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Fun fact, I was born in 2006, August.
So percy jackson started adventuring when I was born
15nexusplayerFun fact, I was born in 2006, August.
So percy jackson started adventuring when I was born
12/17/2024 c28 Crywolf178
This story is an interesting premise though it could definitely do with a bit of proofreading.
Nothing too major just random things like the occasional kissing or incorrect words, punctuation and grammar issues and the like.
Again those aren’t too big a deal and are an easy fix should you ever decide to go back over the story. I will also mention you had a random sentence in this chapter in the Olympus section where Dio thinks about the manga from his first life in French for some random reason before it goes back to English.
My only true complaint is this story could be so much more than a crack fic. The premise is truly awesome, having someone with meta knowledge in the body of the only Olympian in PJO that never really appears larger than life, except for a brief scene where he threatens Percy in the third book.
Seeing a person raise up and use the powers of the god of wine and madness to make changes to the story would have been truly awesome. Seeing him use those powers that aren’t super flashy or whatever to do it would be even more impressive.
Yet that isn’t what happens, instead the MC just kind of does whatever random thing pops into their head and it always works out perfectly. Maybe not always positively like in the case of Uriel but still Uriel for some unknown reason chose to let him go with the knowledge about what he has been up to?
I’d say even that set back was by far the best possible outcome and it took no planning or preparation just the MC screwing around and exploring.
I would love to see you rewrite this series in the style of your “curse these old bones”. Maybe not all serious like that story but at least with a plot other than throwing everything at the wall and seeing what sticks.
Don’t get me wrong I am not trashing this story, I’ve been binge reading it and am already more than halfway through. I just keep losing immersion as the MC continues to do random and nonsensical things and always comes out ahead.
This story is an interesting premise though it could definitely do with a bit of proofreading.
Nothing too major just random things like the occasional kissing or incorrect words, punctuation and grammar issues and the like.
Again those aren’t too big a deal and are an easy fix should you ever decide to go back over the story. I will also mention you had a random sentence in this chapter in the Olympus section where Dio thinks about the manga from his first life in French for some random reason before it goes back to English.
My only true complaint is this story could be so much more than a crack fic. The premise is truly awesome, having someone with meta knowledge in the body of the only Olympian in PJO that never really appears larger than life, except for a brief scene where he threatens Percy in the third book.
Seeing a person raise up and use the powers of the god of wine and madness to make changes to the story would have been truly awesome. Seeing him use those powers that aren’t super flashy or whatever to do it would be even more impressive.
Yet that isn’t what happens, instead the MC just kind of does whatever random thing pops into their head and it always works out perfectly. Maybe not always positively like in the case of Uriel but still Uriel for some unknown reason chose to let him go with the knowledge about what he has been up to?
I’d say even that set back was by far the best possible outcome and it took no planning or preparation just the MC screwing around and exploring.
I would love to see you rewrite this series in the style of your “curse these old bones”. Maybe not all serious like that story but at least with a plot other than throwing everything at the wall and seeing what sticks.
Don’t get me wrong I am not trashing this story, I’ve been binge reading it and am already more than halfway through. I just keep losing immersion as the MC continues to do random and nonsensical things and always comes out ahead.
10/7/2024 c53 Obsidian Dreamweaver
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "It's me, Dio!," and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a visually compelling comic book.
As a professional comic artist, I would love to collaborate with you to bring your vision to life as a fully illustrated comic. This project would be commission-based, and I would work closely with you to ensure that every page captures the essence of your story.
If this opportunity excites you, I’d be happy to discuss the process in more detail, including pricing, timelines, and any creative ideas you have in mind.
Please feel free to reach out to me via any of the following:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: Lidi18337530019
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail . com
Thank you for considering this collaboration. I look forward to the possibility of working together to create something truly extraordinary!
Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "It's me, Dio!," and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a visually compelling comic book.
As a professional comic artist, I would love to collaborate with you to bring your vision to life as a fully illustrated comic. This project would be commission-based, and I would work closely with you to ensure that every page captures the essence of your story.
If this opportunity excites you, I’d be happy to discuss the process in more detail, including pricing, timelines, and any creative ideas you have in mind.
Please feel free to reach out to me via any of the following:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Twitter: Lidi18337530019
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail . com
Thank you for considering this collaboration. I look forward to the possibility of working together to create something truly extraordinary!
Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
9/28/2024 c52 SDeep2026
Fantastic stuff! I never expected Hermes to be the one following Athena, but I doubt that Athena's dead.
Fantastic stuff! I never expected Hermes to be the one following Athena, but I doubt that Athena's dead.
9/25/2024 c9 1Vormiam
Yeah, the writing was good for a while, but I can tell you're starting to use chatgpt more and it's really bringing down the quality. Like with the scene where the Dream Titan lies to MC, GPTs overexplaining and overdramatizing is really annoying and just makes you want to roll your eyes. Or the scene where the kids run into the Laundry room and the AI describes Medusa. It was so bad there it felt like I was reading My Immortal for a second. There were other examples, but those were the most glaring.
This is where I stop reading, but I hope you stop relyjng on GPT in the future, your writing is better without it. If we wanted to listen to an AI write us a story, we would just go ask it for one ourselves. If you are using it to save time, don't, it's not worth it. Readers would much prefer to read good writing once in a while over reading trash everyday.
1VormiamYeah, the writing was good for a while, but I can tell you're starting to use chatgpt more and it's really bringing down the quality. Like with the scene where the Dream Titan lies to MC, GPTs overexplaining and overdramatizing is really annoying and just makes you want to roll your eyes. Or the scene where the kids run into the Laundry room and the AI describes Medusa. It was so bad there it felt like I was reading My Immortal for a second. There were other examples, but those were the most glaring.
This is where I stop reading, but I hope you stop relyjng on GPT in the future, your writing is better without it. If we wanted to listen to an AI write us a story, we would just go ask it for one ourselves. If you are using it to save time, don't, it's not worth it. Readers would much prefer to read good writing once in a while over reading trash everyday.
9/22/2024 c16 Residenthobo
Uriel being evil doesn't really make sense, given the DxD crossover. If he is evil then he should Fall, which clearly he hasn't.
Not to say that the Fallen are evil by definition in DxD, but the Angels certainly are good by definition - and Uriel is blatantly evil.
Uriel being evil doesn't really make sense, given the DxD crossover. If he is evil then he should Fall, which clearly he hasn't.
Not to say that the Fallen are evil by definition in DxD, but the Angels certainly are good by definition - and Uriel is blatantly evil.
9/22/2024 c17 darick.klomp
I won't lie around 7 chapters in I was really hooked but after that it has so much chaos as to be almost a crack fic. It is still entertaining but because of lemon elements can't recommend to my friends. Keep up the good work.
I won't lie around 7 chapters in I was really hooked but after that it has so much chaos as to be almost a crack fic. It is still entertaining but because of lemon elements can't recommend to my friends. Keep up the good work.