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1/6 c1 17duskrider
While entertaining the whole H: thing at the end when you don't really change the way the characters speaks feels out of no where.
Also while a hunter with a kill or be killed mentality I am not sure if he would have gone for the throat like that right away. Maybe remove the switch blade and start choking the thug out instead with Yui needing to calm him down to prevent him from killing.
7/7/2024 c1 1Alb4tr05S
I laughed
5/31/2024 c1 Ghostly
I’m unfamiliar with Japan’s laws so what is going to happen to Hachiman?
4/23/2024 c1 SFAp
its a good read, also please fix the writing style.
4/18/2024 c1 The Disquieting One
good read so far
4/7/2024 c1 25Bruh man I'm schewpid
Good chapter
4/7/2024 c1 killzombie74
Interesting story, I suppose anyone would change when entering Bloodborne.
4/4/2024 c1 Hachiman fan
It's yuigahama not yuigahara. One shot? No next chapter? Stay healthy and stay safe.
4/4/2024 c1 King Joker
It was an interesting read until you started changing writing styles near the end. Made it annoying for me to keep reading.
4/2/2024 c1 14Incognito74
See a lot of potential in this
4/1/2024 c1 memoryofvirtual
Seems symbol of and is not allowed
4/1/2024 c1 memoryofvirtual
He feels OC... but then considering that in Bloodborne every a sane and logical person become insaneinept driven by bloodlustinstinct of a predator... So, it's not far fetch that he might have caught some paranoiahysteria in the bloody world a single day could turn a good person into evil, it'll only took one day.
4/1/2024 c1 worrierfierce
Nice although i feel like hachiman is a bit out of charecter since i doubt he would share stuff like going to a different eldritch horror world and be more insane. Although the last bit gives more perspective, since all he had done in his “dream” is kill it would be natural for hin to kill something hostile without hesitation

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