for A Nundu for A Pet1h c31 Kitten Arina
Very interesting I do hope to see more coming soon. Though the story could use an editor. Someone who would do more then what editing software can do.
Very interesting I do hope to see more coming soon. Though the story could use an editor. Someone who would do more then what editing software can do.
3/26 c31 Fast Frank
Excellent, beautifully written.
Excellent, beautifully written.
3/26 c31 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
9h c22 Kitten Arina
There are times that I really hate the FanFiction app. In the library it tells me that there are 31 chapters but the app is forcefully stopping me at Chapter 22. Nine chapters to early for no good reason. There are times where it will also delete stories that I hit the download button as well with no message about doing so. I hit that button so that I can read the stories offline when I have no internet. So I personally hate the trouble that it wants to give for no good reason because they happen willy nilly never really explaining why it happens when it does.
There are times that I really hate the FanFiction app. In the library it tells me that there are 31 chapters but the app is forcefully stopping me at Chapter 22. Nine chapters to early for no good reason. There are times where it will also delete stories that I hit the download button as well with no message about doing so. I hit that button so that I can read the stories offline when I have no internet. So I personally hate the trouble that it wants to give for no good reason because they happen willy nilly never really explaining why it happens when it does.
23h c31 
14Power of Magic
Well, here's hoping that Harry and Newt will be able to get to the bottom of what's causing things to be so weird with the Royal Sea Horses and I wonder if Itisa saw a kraken or something else (maybe even worse then a kraken). It'll be interesting how the princess seems to be both human and Royal Sea Horse and if she'll grew attracted to Harry
14Power of MagicWell, here's hoping that Harry and Newt will be able to get to the bottom of what's causing things to be so weird with the Royal Sea Horses and I wonder if Itisa saw a kraken or something else (maybe even worse then a kraken). It'll be interesting how the princess seems to be both human and Royal Sea Horse and if she'll grew attracted to Harry
3/26 c13 Kitten Arina
Calling each Professor a HeadMaster is really stupid and incorrect in the first place. It seems like you are doing this on purpose to push away readers.
Calling each Professor a HeadMaster is really stupid and incorrect in the first place. It seems like you are doing this on purpose to push away readers.
3/26 c9 Kitten Arina
That whole bit of Trix being for kids was old before they did that in Ted 2! SoI honestly don’t get why you feel like you had to do it here. And personally find it annoying that you chose to do this here! And that is me trying to be polite for something that I don’t really like.
That whole bit of Trix being for kids was old before they did that in Ted 2! SoI honestly don’t get why you feel like you had to do it here. And personally find it annoying that you chose to do this here! And that is me trying to be polite for something that I don’t really like.
3/26 c31 cameron1812
So cool! So many (i am sorry for this in advance but i cannot help ithidden depths" to this story:)
So cool! So many (i am sorry for this in advance but i cannot help ithidden depths" to this story:)
3/26 c8 tsougrhs.59
Overall i have no problems with the plot , even with the whole harry can talk to everyone is over the top !
But here you have lore mistakes
Lily was the best at charms then potions
Trelawaney was not at school when lily was there
But after they end the school
Mistakes like that is annoying
Overall i have no problems with the plot , even with the whole harry can talk to everyone is over the top !
But here you have lore mistakes
Lily was the best at charms then potions
Trelawaney was not at school when lily was there
But after they end the school
Mistakes like that is annoying
3/25 c31 3WhiteElfElder
I can see an assassin popping Harry's bubble to try and kill him, only for Harry's magic and voice to respond and deny that ending.
3WhiteElfElderI can see an assassin popping Harry's bubble to try and kill him, only for Harry's magic and voice to respond and deny that ending.
3/25 c31 Maverick123214685
In the previous chapter newt argued they wouldn’t need a translator and the minister acquiesced, yet this chapter begins with a translator?
Sounds like there’s trouble with a leviathan.
Could the healing ingredient be a byproduct of a graveyard? That would explain why everyone’s so hesitant to talk about it.
In the previous chapter newt argued they wouldn’t need a translator and the minister acquiesced, yet this chapter begins with a translator?
Sounds like there’s trouble with a leviathan.
Could the healing ingredient be a byproduct of a graveyard? That would explain why everyone’s so hesitant to talk about it.