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1UzuShiro
Great chapter, although I feel like it lacked content. The part about Aegon going to Andalos and agreeing to fight was missing, as well as possibly his thoughts about staying in Andalos
1UzuShiroGreat chapter, although I feel like it lacked content. The part about Aegon going to Andalos and agreeing to fight was missing, as well as possibly his thoughts about staying in Andalos
5/21 c4 ReedD.Issapoinr
Ew.
Ew.
5/15 c13 Ariadne Venegas
I think he must explain to her what the god of the light ask as sacrifice and then she could see where she is wrong about her ‘friend’
I think he must explain to her what the god of the light ask as sacrifice and then she could see where she is wrong about her ‘friend’
5/15 c12 Church21
To be honest out of all the Targaryen kings Jaehaerys was definitely the best except for mayeb Aegon the unlikely. i dont get Alysannes inner monologue here; acting like Jaehaerys was so bad to his kids. Aegon his first child died at birth cause he was a preemy so hardly his fault. Daeneyers his second child got sick and died at 6. The only thing he did remotly wrong by her was he refused to name her heir over her younger brother Aemon. Aemon himself got to pick his own wife and married a Baratheon and by all accounts had a happy marriage until he died in battle which also isnt Jaehaerys fault given Dorne invaded them not the other way around. Baelon is still around so nothing there. Alyssa was infatuated with Baelon from a young age and chose him to be her husband herself which was a match Alysanne herself made happen and approved of so again not Jaehaerys’s fault. Maegelle choose to become a septon and got sick and died an oldtown in her mid 30s so again not at all Jaehaerys fault. Vaegon is still alive at this point and like Maegelle opted out of the royal life by choosing to become a maister. Daella was a bit of a weird one because she was frightened by everyone that tried to woo her. Jaehaeryes eventually got frustrated with her indecisiveness and told her to pick her own husband and she had a year. She originally liked a blackwood but got scared when she found out she’d have to marry in front of a weirwood. So she chose a widower lord Aryn and might I add that Alysaane herself was traveling with her helping her find a husband. She later died in childbirth with her first child at the age of 18 which considering the average age of marriage for nobles in westeros is like 15 isnt all that weird or particularly dangerous she got pregnant at 17. So again not really Jaehaerys’s fault unless you blame him for believing his daughter should marry at all. Then their is Saerra who by all accounts was just a terrible person from the way she treated the servants and even the court fool. Sorry Jaehaerys didnt want his daughter being a whore. Most fathers dont even in the modern world. In the end she chose sex with strangers over her family and ran away. I guess you could blame her being a terrible person on her father but thats as much her mothers blame as it is hers. Next you have Viserra who also by all accounts was a terrible person whos favorite past time was making boys do ridiculous things for her simply because it ammused her. She wanted to marry Bailon after Alyssa died in childbirth not because she particularly loved him but because she wanted to be queen. The only person Viserra loved was herself. She even went so far as to sneak into Bailons room strip naked and crawl into bed with him to seduce him and he rejected her. Then Alysaane herself got mad at her and set up a betrothal between her and an old fat Manderly lord. Viserra in defiance then snuck out of the red keep to get drunk and then fell off her horse. And broke her neck. Hardly see how thats Jaehaerys’s fault. Lastly you have Gaemon and Valerion who both were born suckly and died shortly after. I guess you can count Gael but in cannon she was never married or betrothed that’s totally the work of this story. So out of all her children Jaehaerys picked none of their spouses so I fail to see what the fuck Alysaane is inner monologing about. Wow that was a long rant lol. Good story though
To be honest out of all the Targaryen kings Jaehaerys was definitely the best except for mayeb Aegon the unlikely. i dont get Alysannes inner monologue here; acting like Jaehaerys was so bad to his kids. Aegon his first child died at birth cause he was a preemy so hardly his fault. Daeneyers his second child got sick and died at 6. The only thing he did remotly wrong by her was he refused to name her heir over her younger brother Aemon. Aemon himself got to pick his own wife and married a Baratheon and by all accounts had a happy marriage until he died in battle which also isnt Jaehaerys fault given Dorne invaded them not the other way around. Baelon is still around so nothing there. Alyssa was infatuated with Baelon from a young age and chose him to be her husband herself which was a match Alysanne herself made happen and approved of so again not Jaehaerys’s fault. Maegelle choose to become a septon and got sick and died an oldtown in her mid 30s so again not at all Jaehaerys fault. Vaegon is still alive at this point and like Maegelle opted out of the royal life by choosing to become a maister. Daella was a bit of a weird one because she was frightened by everyone that tried to woo her. Jaehaeryes eventually got frustrated with her indecisiveness and told her to pick her own husband and she had a year. She originally liked a blackwood but got scared when she found out she’d have to marry in front of a weirwood. So she chose a widower lord Aryn and might I add that Alysaane herself was traveling with her helping her find a husband. She later died in childbirth with her first child at the age of 18 which considering the average age of marriage for nobles in westeros is like 15 isnt all that weird or particularly dangerous she got pregnant at 17. So again not really Jaehaerys’s fault unless you blame him for believing his daughter should marry at all. Then their is Saerra who by all accounts was just a terrible person from the way she treated the servants and even the court fool. Sorry Jaehaerys didnt want his daughter being a whore. Most fathers dont even in the modern world. In the end she chose sex with strangers over her family and ran away. I guess you could blame her being a terrible person on her father but thats as much her mothers blame as it is hers. Next you have Viserra who also by all accounts was a terrible person whos favorite past time was making boys do ridiculous things for her simply because it ammused her. She wanted to marry Bailon after Alyssa died in childbirth not because she particularly loved him but because she wanted to be queen. The only person Viserra loved was herself. She even went so far as to sneak into Bailons room strip naked and crawl into bed with him to seduce him and he rejected her. Then Alysaane herself got mad at her and set up a betrothal between her and an old fat Manderly lord. Viserra in defiance then snuck out of the red keep to get drunk and then fell off her horse. And broke her neck. Hardly see how thats Jaehaerys’s fault. Lastly you have Gaemon and Valerion who both were born suckly and died shortly after. I guess you can count Gael but in cannon she was never married or betrothed that’s totally the work of this story. So out of all her children Jaehaerys picked none of their spouses so I fail to see what the fuck Alysaane is inner monologing about. Wow that was a long rant lol. Good story though
5/15 c12 Church21
Cant really see why Saera is always refrences sympatheticly lol. Its not like she was denied a match she wanted or anything. She basically got in trouble for acting like a whore and sleeping with a bunch of diffrent squires in the red keep, then threatened the servants to keep them quite. She was far from a good person. Then when she got caught she snuck out and ran away to go work in a whorehouse in volintas. Somehow Jaheryes came out the bad guy in that story because he didnt take want his daughter to act like a ho.
Cant really see why Saera is always refrences sympatheticly lol. Its not like she was denied a match she wanted or anything. She basically got in trouble for acting like a whore and sleeping with a bunch of diffrent squires in the red keep, then threatened the servants to keep them quite. She was far from a good person. Then when she got caught she snuck out and ran away to go work in a whorehouse in volintas. Somehow Jaheryes came out the bad guy in that story because he didnt take want his daughter to act like a ho.
5/15 c13 Miguex
Aaa que buen capítulo, es una de las pocas historias que sigo leyendo cuando la actualizan , desearía que se actualice más seguido pero de todas formas estáre esperando el siguiente capítulo
Aaa que buen capítulo, es una de las pocas historias que sigo leyendo cuando la actualizan , desearía que se actualice más seguido pero de todas formas estáre esperando el siguiente capítulo
5/15 c13 Juristen
Thank you for the chapter. Gael is annoying. As if he doesn't have enough to take of, he now also has to babysit his wife lest she endanger them both.
Thank you for the chapter. Gael is annoying. As if he doesn't have enough to take of, he now also has to babysit his wife lest she endanger them both.
5/14 c13 FunnyBagle
On one hand Red Rolo has irrefutable power and powerful followers on the other you've 7 who can't do anything or have any proof of existence nor power and who's followers hates people with mystic powers. It doesn't take a genius to figure out how and why the 7 magic hating gods were created in that continent.
Harry really has his work cut out for him. One side wants to mould him into their champion of fire, and the other side wants him to save them but will execute him if his magic is discovered, unless he manages to convert them to his way.
He should just declare himself as a believer of old gods and call it a day.
On one hand Red Rolo has irrefutable power and powerful followers on the other you've 7 who can't do anything or have any proof of existence nor power and who's followers hates people with mystic powers. It doesn't take a genius to figure out how and why the 7 magic hating gods were created in that continent.
Harry really has his work cut out for him. One side wants to mould him into their champion of fire, and the other side wants him to save them but will execute him if his magic is discovered, unless he manages to convert them to his way.
He should just declare himself as a believer of old gods and call it a day.