for Cursed Chains8/28 c4 Guest
I love your story so far! I am very interested to continue reading it.
I love your story so far! I am very interested to continue reading it.
8/8 c4 
1DecksofArcana
Wasn't simple domain had a binding vow to not tell others before? I'm curious why a lot of people suddenly learned it.
1DecksofArcanaWasn't simple domain had a binding vow to not tell others before? I'm curious why a lot of people suddenly learned it.
8/7 c4 Joinnpoint
So I finished reading every chapter you wrote so far, and it is really good but, it feels like you missed a time skip in a pervious chapter cause I thought naruto was still thirteen when he joined. Other than that, there where only a few grammer errors and I'm hoping to read more hope you flesh out the characters a bit.
So I finished reading every chapter you wrote so far, and it is really good but, it feels like you missed a time skip in a pervious chapter cause I thought naruto was still thirteen when he joined. Other than that, there where only a few grammer errors and I'm hoping to read more hope you flesh out the characters a bit.
7/25 c1 4Blond Lucifer
nobody is forcing you read Bro. just skip ahead or ignore. i never said this is a canon Naruto. he wasn't grown up with hatred in elemental nations. he's born in modern japan. If you want a dumb/loud/naive Naruto who is not a child, then go read somewhere else. it's as simple as that. you're not giving any constructive criticism.
4Blond Lucifernobody is forcing you read Bro. just skip ahead or ignore. i never said this is a canon Naruto. he wasn't grown up with hatred in elemental nations. he's born in modern japan. If you want a dumb/loud/naive Naruto who is not a child, then go read somewhere else. it's as simple as that. you're not giving any constructive criticism.
7/24 c1 1GhostRonin
Make Naruto actually like Naruto, this is just a self-insert at this point especially with the whole "mommy" thing. It's a decent story so far but it's quickly becoming more "If i was in JJK with Chains and Naruto's appearance" instead of "If Naruto was born in the JJK verse with Chains"
1GhostRoninMake Naruto actually like Naruto, this is just a self-insert at this point especially with the whole "mommy" thing. It's a decent story so far but it's quickly becoming more "If i was in JJK with Chains and Naruto's appearance" instead of "If Naruto was born in the JJK verse with Chains"
7/24 c4 4Blond Lucifer
To GhostRoninBro this not a pedophilia. that won't happen in my story. what you saw is just a flirting between 20 year old and 16 year. Naruto won't be 16 forever. thats just four years gap. its not like they having a make out session or sex. And fyi age of consent is 16 in japan. this is morally gray fic. so don't leave misleading reviews.
4Blond LuciferTo GhostRoninBro this not a pedophilia. that won't happen in my story. what you saw is just a flirting between 20 year old and 16 year. Naruto won't be 16 forever. thats just four years gap. its not like they having a make out session or sex. And fyi age of consent is 16 in japan. this is morally gray fic. so don't leave misleading reviews.
7/24 c4 1GhostRonin
Okay nl seriously stop with the pedophilia shtick. You went way too hard into it and it's creepy
1GhostRoninOkay nl seriously stop with the pedophilia shtick. You went way too hard into it and it's creepy
7/20 c4 ActualTurtle3
It would be coll if Naruto could make a chainmail armor or change the tip of his chains to like a ball of steel or hock
Or like venom using the chains to boost his movability
It would be coll if Naruto could make a chainmail armor or change the tip of his chains to like a ball of steel or hock
Or like venom using the chains to boost his movability