for A New Leaf on Life5/18 c28 hyperiumon
is naruto gonna get another power bump after the riser fight ?. or closer to kokabiel ?
is naruto gonna get another power bump after the riser fight ?. or closer to kokabiel ?
5/18 c28 hyperiumon
I'm curious that Naruto never aluded to how strong he used to be, im sure Naruto would def brag about being strong enough to fight gods.
I'm curious that Naruto never aluded to how strong he used to be, im sure Naruto would def brag about being strong enough to fight gods.
5/18 c27 hyperiumon
Okay, so kurama is using most of his energy to keep Naruto alive. He already has enough to reform pretty much
Okay, so kurama is using most of his energy to keep Naruto alive. He already has enough to reform pretty much
5/18 c25 hyperiumon
this is an excellent and very unique story. Please dont abandon it. It's a great read. The only issues i have are the rather slow snail pacing, but the stoey is interesting enough to almoat entirely hand waive it.
this is an excellent and very unique story. Please dont abandon it. It's a great read. The only issues i have are the rather slow snail pacing, but the stoey is interesting enough to almoat entirely hand waive it.
5/17 c28 IllusionBreaker
oh boy, the chaos that's about to happen will be amazing, i just know it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
oh boy, the chaos that's about to happen will be amazing, i just know it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
5/16 c28 TheBrokenTool
Finished all the chapters in a day. Absolutely loved this and can't wait for more
Finished all the chapters in a day. Absolutely loved this and can't wait for more
5/16 c28 atengawchok
Wonder if Sasuke explain his kiri to Naruto? Would be funny If Akeno oneshot the bomb queen and Naruto has bragging right for that!
Wonder if Sasuke explain his kiri to Naruto? Would be funny If Akeno oneshot the bomb queen and Naruto has bragging right for that!
5/15 c19 Guest
Oh they are definitely crossing the finish line together!
Oh they are definitely crossing the finish line together!
5/13 c28 Jls5225
7000 words and you are not an idiot. Your detailing is what makes the story so great. The nuances in every one of your scenes makes them enjoyable to read. Please keep up the good work!
7000 words and you are not an idiot. Your detailing is what makes the story so great. The nuances in every one of your scenes makes them enjoyable to read. Please keep up the good work!
5/13 c28 
5BoltSamIam
I wonder what Naruto will help them improve in? Improvisation in battle? Using terrain to their advantage? Upping their soeed and strength with seals? Oi, when is Kurama coming vack and Naruto is not as nerfed already? Also, we want some fluffy moments with Koneko letting down her guard around Naruto and vith embracing their feelings. I know it's slow burn, but this is dragging a bit now.
5BoltSamIamI wonder what Naruto will help them improve in? Improvisation in battle? Using terrain to their advantage? Upping their soeed and strength with seals? Oi, when is Kurama coming vack and Naruto is not as nerfed already? Also, we want some fluffy moments with Koneko letting down her guard around Naruto and vith embracing their feelings. I know it's slow burn, but this is dragging a bit now.
5/12 c28 random reader 44
28 chapters are finished and we are patiently waiting for some improvement in naruto chakra system. But it seem we won't see anything remotely close to his original powers . And I guess he won't even get his sage mode level of power till 30 more chapters or even till the story ends.
What's your plan? A main character with minimum powers is boring, but you have kept this story interesting so far, even though there are many frustrating movements. But I don't think I can read any further if there no significant improvement in naruto's powers in the next 10 chapters.
Keep up.
28 chapters are finished and we are patiently waiting for some improvement in naruto chakra system. But it seem we won't see anything remotely close to his original powers . And I guess he won't even get his sage mode level of power till 30 more chapters or even till the story ends.
What's your plan? A main character with minimum powers is boring, but you have kept this story interesting so far, even though there are many frustrating movements. But I don't think I can read any further if there no significant improvement in naruto's powers in the next 10 chapters.
Keep up.
5/11 c28 angrypotatoe
Author don't worry about the number of words, the story is going well, a bit linear yes but well and it's still interesting.
Author don't worry about the number of words, the story is going well, a bit linear yes but well and it's still interesting.