10/7 c1 ZoyeZest
Hi ,
I just finished reading your story, The Eternal Battle of Sorcery, and I wanted to reach out because it really touched a chord in me. Your characters and world hold great potential for visual storytelling, and I would be more than happy to see your narrative transform into a visual comic.
Why I'm Reaching Out
I'm an enthusiastic artist adaptation-oriented from written works into visual comics, and your story stood out for me in terms of richness in character development and the clever way you weaves emotion into every scene. Your deep characters and vivid imagery of their world hold incredible potential for a visual storytelling adaptation. I feel that with the right visual treatment, your story can engage a wider audience and set an immersive experience for your readers.
A Little About Me
My artist name is "ZoyeZest," and I admire stories that speak at a visual level. I've worked with numerous authors on a commission basis to turn their stories into comics, capturing the feel of their stories while giving another dimension to the telling. My work is fueled by one simple passion: bringing stories to life in visual form. And I am dedicated to making sure your vision comes to life in a way that will strike a chord with your audience.
Let's Talk
I'd love to flesh out this idea with you some more and get some of your thoughts. Whether it's a full adaptation or just wanting to see some ideas, I'm here to collaborate and make sure that it is your vision at the very front. Since this would be on a commissioned basis, I can also give you more information on my pricing and what this process would look like.
Looking forward to hearing from you, and thank you in advance for considering this collaboration.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord: baran59354
insta : baran59354
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Hi ,
I just finished reading your story, The Eternal Battle of Sorcery, and I wanted to reach out because it really touched a chord in me. Your characters and world hold great potential for visual storytelling, and I would be more than happy to see your narrative transform into a visual comic.
Why I'm Reaching Out
I'm an enthusiastic artist adaptation-oriented from written works into visual comics, and your story stood out for me in terms of richness in character development and the clever way you weaves emotion into every scene. Your deep characters and vivid imagery of their world hold incredible potential for a visual storytelling adaptation. I feel that with the right visual treatment, your story can engage a wider audience and set an immersive experience for your readers.
A Little About Me
My artist name is "ZoyeZest," and I admire stories that speak at a visual level. I've worked with numerous authors on a commission basis to turn their stories into comics, capturing the feel of their stories while giving another dimension to the telling. My work is fueled by one simple passion: bringing stories to life in visual form. And I am dedicated to making sure your vision comes to life in a way that will strike a chord with your audience.
Let's Talk
I'd love to flesh out this idea with you some more and get some of your thoughts. Whether it's a full adaptation or just wanting to see some ideas, I'm here to collaborate and make sure that it is your vision at the very front. Since this would be on a commissioned basis, I can also give you more information on my pricing and what this process would look like.
Looking forward to hearing from you, and thank you in advance for considering this collaboration.
Best regards,
Baran
Discord: baran59354
insta : baran59354
Tumblr : ZoyeZest
reddit : ZoyeZest
5/13 c8 Kabuto S. Inferno
Lightning and Thunder. He is the "God" of Storms, after all. Should have seen that one coming lol.
Gotta say, I really enjoyed the subtle world building in this one (along with the last chapter); delving deeper into the overall mythos of ancient Curses and how they were made, the expansion of history in regards to Yuki's own clan, the Wizarding World's quiet interactions with that of Jujutsu Society, and Raijin himself.
Does make me wonder where Yuki stands in relation to the rest of her family, considering her candidacy as a Star Plasma Vessel.
Also makes me wonder if the Tsukumo family have their own Inherited Technique, or if they were just known for producing Jujutsu Sorcerers with strong CTs. Cause with Raijin have fought against an ancestor of Yuki's, well, it stands to reason that it's something he would personally point out.
In a way, going up against a Curse of Raijin's variety makes for a perfect breeding ground to rapidly develop Yuki's own talents, too - and propel her to a level that made her a serious threat against the likes of Kenjaku later on. After all, it's only when a Sorcerer is near death do they truly become stronger, evolving leaps and bounds beyond what they would have normally been capable of were they fighting normally. JJK is riddled with such examples.
So I don't doubt Yuki will find a way to turn the fight completely around on its head. Rather, the question remains on the path.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, as always.
Lightning and Thunder. He is the "God" of Storms, after all. Should have seen that one coming lol.
Gotta say, I really enjoyed the subtle world building in this one (along with the last chapter); delving deeper into the overall mythos of ancient Curses and how they were made, the expansion of history in regards to Yuki's own clan, the Wizarding World's quiet interactions with that of Jujutsu Society, and Raijin himself.
Does make me wonder where Yuki stands in relation to the rest of her family, considering her candidacy as a Star Plasma Vessel.
Also makes me wonder if the Tsukumo family have their own Inherited Technique, or if they were just known for producing Jujutsu Sorcerers with strong CTs. Cause with Raijin have fought against an ancestor of Yuki's, well, it stands to reason that it's something he would personally point out.
In a way, going up against a Curse of Raijin's variety makes for a perfect breeding ground to rapidly develop Yuki's own talents, too - and propel her to a level that made her a serious threat against the likes of Kenjaku later on. After all, it's only when a Sorcerer is near death do they truly become stronger, evolving leaps and bounds beyond what they would have normally been capable of were they fighting normally. JJK is riddled with such examples.
So I don't doubt Yuki will find a way to turn the fight completely around on its head. Rather, the question remains on the path.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, as always.
5/11 c1 Romeperson
Really enjoyed thenchapter however ther have been multiple continity errors with JJK. Domain amplification i belive was something only kenjaku could do and he showed it to the cursed spirits and Sukuna. So Yuki being able to do it doesn’t make much sense. Also having a domain and being able to use RCT at 15 seems a bit too much. We know she is talented but even born prodigies such as Gojo can’t do that. Yuji is is an exeption because he literally had sukuna in his body and with all the body seapping he did with people in the manga.
Really enjoyed thenchapter however ther have been multiple continity errors with JJK. Domain amplification i belive was something only kenjaku could do and he showed it to the cursed spirits and Sukuna. So Yuki being able to do it doesn’t make much sense. Also having a domain and being able to use RCT at 15 seems a bit too much. We know she is talented but even born prodigies such as Gojo can’t do that. Yuji is is an exeption because he literally had sukuna in his body and with all the body seapping he did with people in the manga.
5/8 c1 nnnnmhughuuhhjiijj
I love the prose, grammar, spelling are all good. Pacing, worldbuilding and characters are great, damn, this is a straight homerun.
I love the prose, grammar, spelling are all good. Pacing, worldbuilding and characters are great, damn, this is a straight homerun.
4/30 c7 Kabuto S. Inferno
There's a certain benefit to picking Yuki as the character to start off this changing of events/merging of the worlds. Not just because she's a known world traveler, but also because of her general attitude towards most things (and her habit of picking up child prodigies along her travels). She's fluid, like water, and enjoys the freedom of adventure far more than the responsibilities she has as a Jujutsu Sorcerer.
Which is, perhaps, a common trait among Star Plasma candidates. The desire to see the world in all of its glory, but being bound by a potential destiny to suffer forever remaining in a singular location.
Of course, all of this is to say that given where she is in terms of age and timeline, much can still be explored with her. Especially in regards to something Gege never revealed: Her Domain Expansion. Against something like Raijin, she'll need it. Although it begs the question of how it should be executed. I'm curious to see if you intend to go down that route.
Likewise, I'm interested in see how the Wizarding World will shatter with Dumbledore's outing, along with the rise of influence that Jujutsu society will undoubtedly have. I'm sure the fight to come will effectively demonstrate just how different Jujutsu Sorcerers really are.
On another note, not too surprising that Bill seems to be getting along with Yuki. The man does have an affinity for blondes, after all.
Well then, until the next one!
There's a certain benefit to picking Yuki as the character to start off this changing of events/merging of the worlds. Not just because she's a known world traveler, but also because of her general attitude towards most things (and her habit of picking up child prodigies along her travels). She's fluid, like water, and enjoys the freedom of adventure far more than the responsibilities she has as a Jujutsu Sorcerer.
Which is, perhaps, a common trait among Star Plasma candidates. The desire to see the world in all of its glory, but being bound by a potential destiny to suffer forever remaining in a singular location.
Of course, all of this is to say that given where she is in terms of age and timeline, much can still be explored with her. Especially in regards to something Gege never revealed: Her Domain Expansion. Against something like Raijin, she'll need it. Although it begs the question of how it should be executed. I'm curious to see if you intend to go down that route.
Likewise, I'm interested in see how the Wizarding World will shatter with Dumbledore's outing, along with the rise of influence that Jujutsu society will undoubtedly have. I'm sure the fight to come will effectively demonstrate just how different Jujutsu Sorcerers really are.
On another note, not too surprising that Bill seems to be getting along with Yuki. The man does have an affinity for blondes, after all.
Well then, until the next one!
3/6 c6 Kabuto S. Inferno
Talk about upending a world, huh.
Been a hot minute since I've left a review for this story. Glad to see it's still going on strong. A shame though it hasn't gotten as many reviews/readers as I think it should, but both will eventually come with time.
I'm also glad to see how well you've managed to intermix the worlds of JJK with that of Harry Potter. In theory, it doesn't seem so hard. But when put into practice, well, I'm sure you already know how detailed one has to get to explain away certain facets of Jujutsu and Magical Society when thrown up against one another. So congrats on that. Really. It's quite the achievement.
Gotta say though, I'm more impressed with actual direction of the story itself. Never did I think someone like Minerva would end up playing such a pivotal role as she has, much less lead to greater revelations because of it. I'm damn impressed. More than that though, I'm pretty glad you went with such a decision. It's certainly paid plenty of dividends by now.
Does make me wonder though what her role will be later on for this story, as I can't imagine she'll feel too enthused to stick around after this whole mess is finally settled. Curious to see where that goes.
Also: Like it was already mentioned in this chapter, Harry being a natural-born Sorcerer does open a can of worms that I'm sure Dumbledore has been keeping on the down-low for quite some time. Just makes ya think how deep the web of secrecy and manipulation goes.
But on another note, I think some people might be heavily underestimating just how busted something like Adhesion can be when used to its furthest extent. Anyone who has read the Stormlight Archive can likely attest to the fact that Adhesion is a bit like a sleeping dragon - it doesn't seem all that dangerous until it opens its eyes.
Speaking of, damn is the Wizarding World going to be in for a surprise when they learn about Sukuna being a thing.
In any case, looking forward to the next chapter. Until then!
Talk about upending a world, huh.
Been a hot minute since I've left a review for this story. Glad to see it's still going on strong. A shame though it hasn't gotten as many reviews/readers as I think it should, but both will eventually come with time.
I'm also glad to see how well you've managed to intermix the worlds of JJK with that of Harry Potter. In theory, it doesn't seem so hard. But when put into practice, well, I'm sure you already know how detailed one has to get to explain away certain facets of Jujutsu and Magical Society when thrown up against one another. So congrats on that. Really. It's quite the achievement.
Gotta say though, I'm more impressed with actual direction of the story itself. Never did I think someone like Minerva would end up playing such a pivotal role as she has, much less lead to greater revelations because of it. I'm damn impressed. More than that though, I'm pretty glad you went with such a decision. It's certainly paid plenty of dividends by now.
Does make me wonder though what her role will be later on for this story, as I can't imagine she'll feel too enthused to stick around after this whole mess is finally settled. Curious to see where that goes.
Also: Like it was already mentioned in this chapter, Harry being a natural-born Sorcerer does open a can of worms that I'm sure Dumbledore has been keeping on the down-low for quite some time. Just makes ya think how deep the web of secrecy and manipulation goes.
But on another note, I think some people might be heavily underestimating just how busted something like Adhesion can be when used to its furthest extent. Anyone who has read the Stormlight Archive can likely attest to the fact that Adhesion is a bit like a sleeping dragon - it doesn't seem all that dangerous until it opens its eyes.
Speaking of, damn is the Wizarding World going to be in for a surprise when they learn about Sukuna being a thing.
In any case, looking forward to the next chapter. Until then!
2/25 c5 A-mc-J
feels like there's something missing between the start of this chapter and the previous chapter.
feels like there's something missing between the start of this chapter and the previous chapter.
2/25 c5 James Birdsong
Good story obviously!
Good story obviously!
2/14 c4 GoldQuartz
OK, I'm guessing his technique isn't truly adhesion, perhaps something better. I'm not fully expecting him to be Special Grade, but I'll admit that I hope he will be
OK, I'm guessing his technique isn't truly adhesion, perhaps something better. I'm not fully expecting him to be Special Grade, but I'll admit that I hope he will be
1/31 c3 GoldQuartz
Harry needs to have both magic and CE, otherwise why make this story
Madam Pomfrey is definitely under Dumbledore's control
Harry needs to have both magic and CE, otherwise why make this story
Madam Pomfrey is definitely under Dumbledore's control