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21SaiyanPrince541
LOL I love how Bardock keeps trolling Gokua by calling him Kogu. So you know what? I'm going to call him Kogu in the reviews as well, cause why the hell not?
Anyway, I love how Bardock totally humiliates this asshole Kogu and all his dumb associates. Dude's just badass.
Wow Gohan talking about how cool the "Galaxy Soldiers" name is and if they have cool poses xD. Why?! Does Gohan have to have that nonsensical Saiyaman persona? I still recall him being inspired by the Ginyu Force and their theme song. That was hilarious and also how those clowns were so proud of themselves for inspiring a 5-year old haha. Anyway, trust this young fool to keep giving chances to his enemies the way his father does and then getting done in, as a result. Shame really, but it's a recurring theme with the Son family.
Krillin being shy of hitting a girl is so stupid, considering the purpose she's here for. I respect the principal myself, but certainly not in a situation like this.
17's entrance was really badass and I love how he saved Suno, Bulma and the young ones. I get that Suno is totally mooning over Yamcha's cool moves and heroism, but really, they shouldn't be making out in the middle of a battle. There's a time and place for everything.
Gine and Chi-Chi robbing XS Cash was hilarious, as was Ox King's disappointment haha. I do think that was totally justified, given the kind of disgusting person XS Cash is and given that Hercule got to where he was, by stealing credit from the Z Fighters, Gohan most of all. Plus, Gine especially, wants to use it for a good purpose, i.e. helping her workers.
Such a shame that Bardock got lost in a trance as soon as he heard Turles' name, to the point where a scumbag like Kogu was able to take advanced and slice into him. I do have to wonder about Turles though, what kind of life he's lived, if he's still alive and if so, what role he'll play in this story. Glad that 18 came to the rescue though, just like 17, she had a really badass entrance.
As always, great work!
21SaiyanPrince541LOL I love how Bardock keeps trolling Gokua by calling him Kogu. So you know what? I'm going to call him Kogu in the reviews as well, cause why the hell not?
Anyway, I love how Bardock totally humiliates this asshole Kogu and all his dumb associates. Dude's just badass.
Wow Gohan talking about how cool the "Galaxy Soldiers" name is and if they have cool poses xD. Why?! Does Gohan have to have that nonsensical Saiyaman persona? I still recall him being inspired by the Ginyu Force and their theme song. That was hilarious and also how those clowns were so proud of themselves for inspiring a 5-year old haha. Anyway, trust this young fool to keep giving chances to his enemies the way his father does and then getting done in, as a result. Shame really, but it's a recurring theme with the Son family.
Krillin being shy of hitting a girl is so stupid, considering the purpose she's here for. I respect the principal myself, but certainly not in a situation like this.
17's entrance was really badass and I love how he saved Suno, Bulma and the young ones. I get that Suno is totally mooning over Yamcha's cool moves and heroism, but really, they shouldn't be making out in the middle of a battle. There's a time and place for everything.
Gine and Chi-Chi robbing XS Cash was hilarious, as was Ox King's disappointment haha. I do think that was totally justified, given the kind of disgusting person XS Cash is and given that Hercule got to where he was, by stealing credit from the Z Fighters, Gohan most of all. Plus, Gine especially, wants to use it for a good purpose, i.e. helping her workers.
Such a shame that Bardock got lost in a trance as soon as he heard Turles' name, to the point where a scumbag like Kogu was able to take advanced and slice into him. I do have to wonder about Turles though, what kind of life he's lived, if he's still alive and if so, what role he'll play in this story. Glad that 18 came to the rescue though, just like 17, she had a really badass entrance.
As always, great work!
19h c2 Noir-Styles
Hello! I have few questions related to your story for clarification otherwise I love your story and your story telling way is very amazing my questions are :
How did Goku end up falling into Hell from Snake Way?
What is the role of Goz and Mez in Hell, and how do they interact with Goku?
Why can’t Goku leave Hell immediately, and what is the significance of the 8-month wait?
Who is the mysterious woman with the Saiyan tail that confronts Goku, and what is her connection to him?
As I was reading your story, I found myself vividly picturing the scenes and the characters' expressions it all came to life in my mind so clearly. That got me thinking… what if we turned this into a comic? I’m a professional digital artist and I work on commissions, so I’d love to hear your thoughts on the idea! you can contact me on my discord, here is my discord: avenia_draws
Hello! I have few questions related to your story for clarification otherwise I love your story and your story telling way is very amazing my questions are :
How did Goku end up falling into Hell from Snake Way?
What is the role of Goz and Mez in Hell, and how do they interact with Goku?
Why can’t Goku leave Hell immediately, and what is the significance of the 8-month wait?
Who is the mysterious woman with the Saiyan tail that confronts Goku, and what is her connection to him?
As I was reading your story, I found myself vividly picturing the scenes and the characters' expressions it all came to life in my mind so clearly. That got me thinking… what if we turned this into a comic? I’m a professional digital artist and I work on commissions, so I’d love to hear your thoughts on the idea! you can contact me on my discord, here is my discord: avenia_draws
5/19 c191 GrandmasterRed
I think this medium, more than any other, lends itself to retcons, as, unlike a novel series or comic book, these are individual chapters of a fanfic, which isn't truly in its completed stage until the final chapter is done. Until then, even the most polished chapter or work is debatable a "rough draft" that, while it's nice if everything is kept consistent, is still subject to change to fit the larger story. It's better than an actual retcon of a completed work, anyway.
I think this medium, more than any other, lends itself to retcons, as, unlike a novel series or comic book, these are individual chapters of a fanfic, which isn't truly in its completed stage until the final chapter is done. Until then, even the most polished chapter or work is debatable a "rough draft" that, while it's nice if everything is kept consistent, is still subject to change to fit the larger story. It's better than an actual retcon of a completed work, anyway.
5/17 c191 coldblue
Well that's bummer. The fusions didn't work. But I'm not too upset about the fusions not working out because what people always seem to forgot is that Gotenks in canon is a kid. An inexperienced immature kid. He was always going to lose to Buu. So I'm not surprised that the same thing happen in this story. I hope people will keep that in mind.
I love the explanation behind Guru'a method of unlocking Gohan's potential and why Gohan is still hiding so much potential still by the Old Kai. Personally I always thought it was because of age. The older and raw power you get, the more potential you'll have inside.
The whole scene with Buu, and Hercule and Hiki took a left turn. First Hercule's lies is call out and faces a reality check, Hiki is heartbroken and betrayed and competetly disillusioned. Then Buu kidnapped them and keeps them as pets. Then finally Buu brings them a hurt puppy and finally Hercule and Hiki realize dealing with Buu isn't so black and white.
Hell the Z-fighters and the dragon team are having the same trouble grasping on what to do with Buu now.
Amazing work on this chapter.
Well that's bummer. The fusions didn't work. But I'm not too upset about the fusions not working out because what people always seem to forgot is that Gotenks in canon is a kid. An inexperienced immature kid. He was always going to lose to Buu. So I'm not surprised that the same thing happen in this story. I hope people will keep that in mind.
I love the explanation behind Guru'a method of unlocking Gohan's potential and why Gohan is still hiding so much potential still by the Old Kai. Personally I always thought it was because of age. The older and raw power you get, the more potential you'll have inside.
The whole scene with Buu, and Hercule and Hiki took a left turn. First Hercule's lies is call out and faces a reality check, Hiki is heartbroken and betrayed and competetly disillusioned. Then Buu kidnapped them and keeps them as pets. Then finally Buu brings them a hurt puppy and finally Hercule and Hiki realize dealing with Buu isn't so black and white.
Hell the Z-fighters and the dragon team are having the same trouble grasping on what to do with Buu now.
Amazing work on this chapter.
5/16 c191 3BlueRainbowSky
Don't sweat it. It happen to a lot of Writter. I did the same mistake once.
Goten, Trunks, and Ranch need to work on their...flaws. Because it might come back to bite them in the future, especially later. It make me wonder how it would have went if Bulla took part of it.
Videl using the Zeta Sword remind me of Dragon Ball Multiverse. The only difference is that she don't use the Kaioken...actually, will she learn it in the Future? It's very likely if she's still keeping up her training.
Satan and Hiki are now living with Buu...didn't expect for them to be his pets, though.
The argument between Satan and Hiki was truly emotional. Mark is slowly losing everything, all because of his lies toward Cell's defeat. He truly cannot catch a break. Hopefully that he get his life back on track at the end of the Saga.
The part where Buu heal Bee (The puppy) is cute. It's always amusing to see Buu's reaction upon being treated kindly and friendly, instead of the usual. It's almost like a child discovering Christmas...i think.
Now, i can't wait to see Mr. Satan and Hiki becoming friends with Buu.
The Z-Fighters' reaction to all of this...well, it's pretty understable, in a way. None of their enemies in the past has done something strange like playing with a puppy. But i doubt that they're going to forgive everything he did that easily, especially after eating Bardock alive.
Chichi...apparently, she hasn't listened to Erasa and Sharpner. Majin Buu would already have killed Satan if she was right. Plus, after that stunt she pulled, she has no right to judge. Hope that Videl literaly smack some sense into her.
I wonder what will happen when Ranch and Buu meet again...especially the latter, upon realising that she was one of the Fighter who attacked him through Fusion.
Good Chapter like always.
3BlueRainbowSkyDon't sweat it. It happen to a lot of Writter. I did the same mistake once.
Goten, Trunks, and Ranch need to work on their...flaws. Because it might come back to bite them in the future, especially later. It make me wonder how it would have went if Bulla took part of it.
Videl using the Zeta Sword remind me of Dragon Ball Multiverse. The only difference is that she don't use the Kaioken...actually, will she learn it in the Future? It's very likely if she's still keeping up her training.
Satan and Hiki are now living with Buu...didn't expect for them to be his pets, though.
The argument between Satan and Hiki was truly emotional. Mark is slowly losing everything, all because of his lies toward Cell's defeat. He truly cannot catch a break. Hopefully that he get his life back on track at the end of the Saga.
The part where Buu heal Bee (The puppy) is cute. It's always amusing to see Buu's reaction upon being treated kindly and friendly, instead of the usual. It's almost like a child discovering Christmas...i think.
Now, i can't wait to see Mr. Satan and Hiki becoming friends with Buu.
The Z-Fighters' reaction to all of this...well, it's pretty understable, in a way. None of their enemies in the past has done something strange like playing with a puppy. But i doubt that they're going to forgive everything he did that easily, especially after eating Bardock alive.
Chichi...apparently, she hasn't listened to Erasa and Sharpner. Majin Buu would already have killed Satan if she was right. Plus, after that stunt she pulled, she has no right to judge. Hope that Videl literaly smack some sense into her.
I wonder what will happen when Ranch and Buu meet again...especially the latter, upon realising that she was one of the Fighter who attacked him through Fusion.
Good Chapter like always.
5/16 c191 21Ander Arias
It's just me, or did the fusions felt even more incompetent here than Gotenks even was in canon? Also, the only fusees are Goten, Trunks and Ranch? Pity, if there was a fourth memeber we could have two fusions at once.
Yay, Videl got the new Z-sword! And with how much faith Goku puts in her potential, I'm dying to see her in action.
Speaking of potential, I also wondered how Old Kai could do that when Elder Guru supposedly brought all of Gohan's potential to the surface. Your explanation was fairly sound.
Hiki's takedown of Mr. Satan was very satisfying, if only because she poked holes in Mr. Satan's tale. One thing that made me hate his character so much wasn't just that he became rich and famous by stealing credit from other people's sacrifices, it was his ability to bend the plot to make sure everything always worked in his favor, like how no one seemed to wonder how a normal human could have beaten a monster that destroyed entire cities and the military was powerless to stop.
To end, I'm going to make a prediction: rather than the puppy being shot, it will be seeing Ranch as his enemy that will cause Evil Buu to come out of Majin Buu.
21Ander AriasIt's just me, or did the fusions felt even more incompetent here than Gotenks even was in canon? Also, the only fusees are Goten, Trunks and Ranch? Pity, if there was a fourth memeber we could have two fusions at once.
Yay, Videl got the new Z-sword! And with how much faith Goku puts in her potential, I'm dying to see her in action.
Speaking of potential, I also wondered how Old Kai could do that when Elder Guru supposedly brought all of Gohan's potential to the surface. Your explanation was fairly sound.
Hiki's takedown of Mr. Satan was very satisfying, if only because she poked holes in Mr. Satan's tale. One thing that made me hate his character so much wasn't just that he became rich and famous by stealing credit from other people's sacrifices, it was his ability to bend the plot to make sure everything always worked in his favor, like how no one seemed to wonder how a normal human could have beaten a monster that destroyed entire cities and the military was powerless to stop.
To end, I'm going to make a prediction: rather than the puppy being shot, it will be seeing Ranch as his enemy that will cause Evil Buu to come out of Majin Buu.
5/15 c191 EmacSans
Mr. Satan...
Poor guy's lies coming to light and thing's going wrong... but the champ still got this to make things right! Hopefully!
Mr. Satan...
Poor guy's lies coming to light and thing's going wrong... but the champ still got this to make things right! Hopefully!
5/15 c191 G-man 2.0
If Mr. Satan accidentally screws up again, how much would you bet either Hiki or Chi Chi will pull a Rick and call him a parasitic predator that lures its victims with pity? The latter is most likely, especially after saying Gohan had options and he threw everything away because he felt sorry for Mr. Satan.
If Mr. Satan accidentally screws up again, how much would you bet either Hiki or Chi Chi will pull a Rick and call him a parasitic predator that lures its victims with pity? The latter is most likely, especially after saying Gohan had options and he threw everything away because he felt sorry for Mr. Satan.
5/15 c1 AmeliaJane9299
Dragon Ball Z Dynasty offers a heartfelt and raw journey, blending intense fan-driven storytelling with genuine emotional growth from the author. The narrative not only revisits a beloved universe with fresh energy but also carries the weight of real-life redemption and accountability. It’s a powerful reminder that behind every story is a human striving to improve and connect.
Plus, i have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
Dragon Ball Z Dynasty offers a heartfelt and raw journey, blending intense fan-driven storytelling with genuine emotional growth from the author. The narrative not only revisits a beloved universe with fresh energy but also carries the weight of real-life redemption and accountability. It’s a powerful reminder that behind every story is a human striving to improve and connect.
Plus, i have an idea for your story and would love to collaborate with you!
5/15 c191 TheNewGen
I know this chapter is just another calm before the storm before shit gets even MORE crazier and anyone who has watched the Buu Saga knows exactly what happens after this moment with Buu and Bee (the dog). I don’t have much to say on this chapter aside from it being absolutely hilarious Piccolo losing his mind with Goten, Trunks, and Ranch’s respective fusions. And I think there was an error here between this and last chapter. At the end of last chapter, it said Gotenks turned Super Saiyan and then left the lookout but at the start of this chapter, it said that Gotenks didn’t know how to turn Super Saiyan with his new body. And I also wonder how long the Z Fighters have been on the Lookout since this all started, probably about a week now and I’m guessing Old Kai’s ritual for Gohan is probably even longer for the convenience of the story and maybe because Gohan’s power is even greater than it was in canon.
I know this chapter is just another calm before the storm before shit gets even MORE crazier and anyone who has watched the Buu Saga knows exactly what happens after this moment with Buu and Bee (the dog). I don’t have much to say on this chapter aside from it being absolutely hilarious Piccolo losing his mind with Goten, Trunks, and Ranch’s respective fusions. And I think there was an error here between this and last chapter. At the end of last chapter, it said Gotenks turned Super Saiyan and then left the lookout but at the start of this chapter, it said that Gotenks didn’t know how to turn Super Saiyan with his new body. And I also wonder how long the Z Fighters have been on the Lookout since this all started, probably about a week now and I’m guessing Old Kai’s ritual for Gohan is probably even longer for the convenience of the story and maybe because Gohan’s power is even greater than it was in canon.
5/10 c190 Dragonballreader
Awesome chapter 190. Well made one too. The pacing is great.
I love that Launch and Ranch are bonding and healing together. Ranch will get better in time.
God damn, I wasn't Raditz to explode in rage and beats the crap out of Vegeta and Vegeta just ...takes it. What the hell happened?
I'm just as shocked as Piccolo that Vegeta didn't snark back at him, he just looks ...defeated? Depressed? Geez.
Old Kai better pray to Zeno that Bardock never finds out about his compromise making Gine kiss him. Gine better find some mouthwash.
But still, Gine is incredible. Making a compelling argument that gods should interfere is sound or else what's the point of standing by and being guides if the universe is destroyed? The gods are pretty much screwed if chaos overwhelmes Order. (Can you imagine if Zamasu was here and heard Gine's speech? While he has serious issues with mortals, he will be pleased to hear that someone agrees with him that gods standing around in their world with all their power but do nothing but sit on their asses and drink tea all day is ridiculous.)
I love Bulla, I really do, she's truly Vegeta's little princess which is adorable but boy the whole attitude thing and being "a mini Vegeta" is getting on my nerves. Poor Ginyu Force.
I absolutely love that Videl reveals her true feelings of her place in the world, she's a fighter, it's her calling. She's not a spectator. This is a aspect that is competetly missing with Videl's character in dragonball canon. I would love it if she meets Tien and trains with him. Maybe she can meet Yajirobe and teaches her how to be a master swordsman.
Shin's backstory always makes me feel sorry for him. He truly got the short end of the stick in life. ):
Looks like Goku and Gine know something is off about Majin Buu in Shin's past and what's happening in the present.
Looks like Mr Satan and his team found Buu's home and sets traps, at least I think that's what happening. Boy I can't wait for them to meet Buu and befriend him since he's changing his priorities in what he wants in life.
Here we go, Gotenks vs Majin Buu. Also Gotenks is screw for calling Buu tubby.
Awesome chapter 190. Well made one too. The pacing is great.
I love that Launch and Ranch are bonding and healing together. Ranch will get better in time.
God damn, I wasn't Raditz to explode in rage and beats the crap out of Vegeta and Vegeta just ...takes it. What the hell happened?
I'm just as shocked as Piccolo that Vegeta didn't snark back at him, he just looks ...defeated? Depressed? Geez.
Old Kai better pray to Zeno that Bardock never finds out about his compromise making Gine kiss him. Gine better find some mouthwash.
But still, Gine is incredible. Making a compelling argument that gods should interfere is sound or else what's the point of standing by and being guides if the universe is destroyed? The gods are pretty much screwed if chaos overwhelmes Order. (Can you imagine if Zamasu was here and heard Gine's speech? While he has serious issues with mortals, he will be pleased to hear that someone agrees with him that gods standing around in their world with all their power but do nothing but sit on their asses and drink tea all day is ridiculous.)
I love Bulla, I really do, she's truly Vegeta's little princess which is adorable but boy the whole attitude thing and being "a mini Vegeta" is getting on my nerves. Poor Ginyu Force.
I absolutely love that Videl reveals her true feelings of her place in the world, she's a fighter, it's her calling. She's not a spectator. This is a aspect that is competetly missing with Videl's character in dragonball canon. I would love it if she meets Tien and trains with him. Maybe she can meet Yajirobe and teaches her how to be a master swordsman.
Shin's backstory always makes me feel sorry for him. He truly got the short end of the stick in life. ):
Looks like Goku and Gine know something is off about Majin Buu in Shin's past and what's happening in the present.
Looks like Mr Satan and his team found Buu's home and sets traps, at least I think that's what happening. Boy I can't wait for them to meet Buu and befriend him since he's changing his priorities in what he wants in life.
Here we go, Gotenks vs Majin Buu. Also Gotenks is screw for calling Buu tubby.
5/10 c190 coldblue
Gine is truly incredible. She made a good case on why Old Kai and other Kais/Gods should interfere with mortal affairs, at least in special cases like when the universe is in danger. Maybe she has spent time with Android 18 with her lawyer expertise and got ideas how to settle arguments.
Is it strange I want Gine to meet Gowasu and Zamasu so badly one day?
With Gowasu, he would be a strong believer that Kais/Gods shouldn't interfere at all at first and would be dead set in his old ways but can considered Gine's words of Gods can be guides and be teachers to mortals. That gods and mortals can work together which Gowasu would approve of.
With Zamasu, he would be so jealous of Gine being a good student than him of learning god techniques faster, be in denial that a mortal can be a teacher to a Kai/god and revaluate their beliefs (which Zamasu would be dead set against since that would imply he was wrong about something in his eyes), develop an fascination with Gine to the point of obsession since he can admit she's an mortal who is intelligent, civil and understands the concept of justice. Also she is powerful but uses her power for peace instead of violence that mortals are known for but Gine is the exception as she always hated senseless destruction.
Gine is truly incredible. She made a good case on why Old Kai and other Kais/Gods should interfere with mortal affairs, at least in special cases like when the universe is in danger. Maybe she has spent time with Android 18 with her lawyer expertise and got ideas how to settle arguments.
Is it strange I want Gine to meet Gowasu and Zamasu so badly one day?
With Gowasu, he would be a strong believer that Kais/Gods shouldn't interfere at all at first and would be dead set in his old ways but can considered Gine's words of Gods can be guides and be teachers to mortals. That gods and mortals can work together which Gowasu would approve of.
With Zamasu, he would be so jealous of Gine being a good student than him of learning god techniques faster, be in denial that a mortal can be a teacher to a Kai/god and revaluate their beliefs (which Zamasu would be dead set against since that would imply he was wrong about something in his eyes), develop an fascination with Gine to the point of obsession since he can admit she's an mortal who is intelligent, civil and understands the concept of justice. Also she is powerful but uses her power for peace instead of violence that mortals are known for but Gine is the exception as she always hated senseless destruction.
5/10 c190 coldblue
I love Blonde Launch and Ranch bonding.
Vegeta deserve the beating he got from Raditz. Considering the hell he put him through all his life.
Old Kai is here! (Yes. I'm calling him Old Kai. Ha!)
Gine is truly amazing. She took one for the team. Make it count, Gohan!
Videl getting her own sword. I love it!
I love Blonde Launch and Ranch bonding.
Vegeta deserve the beating he got from Raditz. Considering the hell he put him through all his life.
Old Kai is here! (Yes. I'm calling him Old Kai. Ha!)
Gine is truly amazing. She took one for the team. Make it count, Gohan!
Videl getting her own sword. I love it!
5/11 c190 Starman Junior Jr
The Guest is right, there really is a discrepancy between the two stories of the two Lunches, this is probably a plot hole, but trying to explain
1: Blonde Lunch can remember things well while Blue Lunch can't
The difference between these two stories is that one is told by Blue Lunch and the other is told by Blonde Lunch. Since the two personalities don't share memories, it could be that the memories were divided, with Blonde Lunch taking all the memories about Red Ribbon, while Blue Lunch doesn't remember anything because she feels guilty and doesn't want to confront it.
2: Blue Lunch may have omitted/lied about some things
From what I remember from this chapter, it was one of Raditz and Lunch's first meetings, they didn't know each other very well yet, so Lunch may not want to open up completely about the traumatic experience yet, perhaps afraid that it would alienate Raditz, so she may have told some truths, but lied and omitted something, like when the split personality really emerged, because she wasn't ready to talk about it
3:Lunch may have remembered it right afterwards
She may have forgotten some things or repressed some memories to deal with the guilt/pain, I think that's the least likely option, but maybe that's it, since Blue Lunch didn't even know she had a split personality for a moment.
Obviously I'm not the author, so I'm trying to come up with reasons/motives for this discrepancy in the story to happen, I believe that the version currently told is the true one, because it has more details and because Lunch is opening up to her daughter, I don't think the blonde would lie about this, I think that if she was going to lie, it would make more sense for Blue Lunch to do it, but either way, this is probably a retcon.
The Guest is right, there really is a discrepancy between the two stories of the two Lunches, this is probably a plot hole, but trying to explain
1: Blonde Lunch can remember things well while Blue Lunch can't
The difference between these two stories is that one is told by Blue Lunch and the other is told by Blonde Lunch. Since the two personalities don't share memories, it could be that the memories were divided, with Blonde Lunch taking all the memories about Red Ribbon, while Blue Lunch doesn't remember anything because she feels guilty and doesn't want to confront it.
2: Blue Lunch may have omitted/lied about some things
From what I remember from this chapter, it was one of Raditz and Lunch's first meetings, they didn't know each other very well yet, so Lunch may not want to open up completely about the traumatic experience yet, perhaps afraid that it would alienate Raditz, so she may have told some truths, but lied and omitted something, like when the split personality really emerged, because she wasn't ready to talk about it
3:Lunch may have remembered it right afterwards
She may have forgotten some things or repressed some memories to deal with the guilt/pain, I think that's the least likely option, but maybe that's it, since Blue Lunch didn't even know she had a split personality for a moment.
Obviously I'm not the author, so I'm trying to come up with reasons/motives for this discrepancy in the story to happen, I believe that the version currently told is the true one, because it has more details and because Lunch is opening up to her daughter, I don't think the blonde would lie about this, I think that if she was going to lie, it would make more sense for Blue Lunch to do it, but either way, this is probably a retcon.
5/9 c190 Guest
Hold up, hold up! There's a HUGE problem right at the start of this chapter!
I just double-checked Chapter 54: The Training Begins for the part where Launch tells Raditz she was part of the Red Ribbon Army. In this newest chapter, it says she was a colonel and she got her split personality near the end of her time in the RRA.
But back in Chapter 54, Launch tells Raditz that she was a sergeant and HEAVILY implies that she had he split personality a good long time BEFORE she was ever in the RRA!
What gives?! PLEASE be more consistent! To be honest, no matter how heartwarming this confession of Launch's yo her ailing daughter is, the first explanation given way back when makes WAY more sense!
Hold up, hold up! There's a HUGE problem right at the start of this chapter!
I just double-checked Chapter 54: The Training Begins for the part where Launch tells Raditz she was part of the Red Ribbon Army. In this newest chapter, it says she was a colonel and she got her split personality near the end of her time in the RRA.
But back in Chapter 54, Launch tells Raditz that she was a sergeant and HEAVILY implies that she had he split personality a good long time BEFORE she was ever in the RRA!
What gives?! PLEASE be more consistent! To be honest, no matter how heartwarming this confession of Launch's yo her ailing daughter is, the first explanation given way back when makes WAY more sense!