
11/10/2024 c86 AnakinSmom
Such a long and dangerous journey for them. I'm so glad they finally found happiness together. Thank you for sharing this with all of us!
Such a long and dangerous journey for them. I'm so glad they finally found happiness together. Thank you for sharing this with all of us!
11/10/2024 c86 Guest
Amazing
Amazing
11/10/2024 c86 woosh48
Thank you so much for this story! It was quite a journey. Love where they ended up. The last chapter was amazing!
Thank you so much for this story! It was quite a journey. Love where they ended up. The last chapter was amazing!
11/7/2024 c85 midnitereader
Bella took the courage to confront Edward and show him what they had created. This reunion was so sweet, loved it. Brought me to tears. He was so confused that he might put her in danger. He had created a new life for himself, hiding from those that might still be looking for him. But he has another chance for happiness with the woman he loves.
Bella took the courage to confront Edward and show him what they had created. This reunion was so sweet, loved it. Brought me to tears. He was so confused that he might put her in danger. He had created a new life for himself, hiding from those that might still be looking for him. But he has another chance for happiness with the woman he loves.
11/7/2024 c85 leinchen
oh wow ... I'm out of words, sorry.
But they are really united now ...
But I'm still curious how they will fare with their new life... cant't wait for the next chapter 8and myabe you'll extend it ;-) so we don't have tp part with them.
oh wow ... I'm out of words, sorry.
But they are really united now ...
But I'm still curious how they will fare with their new life... cant't wait for the next chapter 8and myabe you'll extend it ;-) so we don't have tp part with them.
11/7/2024 c84 midnitereader
Alice is a good source of information. They had an escape plan. Edward gave everything up for his sister.
Alice is a good source of information. They had an escape plan. Edward gave everything up for his sister.
11/6/2024 c82 midnitereader
An honest talk between Alice and Bella. His family never wanted Edward in that life. But the Major had other plans. His selfishness broke Edward.
An honest talk between Alice and Bella. His family never wanted Edward in that life. But the Major had other plans. His selfishness broke Edward.
11/5/2024 c85 readicted
Somehow even when we know their reunion is imminent in this epilogue, you managed to spin it in surprising and unexpected ways, all while keeping their dynamics consistent There was shock and disbelief. There was despair and self loathing, there was fear and anger, there was sadness and regret, there was hope and awe, there was humility and smugness, there was confessions and promises, and there was love. Edward has been going by Sam, but he said she could call him whatever she wanted. I guess they'll need to come up with a new story. Old man Paul surely is watching. He seems to see everything. Once again Jess is amazing. Loved this chapter.
Somehow even when we know their reunion is imminent in this epilogue, you managed to spin it in surprising and unexpected ways, all while keeping their dynamics consistent There was shock and disbelief. There was despair and self loathing, there was fear and anger, there was sadness and regret, there was hope and awe, there was humility and smugness, there was confessions and promises, and there was love. Edward has been going by Sam, but he said she could call him whatever she wanted. I guess they'll need to come up with a new story. Old man Paul surely is watching. He seems to see everything. Once again Jess is amazing. Loved this chapter.