for The Chronicles of Time4/7 c40 Guest
This story started so intriguing and promising but I’m wondering if you don’t know where to take it now with the sporadic posting. Life does happen of course but the beginning was so consistent as if you knew where to take the story. Usually when slow downs happen it’s writers block
This story started so intriguing and promising but I’m wondering if you don’t know where to take it now with the sporadic posting. Life does happen of course but the beginning was so consistent as if you knew where to take the story. Usually when slow downs happen it’s writers block
2/28 c38 Rolange
Aww, I hope Edward and Bella find their way back to each other.
I thought the news Edward was getting was about his mother’s death, surprised it was his father’s death. Ow he’s lost both parents (not that they were very good parents), but what does that mean in the grand scheme of things?
Aww, I hope Edward and Bella find their way back to each other.
I thought the news Edward was getting was about his mother’s death, surprised it was his father’s death. Ow he’s lost both parents (not that they were very good parents), but what does that mean in the grand scheme of things?
2/25 c40 biblepam
Thanks for the update. At least Edward is not alone in his quest for Bella, though the death of his father has changed his role in life.
Thanks for the update. At least Edward is not alone in his quest for Bella, though the death of his father has changed his role in life.
2/25 c40 midnitereader
Poor Edward. But Carlisle is right, Bella is clever. She will find a way. And Rosalie must come home.
Poor Edward. But Carlisle is right, Bella is clever. She will find a way. And Rosalie must come home.
2/24 c40 Rita01tx
Without Carlisle, Alice and Jasper, Edward would be completely crushed at Bella's disappearance!
Without Carlisle, Alice and Jasper, Edward would be completely crushed at Bella's disappearance!
2/24 c40 velvetWhispers
I am intrigued by this story and wish the updates were more often . but this is truly a great story.
I am intrigued by this story and wish the updates were more often . but this is truly a great story.
2/24 c40 
92Paliia
I wonder if Edward's father's death was going to happen even if Bella was still there. I remember Bella told him about the Russian monarchy coming to an end, does he remember it? was he the reason or the catalyst of that change in history?
can't wait to read more!
92PaliiaI wonder if Edward's father's death was going to happen even if Bella was still there. I remember Bella told him about the Russian monarchy coming to an end, does he remember it? was he the reason or the catalyst of that change in history?
can't wait to read more!
2/23 c40 2NKubie
I wonder if the curse of the Ruby is what caused Bella to time travel when she shouldn't have. or maybe the Ruby is the key to getting Bella and Edward back together. or both. I'm also wondering if the death of Edward's father is what causes that branch of the family with Rosalie to veer off into new territory. Hmmm.
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
2NKubieI wonder if the curse of the Ruby is what caused Bella to time travel when she shouldn't have. or maybe the Ruby is the key to getting Bella and Edward back together. or both. I'm also wondering if the death of Edward's father is what causes that branch of the family with Rosalie to veer off into new territory. Hmmm.
Stay safe and well!
xo
Nan
2/22 c40 traceybuie
Poor Edward is distraught at his inability to figure out a way to find Bella. I am relieved that his family and friends believe him and are willing to help. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Poor Edward is distraught at his inability to figure out a way to find Bella. I am relieved that his family and friends believe him and are willing to help. Thanks for writing and sharing.
2/22 c40 KatHat4
What the heartbreak for Edward to endure, first losing the baby, then Bella, then his father. Maybe that's why Bella can't find him as he's the Duke of Devonshire - thinking it's his father.
What was the meaning of Aditi saying traces of Bella had been there in the temple hundreds of years before?
I hope there is some way they can be together again.
What the heartbreak for Edward to endure, first losing the baby, then Bella, then his father. Maybe that's why Bella can't find him as he's the Duke of Devonshire - thinking it's his father.
What was the meaning of Aditi saying traces of Bella had been there in the temple hundreds of years before?
I hope there is some way they can be together again.
2/22 c40 1Alice's White Rabbit
I feel so bad for Edward that the journey back to the jungle wasn't as fruitful as he thought it might be. But, I have a feeling Alice is going to be really helpful in finding Bella.
Thanks!
Sally
1Alice's White RabbitI feel so bad for Edward that the journey back to the jungle wasn't as fruitful as he thought it might be. But, I have a feeling Alice is going to be really helpful in finding Bella.
Thanks!
Sally