for Welcome to Heaven18h c17 Guest
Female Adam, that's a hilarious punishment though he's treating it like a reward. And I notice carmilla commenting about how she didn't hate the idea of little winged children.
Female Adam, that's a hilarious punishment though he's treating it like a reward. And I notice carmilla commenting about how she didn't hate the idea of little winged children.
22h c17 Guest
Very nice. Looking forward to the next chapter.i hope your health get's better.
Very nice. Looking forward to the next chapter.i hope your health get's better.
5/18 c17 valash122
I enjoy the story but man I would like there to be more ACTION instead of all this focusing on Naruto either FUCKING another chick or whatever. I'm not some 16 yr old kid who just hit puberty looking to anything to jack off to. I'm also not a grown ass man whose only pair of tits or pussy he has ever seen is through either a story or a porn website. What I'm trying to say is focus more on action with tid bits of romance/sex on the side.
I know there's authors out there who've have written books that have gone on to make successful tv shows that has heavy amounts of sex in it but they also have 10 times more action as well and yes I'm speaking mainly about Game of Thrones.
I enjoy the story but man I would like there to be more ACTION instead of all this focusing on Naruto either FUCKING another chick or whatever. I'm not some 16 yr old kid who just hit puberty looking to anything to jack off to. I'm also not a grown ass man whose only pair of tits or pussy he has ever seen is through either a story or a porn website. What I'm trying to say is focus more on action with tid bits of romance/sex on the side.
I know there's authors out there who've have written books that have gone on to make successful tv shows that has heavy amounts of sex in it but they also have 10 times more action as well and yes I'm speaking mainly about Game of Thrones.
5/18 c17 ApatheticSovereign
Thanks for the chapter! I think I speak for the majority when I say the effort and time you put into your writing is greatly appreciated and enjoyed.
Have fun, stay safe, be healthy and enjoy life
Thanks for the chapter! I think I speak for the majority when I say the effort and time you put into your writing is greatly appreciated and enjoyed.
Have fun, stay safe, be healthy and enjoy life
5/18 c17 ApatheticSovereign
Thanks for the chapter! I think I speak for the majority when I say the effort and time you put into your writing is greatly appreciated and enjoyed.
Thanks for the chapter! I think I speak for the majority when I say the effort and time you put into your writing is greatly appreciated and enjoyed.
5/18 c17 Neythan Ponton
I really enjoy reading this story, one question, I wonder if we will see the sins at some point?
I really enjoy reading this story, one question, I wonder if we will see the sins at some point?
5/18 c17 
1RomeoDreamWriter
No matter what you cross with it, any story involving Hazbin Hotel is completely hilarious yet profound. And you have one of the best renditions I've ever seen.
1RomeoDreamWriterNo matter what you cross with it, any story involving Hazbin Hotel is completely hilarious yet profound. And you have one of the best renditions I've ever seen.
5/17 c17 Christian
Keep up the good writing you're doing bro.
Keep up the good writing you're doing bro.
5/18 c17 Blacknova00
He switched up from watch and wait to confronting her real quick. I half expected it to be kurama who grabbed her
He switched up from watch and wait to confronting her real quick. I half expected it to be kurama who grabbed her
5/18 c17 AJGuardian
I see the same "guest" is at it again.
He'd only know when you post new chapters if he follows you with an account.
Fucking hypocrisy.
Do it like a man and get blocked and reported for harassment you fucking cunt.
I see the same "guest" is at it again.
He'd only know when you post new chapters if he follows you with an account.
Fucking hypocrisy.
Do it like a man and get blocked and reported for harassment you fucking cunt.