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2/26 c24 2da.rtist
Small criticism. I think Harry's becoming too much of a Gary Stu.
2/26 c27 3WhiteElfElder
Harry is laying the foundations, though I think he could have swung an exemption for magical creature possession for himself if he had knocked off a few percent of the commission.
2/26 c27 Maverick123214685
There’s all sorts of creatures that could have different rankings after “nuanced research” Eg: Unicorns are XXX or XXXX, but to a female virgin they are barely X. Additionally, dragons are XXXXX, but many XXXX creatures are not even magically resistant
2/26 c27 George Cristian810
To many chapter ahead behind the pay wall .
2/26 c22 avidreader-everafter
why do updates keep posting but nothing shows up
2/26 c22 15darthwizard
Amazing chapter and the snide remarks between Harry and Malfoy always got me giggling. Anyways continue the great work and hope to see more soon. Thanks for the great chapter
2/26 c27 Mr.BrownOptometrist
Thank you for the great chapter, and keep up the awesome work
2/26 c27 AnimeFan13579
Rather amusing chapter and even mentions of potential future talismans he could work on. Though the creature translation one would be a lot trickier for him to do. After all he would either have to program it for each individual language or find a way to link it to a unifying language that is shared by all creatures. Of course the fallout of such would surely annoy quite a number of people. After all if communication was possible with any creature that's a great many potential witnesses to crimes. Even if not admissable for courts it'd give investigations a target to look into.

On a note for the concerns of Hogwarts. Well there's plenty of student pets that could go sharing details about their masters. Then there's also the fact Ms. Norris would be even more of a plague to students trying to break rules. Filch would be thrilled to have such conversations with her.
2/25 c19 14Power of Magic
It'll be interesting if Itisa will develop a different version of the Black Breath (maybe one that only attacks those with evil intentions or something) and I can imagine Newt's shock, when he finds out that Itisa can do things that other Nundu's can't
2/25 c26 DarkKniteX
I really like your story.
Sorry, I dont really review, but if I like a story I usually just add it to my favorites.

Thanks,
DarkKniteX
2/25 c1 DarkKniteX
You can try to skip to the next chapter by changing the URL either by adding "/" at the end or by removing it.
eq:
s/14317448/26/
s/14317448/26

Takes a bit to figure out which works sometimes.

DarkKniteX
2/25 c26 15darthwizard
I really love this story
2/25 c18 14Power of Magic
It'll be interesting how Amelia and Mad Eye will react, if they ever found out that Itisa is actually a Nundu, who can look like an ordinary cat. I wonder if Newt will offer Harry a suitcase like his, for him to keep Hedwig and Itisa in, so that they'll both be safe
2/24 c22 6ChiruKaio
lovely ... I send an error report because I only see 24/26 chapters and now I only have 22... sorry to not review properly
2/24 c1 i.amdizzy2
Ohhhh sht , this a different Harry lmaooo
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