
7/2/2024 c5 Fast Frank
Very good chapter. Dumbledore has lost McGonagall's unthinking trust.
Very good chapter. Dumbledore has lost McGonagall's unthinking trust.
7/2/2024 c5 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
7/1/2024 c4 scyfly
if the school year hasnt started yet then why does McG needs to be at hogwarts?
there is a lot of plot forcing, i guess when the plot revolves around some wizard leaving a nundu behind in a muggle neighbourghood that is to be expected
if the school year hasnt started yet then why does McG needs to be at hogwarts?
there is a lot of plot forcing, i guess when the plot revolves around some wizard leaving a nundu behind in a muggle neighbourghood that is to be expected
7/1/2024 c3 scyfly
doesnt tonks always say dont call me that? that she hates her name doesnt really mean anything
doesnt tonks always say dont call me that? that she hates her name doesnt really mean anything
7/1/2024 c3 scyfly
harry is far too eloquent for a child, even though he does behave like one. children cant verbalize or rationalize emotions like this, they just act out. hell most adults cant
harry is far too eloquent for a child, even though he does behave like one. children cant verbalize or rationalize emotions like this, they just act out. hell most adults cant
7/1/2024 c5 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing vernon still to learning his lesson
perhaps a more permanent cut from best cat is needed
nice chapter thx for writing it
fun seeing vernon still to learning his lesson
perhaps a more permanent cut from best cat is needed
7/1/2024 c5 TwinstarDragon
At least Mcongall has the common sense to ask first then start fighting immediately
At least Mcongall has the common sense to ask first then start fighting immediately