleep apparently, but they very well might not have been. Carly actually called Jason out on this. I was actually on her side, except she didn't know about Drew/Willow. JASON DID NOT CARE THAT DANNY AND SCOUT COULD'VE SEEN IT. He said it had to be done. So he essentially admitted that he cares about Michael more than Danny (and Scout). But I'm sure this will just be swept under the rug. If it was anyone else, Julian, AJ, etc., the kids would've witnessed it and everyone would lay into him.
11/22/2024 c96 jrchandlerfan1
Chrissyfan- Have you heard? Dante, Jason, Rocco, Danny, and Scout are all going to live at the Qs and Drew is going to commute from Washington to visit Scout. I'm done. I would've been fine if Dante got custody of the kids and lived elsewhere, but Jason learns squat and is father of the year. Then there's Jake who? I wouldn't be surprised if Jason's number one reason to move there is to keep an eye on Drew and Willow for Michael's sake. We all know Carly will be there around the clock-she already is with telling Michael and Willow how to raise their kids. And the mansion will probably get blown up, but oh, it will never be the mob's fault.
I really wanted Alexis to get the kids, but the last thing I wanted was Jason. I'd even choose Spixie even though they already have 3 kids to care for. Jason needs to prove himself not just magically have Danny after the years of abandonment and neglect. And it's not fair to Jake. I'm done.
Chrissyfan- Have you heard? Dante, Jason, Rocco, Danny, and Scout are all going to live at the Qs and Drew is going to commute from Washington to visit Scout. I'm done. I would've been fine if Dante got custody of the kids and lived elsewhere, but Jason learns squat and is father of the year. Then there's Jake who? I wouldn't be surprised if Jason's number one reason to move there is to keep an eye on Drew and Willow for Michael's sake. We all know Carly will be there around the clock-she already is with telling Michael and Willow how to raise their kids. And the mansion will probably get blown up, but oh, it will never be the mob's fault.
I really wanted Alexis to get the kids, but the last thing I wanted was Jason. I'd even choose Spixie even though they already have 3 kids to care for. Jason needs to prove himself not just magically have Danny after the years of abandonment and neglect. And it's not fair to Jake. I'm done.
11/19/2024 c96 KIRRAA
So Esme is Mac's daughter and Sasha isn't Robert' is alive and Nelle the nut has her.
So Esme is Mac's daughter and Sasha isn't Robert' is alive and Nelle the nut has her.
11/18/2024 c96 Guest
Great chapter! I loved how so many people were willing to step in and donate blood to Esme. Not to mention Cameron confessing his feelings and Cody giving Spencer a well-deserved beat down.
It was nice to see Mac and Kevin in a scene together. It looks like Esme's paternity is leaning back towards Ryan. I don't know what the plan is with that, but have you considered making her a chimera? That way she could be related to both Mac and Ryan.
I felt bad for Nina. I get that she wants Nelle to get help, but Nelle seems to be way past that point. Hopefully, she can accept that before she does too much damage to her relationship with Willow.
So, Sam isn't dead after all. I'm trying to figure out how Nelle faked Sam's death, and I'm guessing that she has an unknown partner.
Great chapter! I loved how so many people were willing to step in and donate blood to Esme. Not to mention Cameron confessing his feelings and Cody giving Spencer a well-deserved beat down.
It was nice to see Mac and Kevin in a scene together. It looks like Esme's paternity is leaning back towards Ryan. I don't know what the plan is with that, but have you considered making her a chimera? That way she could be related to both Mac and Ryan.
I felt bad for Nina. I get that she wants Nelle to get help, but Nelle seems to be way past that point. Hopefully, she can accept that before she does too much damage to her relationship with Willow.
So, Sam isn't dead after all. I'm trying to figure out how Nelle faked Sam's death, and I'm guessing that she has an unknown partner.
11/18/2024 c96 Guest 40
Seriously nina? And I figured nelle had something do with sam's missing body and fact she still alive nelle is sociopath and r we sure nelle's nina's daughter and not related to helena cassadine? Cuz this is something helena cassadine would do. And awe love cam scenes with felicia and esme and seriously Frisco? And that great have 2 matches for esme. And wow oh boy cody rly gave it to Spencer.
Now that Spencer thinks/feels that cam, trina, and esme must pay for wat they did to Spencer and josslyn even josslyn furious maybe they bring back someone from Trina's past before trina and her mom moved to pc?
Seriously nina? And I figured nelle had something do with sam's missing body and fact she still alive nelle is sociopath and r we sure nelle's nina's daughter and not related to helena cassadine? Cuz this is something helena cassadine would do. And awe love cam scenes with felicia and esme and seriously Frisco? And that great have 2 matches for esme. And wow oh boy cody rly gave it to Spencer.
Now that Spencer thinks/feels that cam, trina, and esme must pay for wat they did to Spencer and josslyn even josslyn furious maybe they bring back someone from Trina's past before trina and her mom moved to pc?
11/18/2024 c96 2Spideygirl99
As much as I love Willow and Nina and their newfound mother/daughter relationship and I know that Nina would never turn her back on Nelle either even though she is psycho and crazy and needs way more help then even her mother can give her. I do side with Willow, she has both Wiley and Amelia to think about and protect and I don't think Nelle would ever be a good mother and Willow is the best mother for Wiley. I do feel for Nina too and the position that she is in caught between both of her daughters and worrying about them and her grandchildren too.
Awe I'm glad that you had Dante tell Maxie about Sam. Poor maxie also can't catch a break and going through the ringer with her family, both of her sisters in the hospital, now she finds out that her best friend "died".
Okay, I loved Cody beating the crap out of Spencer. Course he had to be drunk too but Spencer deserved every bit of that and more for what he and Josslyn were saying about Esme and blaming everything going on in their lives on her instead of taking responsibiity themselves, they are true cowards. And Cody should get a medal but he will probably get arrested. I loved that Cody didn't call Esme his step sister but called her his sister, I really loved that. I love their relationship too.
Awe poor Felicia really is going out of her mind with worry for Esme. She loves her daughter so much and it shows big time. I'm so glad that both Mac and Kevin have Esme's blood type and can donate to her. I wish it could have been from Felicia her mother, but having it be from Mac and Kevin too might help solidify to Esme how much they both care about her and will do anything to help her.
And awe Cameron is really falling for Esme and I think she has fallen for him too she just didn't think he would ever want her. But she has got a long way to go before she should even think about being in a relationship again and I'm no just talking about physically. But they would make a cute couple someday.
Wow Yay Sam's Alive! But bad news Nelle is with her so unfortunately Nelle's reign of terror is not over with yet. I even wander how she pulled off keeping Sam alive when even the doctors think she is dead. But Nelle is very crazy and getting crazier by the minute so anything is possible with her. I'm just ecstatic that Sam is really alive but now her family and friends need to know.
2Spideygirl99As much as I love Willow and Nina and their newfound mother/daughter relationship and I know that Nina would never turn her back on Nelle either even though she is psycho and crazy and needs way more help then even her mother can give her. I do side with Willow, she has both Wiley and Amelia to think about and protect and I don't think Nelle would ever be a good mother and Willow is the best mother for Wiley. I do feel for Nina too and the position that she is in caught between both of her daughters and worrying about them and her grandchildren too.
Awe I'm glad that you had Dante tell Maxie about Sam. Poor maxie also can't catch a break and going through the ringer with her family, both of her sisters in the hospital, now she finds out that her best friend "died".
Okay, I loved Cody beating the crap out of Spencer. Course he had to be drunk too but Spencer deserved every bit of that and more for what he and Josslyn were saying about Esme and blaming everything going on in their lives on her instead of taking responsibiity themselves, they are true cowards. And Cody should get a medal but he will probably get arrested. I loved that Cody didn't call Esme his step sister but called her his sister, I really loved that. I love their relationship too.
Awe poor Felicia really is going out of her mind with worry for Esme. She loves her daughter so much and it shows big time. I'm so glad that both Mac and Kevin have Esme's blood type and can donate to her. I wish it could have been from Felicia her mother, but having it be from Mac and Kevin too might help solidify to Esme how much they both care about her and will do anything to help her.
And awe Cameron is really falling for Esme and I think she has fallen for him too she just didn't think he would ever want her. But she has got a long way to go before she should even think about being in a relationship again and I'm no just talking about physically. But they would make a cute couple someday.
Wow Yay Sam's Alive! But bad news Nelle is with her so unfortunately Nelle's reign of terror is not over with yet. I even wander how she pulled off keeping Sam alive when even the doctors think she is dead. But Nelle is very crazy and getting crazier by the minute so anything is possible with her. I'm just ecstatic that Sam is really alive but now her family and friends need to know.