
1/29 c19 The Disquieting One
i think there is a sentence that got cut in "had use Shinji as a messenger to"
i think there is a sentence that got cut in "had use Shinji as a messenger to"
12/18/2024 c2 Truth lover
Yes, I'm know Persona, so I know how much you've disfigured Igor's character. This is much worse than even Fake from Persona 5, because he at least tried, and at times EXTREMELY successfully, to imitate the original.
And you just have an uncultured, hysterical grandfather who is not happy. And I'll just fill you in that Igor has NEVER advocated the value or power of abstract “humanity” only for the strength of specific people and their social bonds.
Yes, I'm know Persona, so I know how much you've disfigured Igor's character. This is much worse than even Fake from Persona 5, because he at least tried, and at times EXTREMELY successfully, to imitate the original.
And you just have an uncultured, hysterical grandfather who is not happy. And I'll just fill you in that Igor has NEVER advocated the value or power of abstract “humanity” only for the strength of specific people and their social bonds.
11/18/2024 c1 Obsidian Dreamweaver
Hello,
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Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Persona Edgerunners: Providence," and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a visually compelling comic book.
As a professional comic artist, I would like to propose a commission to adapt your story into a fully illustrated comic. I would work closely with you to ensure that every page captures the essence of your narrative.
If this opportunity excites you, I’d love to discuss the process in more detail, including pricing, timelines, and any creative ideas you may have.
Please feel free to reach out to me via any of the following:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail . com
Facebook: Lydia Morata
Thank you for considering this commission. I look forward to the possibility of bringing your story to life through art!
Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
11/18/2024 c1 Vinay-kox01
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "Persona Edgerunners: Providence", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
Hey!
I just finished reading your story "Persona Edgerunners: Providence", and I absolutely loved it! I'd be super excited to adapt it into a comic or animation in my own style. I'm a digital artist and currently open for commission projects. I always aim to deliver work that I think you'd really enjoy, and hopefully, want to share too! My rates are fair, and I make sure the quality is top-notch every time.
If you’re interested, let's chat more I’d love to bring your story to life! You can reach me on
Discord: graphic_gold
Twitter: VKox139175
Instagram: vinaykox1
Hope to hear from you soon!
9/18/2024 c15
4NathanHale2
There are some weird missing sections in your text (I noticed it in other chapters as well)
examples:
saeko's smile stayed, but her mood shifted. she reached for her sword and kept glaring at the verdette. "I'm sure you [there is nothing there]
"Piss off, samuri!" Ryuko unleashed her matnis blades, " [again there is something missing there]

There are some weird missing sections in your text (I noticed it in other chapters as well)
examples:
saeko's smile stayed, but her mood shifted. she reached for her sword and kept glaring at the verdette. "I'm sure you [there is nothing there]
"Piss off, samuri!" Ryuko unleashed her matnis blades, " [again there is something missing there]
9/17/2024 c15
13foxchick1
Love this story, excited to see what will happen next, and where did David go?

Love this story, excited to see what will happen next, and where did David go?
9/16/2024 c15 The Disquieting One
good stuff, but I think you missing a lot of sentences between "Saeko smiled" and "she stalked up"
good stuff, but I think you missing a lot of sentences between "Saeko smiled" and "she stalked up"
9/13/2024 c3
4NathanHale2
Calling it now: In true persona tradition will follow her siblings and fall head over heels for their guest, here David and I'm down for it!

Calling it now: In true persona tradition will follow her siblings and fall head over heels for their guest, here David and I'm down for it!
7/14/2024 c12 The Disquieting One
man, do I miss this fic. there's a missing texts in "she'd never thought-", though
man, do I miss this fic. there's a missing texts in "she'd never thought-", though
4/22/2024 c9 The Disquieting One
I think you missing something. The story cut off at rhe Verdette part. I think you should recheck this fix in general. This isnt the first time in here
I think you missing something. The story cut off at rhe Verdette part. I think you should recheck this fix in general. This isnt the first time in here