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9MamaStreet
Great storythanks for posting! I liked how Nancy’s amnesia added a layer of complication to everything. And I liked how the “bad guys” weren’t 100 percent cut and dried. That plot reminded me of “That Hideous Strength.” Timely reminder that every human conceived utopia has a human or two at the helm which is never going to end well. Cants wait for the next story!
9MamaStreetGreat storythanks for posting! I liked how Nancy’s amnesia added a layer of complication to everything. And I liked how the “bad guys” weren’t 100 percent cut and dried. That plot reminded me of “That Hideous Strength.” Timely reminder that every human conceived utopia has a human or two at the helm which is never going to end well. Cants wait for the next story!
4/13 c18 20angelicalkiss
Good story! Thank you for publishing it! Looking forward to seeing what else you have for us! God bless!
20angelicalkissGood story! Thank you for publishing it! Looking forward to seeing what else you have for us! God bless!
4/12 c18 Candylou
Great story with a great ending. Looking forward to your next story.
Great story with a great ending. Looking forward to your next story.
4/9 c17 max2013
A bomb-such extremes-2 crazy men that need to be stopped-looking forward to the resolve.
A bomb-such extremes-2 crazy men that need to be stopped-looking forward to the resolve.
4/8 c17 Candylou
They are all in a tight spot. This is not good at all. Update soon
They are all in a tight spot. This is not good at all. Update soon
4/8 c17 20angelicalkiss
i dont know who to root for in this situation. delvere's plan is completely demented while meyers isnt any better even tho hes trying to stop delvere. im wondering how theyre going to get out of there before the bomb goes off.
20angelicalkissi dont know who to root for in this situation. delvere's plan is completely demented while meyers isnt any better even tho hes trying to stop delvere. im wondering how theyre going to get out of there before the bomb goes off.
4/6 c15 20angelicalkiss
did meyers just shoot Delvere? Or was it someone else? and who got shot in the end? where does it end?
20angelicalkissdid meyers just shoot Delvere? Or was it someone else? and who got shot in the end? where does it end?
4/1 c14 8ErinJordan
Well at least you Bess and Ned were able to get a message to Joe and hopefully everyone will be rescued soon looking forward to reading more!
8ErinJordanWell at least you Bess and Ned were able to get a message to Joe and hopefully everyone will be rescued soon looking forward to reading more!