2/26/2024 c3 159CitrusChickadee
The dip into Marcus's POV at the start is nice, because we the readers of course know that Idunn is fine... But her sudden appearance is a bit suspicious from an in-universe standpoint! So yeah, as I've said before, I know Idunn's the main character here, but I do like to see some more reactions we wouldn't have gotten to otherwise.

Anyway! Roy being quarter-dragon is definitely something I was a bit curious about here, so it's also good to see Idunn get a brief reaction to that. Also, I had simply assumed that Ninian just didn't say anything about Idunn being a dragon because, hey, Idunn didn't say it out loud either... But her being too weak to immediately pick up on it makes sense, too.
(Kinda makes me wonder if Roy having any... dragon-senses, for lack of a better word, will happen too, but, again, him only being quarter, and a young kid on top of that, is a good excuse if it doesn't come up.)

2/17/2024 c2 CitrusChickadee
I gotta say, little Roy is adorable, and it was cute to see his POV in the first part of the chapter. :3 And the nod to Lowen and Wolt (and Lowen/Rebecca? I also ship it!) was a nice little touch.

Anyway! Idunn being a bit overwhelmed by her emotions makes sense, given they're still pretty new to her and all. Pretty obvious thing to comment on, but I still like it.

Also, it'll be interesting to see if/how much of Idunn's past ends up coming out, or if it'll really "matter" too much. As she herself noted, there doesn't seem to be too many records of her existence, but I can see her feeling guilty about "hiding" details about herself. Just a bit of speculation on my part here, but I'm definitely curious to see how much she ends up opening up to everyone!