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5/19/2024 c13 Guest
Uh-oh. Nikolas is back. He has some nerve thinking that he deserves to raise Ace. I hope he (and Spencer) get shut down hard if they try to take Esme's son away from her. Who do they think has been raising Ace all this time?

I like how Kevin and Felicia are essentially coparenting Esme right now. It looks like the truth about Esme having her memory back is going to come out soon. She'll definitely need their support when she has to face the consequences for what she did to Trina and the others. Hopefully, Esme can get off with house arrest and community service.
5/19/2024 c12 S
Agree with Guest's comment about little Georgie overhearing Maxie's calling Esme a "psycho" because of her father, but I don't know that I'd agree that Maxie's character would say that, considering Bailey Lou. Also, Maxie is familiar with the extreme actions a mother will take to shield her child from potential harm. On the other hand, Maxie is still hurting over Felicia's abandonment (and now her revelation of another child), so it could have just been said in anger without thought. Looking forward to the next chapter!
5/19/2024 c13 2Spideygirl99
Wow Avery deserves a swift kick in the rear end for what she is doing to Scout. Poor Scout doesn't deserve to be bullied and ridiculed at all times by Avery. Avery is acting exactly like Sonny and Ava now.

Awe the Felicia and Esme and Ace scene in the hospital melted my heart. Esme really does need her but I think she's just scared to show that vulnerability again. Maybe the common ground of horses will jumpstart their bonding experiences and then Felicia can slowly lead in that she is really her mother and I think Esme will definitely be relieved that it isn't Heather, at least Esme has one sane and loving parent.

Ugh Nikolas, I really can't stand him and trying to take Spencer and Ace with him this time because he is too much of a coward and would rather run away then face the consequences of his actions. Even though Spencer has been a jerk to Esme, at least he stood up to his father and said that him and Ace both are not going with him.

Great chapter again. :)
5/19/2024 c12 Guest
Well, the conversation between Felicia and Maxie went about as well as expected. I'm wondering about what Georgie is going to do next, especially since Maxie pretty much suggested that Bailey is or will be a psycho. I hope Georgie calls her mother out on that.

I'm glad that you have Kevin actually showing an interest in Esme, but it's sad that she's so scared of him because of "Daddy". Hopefully, the two of them can eventually have a relationship.
5/19/2024 c12 Chrissyfan
Ahhh, there is that true Maxie spirit- me-me-me. Putting Esme aside for a second, the wretched little beast didn't even give one thought to how Esme came about and if and how her mother has recovered from that event. I'll give her some grace to be shocked, but she handled it in true Maxie fashion.

Avery and Donna are their mothers in the making or at very least a Carly in the making. Perhaps Ava will instill a bit of a better mindfulness in her daughter. Honestly if I were Sam, there is no way I would enforce any separate punishment at home, Avery wants to be a bully she can learn to duck or run when her target gets fed up. I'd probably would have the you shouldn't retaliate discussion. Nope as someone who was bullied as a child, I'd probably compliment her on her aim and take her out for ice cream.

I loved the Willow and Nina conversation and the idea that they are going to move in together. Carly will pop a blood vessel.

Great update.
5/18/2024 c8 S
Interesting twist with Georgie being alive! I like that this story has highlighted Felicia and her family.
5/18/2024 c12 Spideygirl99
That was another great chapter. Awe man Avery is another mini Charlotte bully. Poor Scout and now they both got suspended, Avery deserved but Scout didn't. And awe I loved the Willow and Nina part. That would be so sweet if Willow and the kids moved in with Nina. Willow does deserve to get to know Nina without Carly's influence. And oh boy, Maxie reacted to Felicia's news about Esme about as well as I expected. Hopefully or eventually she'll come around. And awe little Georgie heard the whole conversation too and heard her mom call Esme a psycho because of her father and looked at Bailey Lou's picture, so she'll probably think her baby sister is a psycho because of her father now too. Please keep the chapters coming this is really fun to read and I can't wait for more Felicia and Esme interactions.
5/18/2024 c11 Spideygirl99
Awesome chapter again, a couple of typos but that is okay, it was still a great chapter. Awe the first part with Molly and Alexis and baby Scarlett was so sweet. Especially when Scarlett quieted right down when Alexis took a hold of her, grandma's touch. And awe I loved that Felicia told Mac about Esme and he was so supportive, I knew that he would be. But I'm nervous about Maxie's reaction now. And I'm also glad that they know that Heather escaped so it is a matter of time that they'll figure out that it was her that kidnapped Esme and Scarlett.
5/18/2024 c11 Guest
Yeah the Nina/Drew hate sex thing is disgusting and I don't usually put to much mind into stuff like that but I've come to adore Nina and really don't care for this version of Drew. He also has Carly cooties.

Hmm, lesser of two evils... you know I find both of those pairings evil. But I am going to go with Jarly simply for the fact that Jason is annoying me, and I loathe Carly and if they are together, they are a non-entity pairing to occasionally be trash and thrashed but mostly ignored. On the other hand, I have actually come to like Sam a lot and think she and Dante are adorable and GH needs one stable, loving, likable and family-oriented couple and I think Sante fills that bill.
5/18/2024 c11 20jrchandlerfan1
I meant lesser of two evils for you not for me lol
5/18/2024 c9 jrchandlerfan1
For me it wasn't just one thing or one storyline that has turned me off. It's been several big storylines. Honestly the only thing I'll be interested in tuning into is Mac's return and him finding out about Cody. Partly because I've grown quite attached to the Scorpio family but also it's a long-lost parent/child storyline that I think could be decent-probably not perfect because this is GH, but I think it'll be decent since I don't think any of the main mobsters are involved and Carly is on the other side of town (although there was those gag-worthy Felicia/Carly bonding scenes after Bobbie died, so I could be wrong. Since this is GH, I wouldn't be surprised if they even made THIS about Carly somehow). I still think Felicia/Esme would've been more impactful and dramatic if done right. But maybe there will be better results if it's lower keyed with Mac/Cody and maybe less characters involved.

I did try to watch Nina/Willow's scenes last week and even that didn't make me want to come back.

I hear you about Jason's return. I haven't watched and have heard very little about it but none of that surprises me. I know Drew is sleeping around with Nina now, but I have no idea the path that brought them to that point, though I'd bet millions of dollars that Carly forgot about Drew as soon as Jason came back. Out of curiosity, I know you can't stand either Jasam or Jarly, but if it had to be one or the other which would be the lesser of two evils for me? For me I'd say Jarly. I found them over the top and hilarious their last go and couldn't stop laughing. Plus I figure even if Jasam were together Carly would still be in the middle of their relationship anyway, so why not just go full out and have Jarly lol. Although I've grown to hate Carly even more than before Jason left, so maybe I'd change my mind this time.
5/18/2024 c1 Chrissyfan
Hey, I'm alright. Same old -same old. The last full episode I watched was Epiphany's memorial. I tuned in a bit when SBu came back but if I wasn't on Carly overload before I am now and refuse to watch him fritter away his life because he had to protect Carly. While it makes sense that Jake is pushing back against Jason, I wanted them to actually have an on screen relationship. I've given up on Elizabeth/Jason pairing. So he'll circle around Carly (gag) or go back to Sam eventually. So it will be the same monotonous thing. Not enough Elizabeth and Webber boys to make me sit through all the crap I don't care about.
5/18/2024 c8 jrchandlerfan1
Hi Chrissyfan, how are you? I'm taking a break from my other writing and felt motivated to continue this. I haven't watched a full episode of the show in months. I'm glad you enjoyed my updates.
5/17/2024 c10 2Spideygirl99
Awe that was a great chapter again. I'm glad that TJ and Molly are able to take baby Scarlett home with them. I can't wait until Felici can tell Mac and Maxie about Esme. But I have a feeling that Maxie won't be receptive at all. I think Mac will be though and he'll be supportive of Felicia and Esme. I'm glad that Dante believes that Esme didn't kidnap Scarlett and he let her go. I just hope that Heather is caught soon. I can't wait too see another Felicia and Esme scene since their scene in chapter 9 melted me like goo.
5/17/2024 c10 Chrissyfan
Hey, you are updating again and I am caught up on the updates. I hope Esme can clear her name fully. Maxie is going to flip out in finding out Esme is her sister. But, Maxie is annoying anyway. But, nice to see that you have brought back Georgie. Well done. I hope she and Charlotte can get away.
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