for A Nundu for A Pet6/11/2024 c4 DrMikelmouse
looking forward to seeing the rest of thisnew concept i haven't read before
looking forward to seeing the rest of thisnew concept i haven't read before
6/6/2024 c4 
6Egnoder
I hope that the goverment sends someone out to investigate before Dumbledore an be rallies, that was a lot of magic being tossed around.
6EgnoderI hope that the goverment sends someone out to investigate before Dumbledore an be rallies, that was a lot of magic being tossed around.
6/4/2024 c4 avidnarutofan
This is stirring up far too much trouble. If anyone does something to seperate Harry and Itisa, that will add unnecessary drama to this fic.
This is stirring up far too much trouble. If anyone does something to seperate Harry and Itisa, that will add unnecessary drama to this fic.
6/3/2024 c3 avidnarutofan
I didn't put this in my previous review but hopefully Harry ends up in Hufflepuff. He is developing a strong sense of loyalty to the nundu.
As for pairing, maybe someone lesser used like Tracy Davis or Padma Patil.
As for this chapter:
I absolutely loved it. I love seeing the Dursley's getting scared and Harry and the nundu fighting them.
I didn't put this in my previous review but hopefully Harry ends up in Hufflepuff. He is developing a strong sense of loyalty to the nundu.
As for pairing, maybe someone lesser used like Tracy Davis or Padma Patil.
As for this chapter:
I absolutely loved it. I love seeing the Dursley's getting scared and Harry and the nundu fighting them.
6/3/2024 c4 Fast Frank
I stand corrected. Still, it's a very good story.
I stand corrected. Still, it's a very good story.
6/2/2024 c4 Guest
Please update more frequently I know you can do it seeing as how you have multiple chapters written in advance
Please update more frequently I know you can do it seeing as how you have multiple chapters written in advance
6/2/2024 c4 SDW
1 c4 Fast Frank
If 'the trace' works per canon, the Ministry is already aware that something happened in Surry, due to Dora's Reparo. Very good chapter.
Actually No.
Canon Ministry JKR super power crazy capable weird wooly Trace ON underage NYMPHADORA, "knows/detects" she's under supervision of an adult wizard nearby. Underage magic "ignored". Or with a bit contradictory pot holes(than actual huge canon plot holes), Hopkirk office can't discern if any spells at #4 cast by Ted, or Nymphadora (or Harry, if Trace put on under 11 kids).
See Harry dropped off at Burrow after recruiting Slughorn, book 6. Dumbles basically points out Ministry ruse and loopholes in the Trace.
Internet search a humorous analysis, by keywords "Baruffio Trace".
1 c4 Fast Frank
If 'the trace' works per canon, the Ministry is already aware that something happened in Surry, due to Dora's Reparo. Very good chapter.
Actually No.
Canon Ministry JKR super power crazy capable weird wooly Trace ON underage NYMPHADORA, "knows/detects" she's under supervision of an adult wizard nearby. Underage magic "ignored". Or with a bit contradictory pot holes(than actual huge canon plot holes), Hopkirk office can't discern if any spells at #4 cast by Ted, or Nymphadora (or Harry, if Trace put on under 11 kids).
See Harry dropped off at Burrow after recruiting Slughorn, book 6. Dumbles basically points out Ministry ruse and loopholes in the Trace.
Internet search a humorous analysis, by keywords "Baruffio Trace".
6/2/2024 c4 3RyanMK666
Wait how old are you making tonks? If harry is around 10 then tonks would be 16 at that point in canon. When harry went to hogwarts first year, she was in her 7th year. Im just curious how old youre making her in this story?
~Ryan
3RyanMK666Wait how old are you making tonks? If harry is around 10 then tonks would be 16 at that point in canon. When harry went to hogwarts first year, she was in her 7th year. Im just curious how old youre making her in this story?
~Ryan
6/2/2024 c4 Smutley Do-Wrong
he was certain that if he didn't attack first. Nothing would have happened.
Slightly overly confident, rigid, certainty, to conclude.
Maybe better, a longer string of Ted second guessing himself, for attacking. It's pretty shake the head, beyond foolish, considering the mythical super powers of the animal.
So Ted rethinks, triggering massively incompetent Ministry to lay siege with massive attack on #4.
Considering appearance & opinion that Dumbledore committed cluster fk, putting Harry with aunt SpitoonYa.
Then you have, image blemish, if Dumbledore doesn't act, and Nundu wrecks some havoc, or injures[or blamed] for Harry being injured...etc.
So one might hypothesize, Dumbledore would act if informed, and it might go not totally as bad, or perhaps worse, than Ted's visit to #4.
Logically, other than perhaps portraying a Dumbledore feeling he's above the "law", or bending/breaking rules with impunity, there's lot wiggle room for characters to back off their stampede of running to Dumbledore.
Considering name dropped Hagrid 2X. Hagrid & Minerva make an alternative for any round #2, intrusion of #4.
Seems logical, even if Minerva had overheard or eavesdropped on entire conversation (with woman who wasn't named, logically being Mrs. Figg).
Minerva mighta, coulda, shoulda, tracked the woman. And had conversation/interrogation.
There's enough in story review mirror. To reject the go-run-to-tell-Dumbledore, knee jerk for dumb jerks, being the next action.
he was certain that if he didn't attack first. Nothing would have happened.
Slightly overly confident, rigid, certainty, to conclude.
Maybe better, a longer string of Ted second guessing himself, for attacking. It's pretty shake the head, beyond foolish, considering the mythical super powers of the animal.
So Ted rethinks, triggering massively incompetent Ministry to lay siege with massive attack on #4.
Considering appearance & opinion that Dumbledore committed cluster fk, putting Harry with aunt SpitoonYa.
Then you have, image blemish, if Dumbledore doesn't act, and Nundu wrecks some havoc, or injures[or blamed] for Harry being injured...etc.
So one might hypothesize, Dumbledore would act if informed, and it might go not totally as bad, or perhaps worse, than Ted's visit to #4.
Logically, other than perhaps portraying a Dumbledore feeling he's above the "law", or bending/breaking rules with impunity, there's lot wiggle room for characters to back off their stampede of running to Dumbledore.
Considering name dropped Hagrid 2X. Hagrid & Minerva make an alternative for any round #2, intrusion of #4.
Seems logical, even if Minerva had overheard or eavesdropped on entire conversation (with woman who wasn't named, logically being Mrs. Figg).
Minerva mighta, coulda, shoulda, tracked the woman. And had conversation/interrogation.
There's enough in story review mirror. To reject the go-run-to-tell-Dumbledore, knee jerk for dumb jerks, being the next action.
6/2/2024 c4 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
6/1/2024 c1 Guest
This is great...Itisa is cool. Thanks for the enjoyable story so far.
This is great...Itisa is cool. Thanks for the enjoyable story so far.