
4/5 c12 Guest
i will admit I didn't think this story would focus overly much on the political side of things beyond navigating the different factions. hope it doesn't get overly political
i will admit I didn't think this story would focus overly much on the political side of things beyond navigating the different factions. hope it doesn't get overly political
3/29 c11 Guest
fire immunity or at least resistance is a great boon in Elden ring since a lot of enemies use fire attacks
fire immunity or at least resistance is a great boon in Elden ring since a lot of enemies use fire attacks
3/28 c11 Chris-GMP
Haha hot, possessive, and probably freaky Ranni, very nice.
Anyway on a serious note I just found this um well i would call it a story as it clearly has the makings of one even if it’s just under a snippets tap. Nonetheless Elden ring is one of my favourite games I’ve ever played and its characters are always a fascinating and amazing character studies to me as while they shall similarities they’re also so vastly different and they make for an excellent story and I have no doubt this one would be no different.
Edwyns existence is already extremely fascinating as I’ve never ever seen someone do what you did with your main character that being giving them a written history in the lands between before the shattering, while also having them be one stripped of the grace of gold, while also having them not be a conventional demigod child. Overall without writing a damn book about all the things I find cool about this story I’m just gonna leave with what I’ve said and add that “it’s really cool” and I truly hope this story gets to see its end one day. So thank you author for giving us what you have thus far I appreciate your efforts to give us a new look into the world of Elden ring. Till next time, I wish you well and I hope to you this story again :)
Haha hot, possessive, and probably freaky Ranni, very nice.
Anyway on a serious note I just found this um well i would call it a story as it clearly has the makings of one even if it’s just under a snippets tap. Nonetheless Elden ring is one of my favourite games I’ve ever played and its characters are always a fascinating and amazing character studies to me as while they shall similarities they’re also so vastly different and they make for an excellent story and I have no doubt this one would be no different.
Edwyns existence is already extremely fascinating as I’ve never ever seen someone do what you did with your main character that being giving them a written history in the lands between before the shattering, while also having them be one stripped of the grace of gold, while also having them not be a conventional demigod child. Overall without writing a damn book about all the things I find cool about this story I’m just gonna leave with what I’ve said and add that “it’s really cool” and I truly hope this story gets to see its end one day. So thank you author for giving us what you have thus far I appreciate your efforts to give us a new look into the world of Elden ring. Till next time, I wish you well and I hope to you this story again :)
1/2 c9 Guest
like the focus at the end there on the relationship between Edwin and Blaidd through their shared connection to Ranni
like the focus at the end there on the relationship between Edwin and Blaidd through their shared connection to Ranni
1/1 c9
1raxon1221
Was happy to see Blaidd come in and am hoping to see him catch up soon
Kinda funny i reread this snippet last night and a new chapter drops next day

Was happy to see Blaidd come in and am hoping to see him catch up soon
Kinda funny i reread this snippet last night and a new chapter drops next day
12/31/2024 c8 raxon1221
had to go back for a reread of this snippet and cant wait for the next chappyer of ot
had to go back for a reread of this snippet and cant wait for the next chappyer of ot