for Duel of Fate4/2 c23 Guest
Almost a year since you updated this. Hope you find time in future to pick this up again
Almost a year since you updated this. Hope you find time in future to pick this up again
3/22 c8 briarni58
I have read every word you have put on FanFiction. I find your writing is excellent in every story I've read, except this one. Well your writing is still excellent - I just can't stand Malfoy getting one over on anyone. He needs to DIE very painfully.
I have read every word you have put on FanFiction. I find your writing is excellent in every story I've read, except this one. Well your writing is still excellent - I just can't stand Malfoy getting one over on anyone. He needs to DIE very painfully.
3/13 c4 Mutant Ascension
I forgot to comment on it first chapter but your comment that if wizards weren't copying muggle inventions Then Al's wouldn't still be the main form of delivery with wizards and witches is kind of dumb because last I checked we muggles still have mail delivery men And owls would be the magical worlds equivalent of that they are faster And more secure and as we know the magical world has other methods of communication such as fire calling each other. Or if they prefer they can simply create their own unique versions of Communication like the communication mirror That Sirius sent to Harry in the fifth book that is pretty much facetime and as you can see wizards and witches came up with it along before muggles. So unlike in the mobile world where citizens have to wait for some tech giant or the government to create some form of communication for them witches and wizards can create their own if they want it badly enough.
I forgot to comment on it first chapter but your comment that if wizards weren't copying muggle inventions Then Al's wouldn't still be the main form of delivery with wizards and witches is kind of dumb because last I checked we muggles still have mail delivery men And owls would be the magical worlds equivalent of that they are faster And more secure and as we know the magical world has other methods of communication such as fire calling each other. Or if they prefer they can simply create their own unique versions of Communication like the communication mirror That Sirius sent to Harry in the fifth book that is pretty much facetime and as you can see wizards and witches came up with it along before muggles. So unlike in the mobile world where citizens have to wait for some tech giant or the government to create some form of communication for them witches and wizards can create their own if they want it badly enough.
3/13 c3 Mutant Ascension
Funny how Flitwick Has so much to say when he is the one failing his responsibilities and duties last I checked as a head of house he's supposed to be aware of what his students are doing he is supposed to be checking on The well-being of his students and obviously he has done absolutely none of that otherwise he would have been aware of the bullying because this has been going on since Luna started hogwarts. And yet not once did he see anything so he is the one failing his duties and responsibility yet the little f***** has so much mouth. But then again this is typical behavior of all of these teachers in hogwarts whenever they fail to perform their responsibilities and duties it's the students fault not theirs. It is a d*** shame when the biggest bully in that entire school Severus Snape There's a better job as head of house than all the rest of them he at least seems to know what's going on with his students unlike all the rest of them. Had he fulfilled his duties like he was supposed to Harry would have never needed to do any of this because he would have handled the situation already but he did not which is why this was necessary who in the hell would allow this man to handle the situation when he's already failed to do so for years.
Also why would Harry need to go back to the orphanage? He is not a muggle and he has his family's inheritance which means he has the wealth and property necessary to live on his own and he's old enough to live on his own. I don't see why he would need to go back to a muggle orphanage he is not the boy who live being manipulated by albus dumbledore that he needs to go back to his abusive muggle relatives For his so-called protection and theirs. Seriously if you're gonna change stuff then you gotta go all the way with it to its logical conclusion.
Funny how Flitwick Has so much to say when he is the one failing his responsibilities and duties last I checked as a head of house he's supposed to be aware of what his students are doing he is supposed to be checking on The well-being of his students and obviously he has done absolutely none of that otherwise he would have been aware of the bullying because this has been going on since Luna started hogwarts. And yet not once did he see anything so he is the one failing his duties and responsibility yet the little f***** has so much mouth. But then again this is typical behavior of all of these teachers in hogwarts whenever they fail to perform their responsibilities and duties it's the students fault not theirs. It is a d*** shame when the biggest bully in that entire school Severus Snape There's a better job as head of house than all the rest of them he at least seems to know what's going on with his students unlike all the rest of them. Had he fulfilled his duties like he was supposed to Harry would have never needed to do any of this because he would have handled the situation already but he did not which is why this was necessary who in the hell would allow this man to handle the situation when he's already failed to do so for years.
Also why would Harry need to go back to the orphanage? He is not a muggle and he has his family's inheritance which means he has the wealth and property necessary to live on his own and he's old enough to live on his own. I don't see why he would need to go back to a muggle orphanage he is not the boy who live being manipulated by albus dumbledore that he needs to go back to his abusive muggle relatives For his so-called protection and theirs. Seriously if you're gonna change stuff then you gotta go all the way with it to its logical conclusion.
2/17 c22 AerynS
You've done well to write and publish 23 chapters in 7 months time. Kudos to you! Looking forward to reading more.
You've done well to write and publish 23 chapters in 7 months time. Kudos to you! Looking forward to reading more.
1/14 c23 Guest
Long time no update
Long time no update
12/8/2024 c23 
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Great story so far and I like how Harry is building his friends and family. Thanks for sharing!
3ObsessedWithHPFanFicGreat story so far and I like how Harry is building his friends and family. Thanks for sharing!
11/24/2024 c23 13Freddie Rindklip
It has been a while since you updated. How much does fanfic pay again? If/when the next update occurs will be then. Write as your muse allows.
13Freddie RindklipIt has been a while since you updated. How much does fanfic pay again? If/when the next update occurs will be then. Write as your muse allows.
11/23/2024 c16 Freddie Rindklip
It sounds as if leaving Britian is the way to go. To keep giving folks more opportunities borders on insanity.
It sounds as if leaving Britian is the way to go. To keep giving folks more opportunities borders on insanity.
11/23/2024 c8 Freddie Rindklip
It would be a shame if young Mr. Malfoy had an accident, and young Mr. Longbottom after the Tri-Wiz.
It would be a shame if young Mr. Malfoy had an accident, and young Mr. Longbottom after the Tri-Wiz.
10/23/2024 c23 Guest
Still awaiting the next chapter eagerly
Still awaiting the next chapter eagerly