for Persona Edgerunners: Providence4/22/2024 c9 The Disquieting One
I think you missing something. The story cut off at rhe Verdette part. I think you should recheck this fix in general. This isnt the first time in here
I think you missing something. The story cut off at rhe Verdette part. I think you should recheck this fix in general. This isnt the first time in here
4/19/2024 c8 The Disquieting One
good read. addiing this to cyberpunk & Persona fanfic recs on tv tropes
good read. addiing this to cyberpunk & Persona fanfic recs on tv tropes
3/30/2024 c7 please don't1
one that lucy didnt do was apologise, it doesnt matter how good it became but its like she's refusing to belive that she didnt do anything wrong towards David. Forgivness should never be giving when the other party doesnt feel like they did anything wrong, if they are forgiven lucy will see it as him defering to her choices instead of himself. Its a slippery slope yes but i would like to see lucy actually apologising to him.
Good story so far the only thing i have gripe with is the forgivness part, igor has hope for humans but if has enough compation to forgive lubock and lucy, hes gonna sound like a absolute hypocrit if starts blasting Kiwi. All had parts in the downfall but kiwi did the exact thing lucy did in episode 1, if david wasnt Gloria's kid he would be dead probobly. Lucy for real sett him up with a very big chance of him getting killed and that needs some apologies.
one that lucy didnt do was apologise, it doesnt matter how good it became but its like she's refusing to belive that she didnt do anything wrong towards David. Forgivness should never be giving when the other party doesnt feel like they did anything wrong, if they are forgiven lucy will see it as him defering to her choices instead of himself. Its a slippery slope yes but i would like to see lucy actually apologising to him.
Good story so far the only thing i have gripe with is the forgivness part, igor has hope for humans but if has enough compation to forgive lubock and lucy, hes gonna sound like a absolute hypocrit if starts blasting Kiwi. All had parts in the downfall but kiwi did the exact thing lucy did in episode 1, if david wasnt Gloria's kid he would be dead probobly. Lucy for real sett him up with a very big chance of him getting killed and that needs some apologies.
3/25/2024 c4 Grimm Magician
I mean, they ARE demons... literally every supernatural entity in the franchise is a demon, even God and the Angels...
For those who don't know, MegaTen primarily utilizes "Demon" in accordance with the original definition of the word. That is, the ancient Greek term "Daimon," which signified any spirit or entity of a supernatural nature, either lesser beings serving as attendants of major deities or the deities themselves, with some instances even referring to human souls as well. So, the term is actually all-encompassing and includes not only evil spirits of Abrahamic faith, but also all supernatural entities in general.
And then there's the Archetypes, the fundamental units of the collective unconsciousness itself, being primordial, formless images and patterns that allow for the proper development of a human ego, as well as their capacity to comprehend and analyze their surroundings, which itself gives rise to the function of Understanding, that in turn shapes the Archetypes into the forms of Demons.
I mean, they ARE demons... literally every supernatural entity in the franchise is a demon, even God and the Angels...
For those who don't know, MegaTen primarily utilizes "Demon" in accordance with the original definition of the word. That is, the ancient Greek term "Daimon," which signified any spirit or entity of a supernatural nature, either lesser beings serving as attendants of major deities or the deities themselves, with some instances even referring to human souls as well. So, the term is actually all-encompassing and includes not only evil spirits of Abrahamic faith, but also all supernatural entities in general.
And then there's the Archetypes, the fundamental units of the collective unconsciousness itself, being primordial, formless images and patterns that allow for the proper development of a human ego, as well as their capacity to comprehend and analyze their surroundings, which itself gives rise to the function of Understanding, that in turn shapes the Archetypes into the forms of Demons.
3/20/2024 c7 
6Lucem Yoru
Well this has turned out to be a pleasant surprise. Followed and favorited. Feels like its been a long while since I found an interesting Persona cross without the cast of Persona 3-5.
David is a surprisingly good fit for a Wild Card, and imagining him wandering between NC and its hellish counterpart is so cool that I kinda wish there existed a Persona knockoff set in the Cyberpunk world xD
Nice awakening too. Fits perfectly with the settings innate hopelessness and the Velvet Rooms goal of changing things.
Other than that I'm enjoying what you're doing with Igor. It's strange to see him not being the unfailingly polite gentleman we know and love, but if any world is capable of angering Igor (and of course Philemon) then it would absolutely be the depraved purgatory that is Cyberpunk.
Also: Nice attendant you got there, wonder how long before she goes the same way as her siblings and trip over her guests rizz :P
6Lucem YoruWell this has turned out to be a pleasant surprise. Followed and favorited. Feels like its been a long while since I found an interesting Persona cross without the cast of Persona 3-5.
David is a surprisingly good fit for a Wild Card, and imagining him wandering between NC and its hellish counterpart is so cool that I kinda wish there existed a Persona knockoff set in the Cyberpunk world xD
Nice awakening too. Fits perfectly with the settings innate hopelessness and the Velvet Rooms goal of changing things.
Other than that I'm enjoying what you're doing with Igor. It's strange to see him not being the unfailingly polite gentleman we know and love, but if any world is capable of angering Igor (and of course Philemon) then it would absolutely be the depraved purgatory that is Cyberpunk.
Also: Nice attendant you got there, wonder how long before she goes the same way as her siblings and trip over her guests rizz :P
3/16/2024 c1 1furvustocs
nice, it may be short, but if it gets more chapters and updates.
this will be a great fic, looking forward to it. Night City needs a fool to correct this corrupted city
1furvustocsnice, it may be short, but if it gets more chapters and updates.
this will be a great fic, looking forward to it. Night City needs a fool to correct this corrupted city
3/11/2024 c5 1TikoTriko
rlly hyped for the next chapter already!
Word of advice tho: With how messed up the world of Cyberbunk is palaces ain't gonna cut it for this world cause i can guarantee that every 4 in 5 people in this world have a palace. I sugest you try to find an alternative to paleces (something like Tartarus from P3).
1TikoTrikorlly hyped for the next chapter already!
Word of advice tho: With how messed up the world of Cyberbunk is palaces ain't gonna cut it for this world cause i can guarantee that every 4 in 5 people in this world have a palace. I sugest you try to find an alternative to paleces (something like Tartarus from P3).