for The End Of Falsehood6/11 c15 Laurie Kenneth
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling !
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story. It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there. You’ve got a true gift for storytelling !
4/13 c15 rexlapis863
damn, indef hiatus. And it's been a long time too. Congrats on the married life though
damn, indef hiatus. And it's been a long time too. Congrats on the married life though
11/28/2024 c15 Guest
Congratulations on you marriage dude
Looking forward to next chapters and dw we'll wait for as long as you need
Congratulations on you marriage dude
Looking forward to next chapters and dw we'll wait for as long as you need
11/25/2024 c15 Necromancy94
Well, at least you told us most writers just completely abandon their stories without explanation
Well, at least you told us most writers just completely abandon their stories without explanation
11/25/2024 c15 Mr.no6ody
congratulations too your marriage hope you have a long and happy life together
congratulations too your marriage hope you have a long and happy life together
11/25/2024 c15 Agile Bite
congratulations to you for getting married.
and will be patiently waiting for next chapter.
congratulations to you for getting married.
and will be patiently waiting for next chapter.
11/9/2024 c1 Guest
I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work
I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work
10/31/2024 c6 whitevamp001
Interesting FF, But I feel that Rimuru is too much of a pacifist. And I feel that since the Tenma war is over, Rimuru would be a bit more into defending his world, and taking a more decisive action.
Interesting FF, But I feel that Rimuru is too much of a pacifist. And I feel that since the Tenma war is over, Rimuru would be a bit more into defending his world, and taking a more decisive action.
10/2/2024 c13 kopikudengannya
The Story is Well - Known For Deep Research just for enjoyment of their reader, Perfecto Adiano For Creator
The Story is Well - Known For Deep Research just for enjoyment of their reader, Perfecto Adiano For Creator
9/16/2024 c1 
2Random0915
you have pretty good writing ability, although it seems that its heavily hindered by grammar issues
if you'd like, im willing to grammar check for you!
2Random0915you have pretty good writing ability, although it seems that its heavily hindered by grammar issues
if you'd like, im willing to grammar check for you!