
5/24/2024 c20 Guest
I'm so glad that Esme decided to accept Felicia's help. I also like how Felicia called out Nikolas's actions.
I'm so glad that Esme decided to accept Felicia's help. I also like how Felicia called out Nikolas's actions.
5/24/2024 c20
20jrchandlerfan1
Thank you everyone for the awesome reviews. I'm going to get back to my original writing for a while, but it was fun to update this for a bit.

Thank you everyone for the awesome reviews. I'm going to get back to my original writing for a while, but it was fun to update this for a bit.
5/24/2024 c19 Guest
Well I guess Esme and Ace technically have a home now. If I were Esme, then I would have some very harsh words for the people that manage my trust fund. Esme isn't allowed access, but Heather is?!
It looks like Esme is close to hitting bottom and Georgie's attitude certainly doesn't help. Hopefully, Felicia tells Maxie about this. Maxie needs to understand the damage her words caused.
Well I guess Esme and Ace technically have a home now. If I were Esme, then I would have some very harsh words for the people that manage my trust fund. Esme isn't allowed access, but Heather is?!
It looks like Esme is close to hitting bottom and Georgie's attitude certainly doesn't help. Hopefully, Felicia tells Maxie about this. Maxie needs to understand the damage her words caused.
5/23/2024 c19
2Spideygirl99
Awe I knew it, Elizabeth's sister wants to raise Scarlett. Dang I don't want her to take her away from TJ and Molly. I would think that she would have to prove herself before she could get custody of the baby. I just want TJ and Molly to have full custody of her and adopt her.
Awe poor Wiley hurt himself. So sweet when Nina helped fix him up and Spiderman bandaids make everything better. ;)
Yep Georgie is officially a brat and James is the sweetest kid ever. Poor Esme :/ And I hope she doesn't believe that letter of Heather's and go with her. I hope someone else finds it and can stop Heather. I really thought the envelope was going to be the dna test that Felicia has. I can't stand Heather and just want her caught so she can't hurt Esme and Ace ever again.
Great chapter and keep them coming, hehe.

Awe I knew it, Elizabeth's sister wants to raise Scarlett. Dang I don't want her to take her away from TJ and Molly. I would think that she would have to prove herself before she could get custody of the baby. I just want TJ and Molly to have full custody of her and adopt her.
Awe poor Wiley hurt himself. So sweet when Nina helped fix him up and Spiderman bandaids make everything better. ;)
Yep Georgie is officially a brat and James is the sweetest kid ever. Poor Esme :/ And I hope she doesn't believe that letter of Heather's and go with her. I hope someone else finds it and can stop Heather. I really thought the envelope was going to be the dna test that Felicia has. I can't stand Heather and just want her caught so she can't hurt Esme and Ace ever again.
Great chapter and keep them coming, hehe.
5/22/2024 c18 Spideygirl99
Awe that's a start, Esme quitting her job because the article would hurt Felicia if it was published. She does care about her too. And the scene with them at the pool, great touch. Of course Maxie would pull away at the sight of Esme and she would project her feelings onto Georgie as well. But James and Bailey Lou would love having more family to hang out and play with. And Ace is just adorable any scene with him in it is a good scene.
I loved that you had Willow stand up to Carly and defend Nina. And her and the kids moving in with Nina, I liked that a lot. Willow has the right to make up her own mind about Nina and not let Carly or Michael dictate it to her. That was a great chapter and much more happier than the last one. :)
Awe that's a start, Esme quitting her job because the article would hurt Felicia if it was published. She does care about her too. And the scene with them at the pool, great touch. Of course Maxie would pull away at the sight of Esme and she would project her feelings onto Georgie as well. But James and Bailey Lou would love having more family to hang out and play with. And Ace is just adorable any scene with him in it is a good scene.
I loved that you had Willow stand up to Carly and defend Nina. And her and the kids moving in with Nina, I liked that a lot. Willow has the right to make up her own mind about Nina and not let Carly or Michael dictate it to her. That was a great chapter and much more happier than the last one. :)
5/22/2024 c17 Spideygirl99
Awe that was a heartbreaking chapter. I'm glad Felicia told Esme that she's her mother but it didn't go well at all. She'll have to show her the proof now or at least first let her calm down. And of course Ryan got so far into her head that she would believe that psychopath over Felicia or anyone else. If and when she learns what Ryan did to Felicia maybe she would change her mind, no she would definitely change her mind. I can't wait to read more to see how they can overcome this.
And wow Spencer is acting like a True Cassadine in recording Esme just to get evidence that he memories are back and will probably take it to the courts and the police in order to take Ace away from her.
And wow Georgie is taking rebellious teenager to a whole new level. I'm wandering why she needed that adapter so bad and why she needs her computer is a matter of life and death. Sounds like a mystery that needs to be solved. Great chapter as always just gutwrenching.
Awe that was a heartbreaking chapter. I'm glad Felicia told Esme that she's her mother but it didn't go well at all. She'll have to show her the proof now or at least first let her calm down. And of course Ryan got so far into her head that she would believe that psychopath over Felicia or anyone else. If and when she learns what Ryan did to Felicia maybe she would change her mind, no she would definitely change her mind. I can't wait to read more to see how they can overcome this.
And wow Spencer is acting like a True Cassadine in recording Esme just to get evidence that he memories are back and will probably take it to the courts and the police in order to take Ace away from her.
And wow Georgie is taking rebellious teenager to a whole new level. I'm wandering why she needed that adapter so bad and why she needs her computer is a matter of life and death. Sounds like a mystery that needs to be solved. Great chapter as always just gutwrenching.
5/22/2024 c14
20jrchandlerfan1
Thank you Guest for all the reviews. You're right that Esme needs professional help. Felicia's still new to her life and Kevin and Laura know how she'll respond if they suggest it. But after reading your comment I realize I should at least have them voice it (onscreen) when Esme isn't in the room and how they don't know how to address it with her. I think they see at this point she needs to trust someone before agreeing to therapy and at this point she doesn't even trust Laura even though she's somewhat comfortable around her.

Thank you Guest for all the reviews. You're right that Esme needs professional help. Felicia's still new to her life and Kevin and Laura know how she'll respond if they suggest it. But after reading your comment I realize I should at least have them voice it (onscreen) when Esme isn't in the room and how they don't know how to address it with her. I think they see at this point she needs to trust someone before agreeing to therapy and at this point she doesn't even trust Laura even though she's somewhat comfortable around her.
5/22/2024 c17 Guest
Poor Esme! It sounds like she's really struggling right now. Which is not good, considering that Spencer and Nikolas are plotting to take Ace away from her. I know that Kevin, Laura, and Felicia all care about Esme, but she needs professional help as well. I'm actually surprised that Kevin hasn't suggested that Esme see a psychiatrist. I think therapy, plus some kind of support group or program geared towards young parents from troubled backgrounds would be really helpful for Esme. That way she can start dealing with her issues and learning how to adult.
Poor Esme! It sounds like she's really struggling right now. Which is not good, considering that Spencer and Nikolas are plotting to take Ace away from her. I know that Kevin, Laura, and Felicia all care about Esme, but she needs professional help as well. I'm actually surprised that Kevin hasn't suggested that Esme see a psychiatrist. I think therapy, plus some kind of support group or program geared towards young parents from troubled backgrounds would be really helpful for Esme. That way she can start dealing with her issues and learning how to adult.
5/21/2024 c16 S
jrchandlerfan1, thanks for the info/feedback about Maxie. I see that she and Felicia have already reconciled in this chapter, and I look forward to seeing how Maxie's attitude towards Esme thaws in the future.
Interesting twist with Scarlett being a Webber/Spencer. I suspect that will bring up bad memories and old resentment between Elizabeth and Sarah, as well as a potential custody battle that someone else in the reviews mentioned. And anything Anti-Carly/Anti-Michael, like Willow and fam moving in with Nina, is good in my book!
jrchandlerfan1, thanks for the info/feedback about Maxie. I see that she and Felicia have already reconciled in this chapter, and I look forward to seeing how Maxie's attitude towards Esme thaws in the future.
Interesting twist with Scarlett being a Webber/Spencer. I suspect that will bring up bad memories and old resentment between Elizabeth and Sarah, as well as a potential custody battle that someone else in the reviews mentioned. And anything Anti-Carly/Anti-Michael, like Willow and fam moving in with Nina, is good in my book!
5/20/2024 c16
2Spideygirl99
This chapter was super amazing. I loved that Mac went to see Maxie at work and convinced her to make things work with her mom. I know that Maxie doesn't trust Esme but she shouldn't put her mom in the position to choose which daughter basically. I know that Felicia won't give up on Esme and she doesn't want to lose her again and she doesn't want to lose Maxie either. And bonus I can't wait until they all find out that Big Georgie is alive and Felicia will have all three of er daughters back again.
Oh and I forgot to include in the last chapter about how much I loved that both Michael and Carly found out that the kids and Willow are moving in with Nina. That was almost worth it to picture smugness wiped off of their faces. And cute little Wiley is so excited about it too.

This chapter was super amazing. I loved that Mac went to see Maxie at work and convinced her to make things work with her mom. I know that Maxie doesn't trust Esme but she shouldn't put her mom in the position to choose which daughter basically. I know that Felicia won't give up on Esme and she doesn't want to lose her again and she doesn't want to lose Maxie either. And bonus I can't wait until they all find out that Big Georgie is alive and Felicia will have all three of er daughters back again.
Oh and I forgot to include in the last chapter about how much I loved that both Michael and Carly found out that the kids and Willow are moving in with Nina. That was almost worth it to picture smugness wiped off of their faces. And cute little Wiley is so excited about it too.
5/20/2024 c15 Spideygirl99
Awe you made Scarlett a part of the Webber/Spencer families. I was really hoping that TJ and Molly would be able to adopt her. But now I'm guessing they'll be some kind of custody battle, but anyways it will be interesting.
Awe I really hope Jake doesn't get hurt again as he wants to investigate Charlotte's disappearance. That's great that Georgie is going to help him that is if she doesn't get herself grounded by Maxie first for being a rebellious teenager. And I can definitely see the sibling squabbles with her and James and Bailey Lou and since they are younger it does look like James and Bailey Lou get away with everything.
Awe you made Scarlett a part of the Webber/Spencer families. I was really hoping that TJ and Molly would be able to adopt her. But now I'm guessing they'll be some kind of custody battle, but anyways it will be interesting.
Awe I really hope Jake doesn't get hurt again as he wants to investigate Charlotte's disappearance. That's great that Georgie is going to help him that is if she doesn't get herself grounded by Maxie first for being a rebellious teenager. And I can definitely see the sibling squabbles with her and James and Bailey Lou and since they are younger it does look like James and Bailey Lou get away with everything.
5/20/2024 c15 Chrissyfan
Awesome update! Georgie and Jake teaming up to help find Charlotte is genius. She will help rescue her Aunt Georgie as well. Oh, Scarlett is a Webber, I love it. I do feel bad for TJ and Molly though. Carly can take several seats and shut up before she opens her big mouth. Hopefully when she ultimately confronts Nina, Nina will make Willow proud and not take the bait or catch the wailing banshee in the act.
Awesome update! Georgie and Jake teaming up to help find Charlotte is genius. She will help rescue her Aunt Georgie as well. Oh, Scarlett is a Webber, I love it. I do feel bad for TJ and Molly though. Carly can take several seats and shut up before she opens her big mouth. Hopefully when she ultimately confronts Nina, Nina will make Willow proud and not take the bait or catch the wailing banshee in the act.
5/20/2024 c14 Guest
Nikolas is such a hypocrite! He blames Esme for not being able to be part of Ace's life because he doesn't have the guts to face the music for his crimes against her. Meanwhile, he spent months holding Esme prisoner with the intention of stealing her baby away and keeping her locked up forever.
I hope his and Spencer's plan to take Ace away from Esme blows up in their faces. Laura better not keep her mouth shut about this!
Nikolas is such a hypocrite! He blames Esme for not being able to be part of Ace's life because he doesn't have the guts to face the music for his crimes against her. Meanwhile, he spent months holding Esme prisoner with the intention of stealing her baby away and keeping her locked up forever.
I hope his and Spencer's plan to take Ace away from Esme blows up in their faces. Laura better not keep her mouth shut about this!
5/20/2024 c13
20jrchandlerfan1
Hi S, I'm not sure if you'll see this. But yes, it was more said in anger and without thought. Her mind is just on Ryan/Esme/Felicia right now and of course herself and big Georgie. She meant that Esme herself is psycho and because Ryan is too, she gets it from him. But it came out the wrong way and she wasn't even thinking about Bailey Lou in the moment. However, little Georgie is going to interpret it that Maxie means everyone in that situation so Maxie is going to regret her words.
Maxie still has abandonment issues and eventually she'll realize that it's stemmed from Frisco, not Felicia. But all of this is triggering her past feelings so she's not thinking clearly. Rest assured, she'll see it from Felicia's point of view eventually, it'll just take some time. And even more time for her to accept Esme and to get to know her for herself and not just based on other's views of her. Maxie is one of the characters I'm excited to develop in this story.
Thank you everyone for the reviews.

Hi S, I'm not sure if you'll see this. But yes, it was more said in anger and without thought. Her mind is just on Ryan/Esme/Felicia right now and of course herself and big Georgie. She meant that Esme herself is psycho and because Ryan is too, she gets it from him. But it came out the wrong way and she wasn't even thinking about Bailey Lou in the moment. However, little Georgie is going to interpret it that Maxie means everyone in that situation so Maxie is going to regret her words.
Maxie still has abandonment issues and eventually she'll realize that it's stemmed from Frisco, not Felicia. But all of this is triggering her past feelings so she's not thinking clearly. Rest assured, she'll see it from Felicia's point of view eventually, it'll just take some time. And even more time for her to accept Esme and to get to know her for herself and not just based on other's views of her. Maxie is one of the characters I'm excited to develop in this story.
Thank you everyone for the reviews.
5/20/2024 c13 Chrissyfan
I love Mac and Felicia. I am glad that he is more understanding of Felicia's situation.
Poor Scout. Sam should get Spinelli to conjure up a little mini cam for her to wear so that she can really prove what Avery and Donna are doing or maybe for them to slip up in front of an adult or two.
I really liked the Felicia and Esme scenes. Hopefully Esme will not reject her once she tells her who she is. It would break Felicia's heart.
Lovely update.
I love Mac and Felicia. I am glad that he is more understanding of Felicia's situation.
Poor Scout. Sam should get Spinelli to conjure up a little mini cam for her to wear so that she can really prove what Avery and Donna are doing or maybe for them to slip up in front of an adult or two.
I really liked the Felicia and Esme scenes. Hopefully Esme will not reject her once she tells her who she is. It would break Felicia's heart.
Lovely update.