for Terror of the Uchiha2/8 c6 LillyTigress
Excellent and engagingI suck at helpful criticism but as an avid reader (many hours every day for half a century) I am quite able to recognize high quality both technical and creative and this story has both. I hope, for my own sake mostly, that more is written.
When I think about it I realize that I have no clue where this story is going plot wise. Yet I am enjoying getting to know the characters so much that I don't careI simply really want to spend some more time with them. Awesome.
Excellent and engagingI suck at helpful criticism but as an avid reader (many hours every day for half a century) I am quite able to recognize high quality both technical and creative and this story has both. I hope, for my own sake mostly, that more is written.
When I think about it I realize that I have no clue where this story is going plot wise. Yet I am enjoying getting to know the characters so much that I don't careI simply really want to spend some more time with them. Awesome.
5/28/2024 c6 Drrakkos
Awww i read the six chapter in few minutes, please can you continue this story? Not many story's use Harry OP in the universe of Naruto.
Awww i read the six chapter in few minutes, please can you continue this story? Not many story's use Harry OP in the universe of Naruto.
5/1/2024 c1 Guest
I am sorry for using this to ask about something else but what happened to ur co author Arcturus Peverell? He has been inactive for an extremely long period of time and I enjoyed his writings a lotttttttt care shed light on why he has been inactive? please idk how to message privately so I have reviewed this in ur recently updated story...I am asking this to u as he has mentioned u as his co author in his bio thanks in advance and sorry for not posting abt the story
I am sorry for using this to ask about something else but what happened to ur co author Arcturus Peverell? He has been inactive for an extremely long period of time and I enjoyed his writings a lotttttttt care shed light on why he has been inactive? please idk how to message privately so I have reviewed this in ur recently updated story...I am asking this to u as he has mentioned u as his co author in his bio thanks in advance and sorry for not posting abt the story
5/2/2024 c5 
5Dark Neko 7000
What will happen next time?
Will Harry be able to save both Naruto and his family lives?
5Dark Neko 7000What will happen next time?
Will Harry be able to save both Naruto and his family lives?
3/31/2024 c6 Conner Kumiai
Fukurou existe para hacer la vida más interesante. El es la Maldición China encarnada!
Fukurou existe para hacer la vida más interesante. El es la Maldición China encarnada!
3/30/2024 c6 aGnamZer0
« A/N: Harry does not have his magic. Chakra is his power source and he has a load of ancient knowledge that Rikudo shoved into his head as an apology gift. »
I don't really like Harry was handed down his knowledge. I would have prefered it all being theories of himself because he already had experience wielding a different mystical energy. The one good point about that though means Naruto is indeed a master at fūinjutsu.
Talking to the Kyūbi, huh? Unfortunately, it's not that which will prevent the Kyūbi attack since he was manipulated by a Mangekyō Sharingan. That being said, maybe he'll offer himself to be the vessel instead of Naruto when Minato performs the seal. Or maybe, he'll convince Minato to use a weaker seal not reliant on the Shinigami so he doesn't have to sacrifice himself, because by then he'll already have befriended Kurama (after cursing Hagoromo XD) and there would be no need for such a powerful seal.
Thanks for the chapter.
« A/N: Harry does not have his magic. Chakra is his power source and he has a load of ancient knowledge that Rikudo shoved into his head as an apology gift. »
I don't really like Harry was handed down his knowledge. I would have prefered it all being theories of himself because he already had experience wielding a different mystical energy. The one good point about that though means Naruto is indeed a master at fūinjutsu.
Talking to the Kyūbi, huh? Unfortunately, it's not that which will prevent the Kyūbi attack since he was manipulated by a Mangekyō Sharingan. That being said, maybe he'll offer himself to be the vessel instead of Naruto when Minato performs the seal. Or maybe, he'll convince Minato to use a weaker seal not reliant on the Shinigami so he doesn't have to sacrifice himself, because by then he'll already have befriended Kurama (after cursing Hagoromo XD) and there would be no need for such a powerful seal.
Thanks for the chapter.
3/30/2024 c5 aGnamZer0
« Fukurou smiled. Though Mikoto wondered why it looked strained at the edges. "By the way, did you know Kushina-san is pregnant?" »
My working theory is either natural chakra (how he would have learnt it, only Hagoromo knows), him being a natural sensor or him increasing his senses to unnatural heights allowing him to hear the beating heart of the foetus.
Still, I'd really like to know more about his theories and training methods. Or should I just forget about that and treat him as a walking troll?
Looks like Minato and Kushina are indeed still alive, and Naruto's in the oven so to speak. I really hope Harry will adopt our sun boy.
Thanks for the chapter.
« Fukurou smiled. Though Mikoto wondered why it looked strained at the edges. "By the way, did you know Kushina-san is pregnant?" »
My working theory is either natural chakra (how he would have learnt it, only Hagoromo knows), him being a natural sensor or him increasing his senses to unnatural heights allowing him to hear the beating heart of the foetus.
Still, I'd really like to know more about his theories and training methods. Or should I just forget about that and treat him as a walking troll?
Looks like Minato and Kushina are indeed still alive, and Naruto's in the oven so to speak. I really hope Harry will adopt our sun boy.
Thanks for the chapter.
3/30/2024 c4 aGnamZer0
« Shisui realized right then and there that Fukurou could not be boring if he tried. »
The one line that made my day!
I do wojnder if the Jinchūriki thing means Minato and Kushina are already dead, or not. I mean, Kushina herself is a Jinchūriki so it could be that, but I'm not sure even Mikoto herself knows about it.
Most likely, it hasn't happened yet. There would have been some mention of the Kyūbi attack otherwise.
Regardless, if Harry was already in good relationship with Minato and Kushina, he'll never leave Naruto to be orphaned in this orphanage where he'll be abused every single day of the week.
Personally, I've never liked Kakashi. I loved Obito though, so it's a pity his presence wasn't able to prevent his 'death'.
Thanks for the chapter.
« Shisui realized right then and there that Fukurou could not be boring if he tried. »
The one line that made my day!
I do wojnder if the Jinchūriki thing means Minato and Kushina are already dead, or not. I mean, Kushina herself is a Jinchūriki so it could be that, but I'm not sure even Mikoto herself knows about it.
Most likely, it hasn't happened yet. There would have been some mention of the Kyūbi attack otherwise.
Regardless, if Harry was already in good relationship with Minato and Kushina, he'll never leave Naruto to be orphaned in this orphanage where he'll be abused every single day of the week.
Personally, I've never liked Kakashi. I loved Obito though, so it's a pity his presence wasn't able to prevent his 'death'.
Thanks for the chapter.
3/30/2024 c3 aGnamZer0
I love Shisui and I love that he's gotten entangled in Harry's life already.
I do hope we'll learn more about Harry's theory on chakra and jutsus because I'd feel cheated if you skip that.
On another note, since Harry's Itachi's brother, if Minato and Kushina still dies, I'll rage quit if he doesn't adopt Naruto.
Thanks for the chapter.
I love Shisui and I love that he's gotten entangled in Harry's life already.
I do hope we'll learn more about Harry's theory on chakra and jutsus because I'd feel cheated if you skip that.
On another note, since Harry's Itachi's brother, if Minato and Kushina still dies, I'll rage quit if he doesn't adopt Naruto.
Thanks for the chapter.
3/30/2024 c2 aGnamZer0
« And the worst part was that Fukurou got along better with his wife's best friend than he did with his own family. »
I'm not sure if said friend is Minato or Kushina, but regardless, I hope it means he'll learn fūinjutsu.
« You know, the one where the Tree-planter and Schizophrenic maniac founded the village to stop sending children into battle. The thing and the rest of his insane village does every single year. »
I couldn't have said it better if I tried. Kudos Harry (sorry, but I refuse to ever call him Fukurou)! I totally approve of your perspective.
That being said, I do hope you'll train to be unmatched in battle. I understand having hobbies unrelated to the shinobi life or battle, but in this world, if you don't become strong, you'll be eaten alive.
On that note, I wonder if you still have your magic.
« Does the First Hokage's Wood Release work? »
I wonder how he'll manage that feat. Umm... *thinking pose*
Thanks for the chapter.
« And the worst part was that Fukurou got along better with his wife's best friend than he did with his own family. »
I'm not sure if said friend is Minato or Kushina, but regardless, I hope it means he'll learn fūinjutsu.
« You know, the one where the Tree-planter and Schizophrenic maniac founded the village to stop sending children into battle. The thing and the rest of his insane village does every single year. »
I couldn't have said it better if I tried. Kudos Harry (sorry, but I refuse to ever call him Fukurou)! I totally approve of your perspective.
That being said, I do hope you'll train to be unmatched in battle. I understand having hobbies unrelated to the shinobi life or battle, but in this world, if you don't become strong, you'll be eaten alive.
On that note, I wonder if you still have your magic.
« Does the First Hokage's Wood Release work? »
I wonder how he'll manage that feat. Umm... *thinking pose*
Thanks for the chapter.
3/30/2024 c1 aGnamZer0
I'm not fan at all of Harry's new name, Fukurou (I actually pretty much hate it), but beyond that what shocked me was Hagoromo's behavior.
He didn't behave at all like the Sage we all know. In fact, he was very much a bastard who didn't take into considerations Harry's feelings at all.
Thanks for the chapter.
I'm not fan at all of Harry's new name, Fukurou (I actually pretty much hate it), but beyond that what shocked me was Hagoromo's behavior.
He didn't behave at all like the Sage we all know. In fact, he was very much a bastard who didn't take into considerations Harry's feelings at all.
Thanks for the chapter.