for The Daddy Next Door9/5 c10 Hobisgurl
Wow. How did I get this far when I hate both main characters so much?
Edward is married. This is not romantic or sexy.
Author your creative writing skill is to die for, but the story itself is not for me. In future I hope you write better stories. I will surely be reading them, but for this its a big no from me.
Wow. How did I get this far when I hate both main characters so much?
Edward is married. This is not romantic or sexy.
Author your creative writing skill is to die for, but the story itself is not for me. In future I hope you write better stories. I will surely be reading them, but for this its a big no from me.
8/31 c10 KDMCAM
Neither wants romance but daddy is going to fall so hard for the little girl, and little girl is going to swoon for her daddy. She's going to be in so much trouble with him when he realizes her age.
Neither wants romance but daddy is going to fall so hard for the little girl, and little girl is going to swoon for her daddy. She's going to be in so much trouble with him when he realizes her age.
8/31 c6 KDMCAM
Can he get her really out of his mind? Or will he only be searching for a certain little now?
Can he get her really out of his mind? Or will he only be searching for a certain little now?
8/27 c10 Guest
He is grooming the teenager?
He is grooming the teenager?
8/23 c10 Guest
Hope he doesnt go acting all high and mighty when he is getting divorced.
His wife maybe framed as a bad person, but he isn't a good person either.
And Bella isn't an innocent little girl. She knows exactly what she is doing to the family.
Edward deserves whatever his father does to him too. Edward has shown himself to be the kind of man who doesn't allow himself to be dominated or controlled. He was not forced into marriage. He chose it for himself, love or otherwise. He took the coward's way out, then blamed everyone instead of taking responsibility.
He'll probably blame Bella for being underage when he learns how old she is. He could have asked her age. He should have, unless this story is taking place in 1824.
Hope he doesnt go acting all high and mighty when he is getting divorced.
His wife maybe framed as a bad person, but he isn't a good person either.
And Bella isn't an innocent little girl. She knows exactly what she is doing to the family.
Edward deserves whatever his father does to him too. Edward has shown himself to be the kind of man who doesn't allow himself to be dominated or controlled. He was not forced into marriage. He chose it for himself, love or otherwise. He took the coward's way out, then blamed everyone instead of taking responsibility.
He'll probably blame Bella for being underage when he learns how old she is. He could have asked her age. He should have, unless this story is taking place in 1824.
8/22 c2 Guest
If Edward hates his marriage so much, end it.
He claims not want money and prestige, yet here he is.
He isn't the little bunny, yet he can't cut himself loose?
He isn't the victim he portrays himself to be. If Vera is bad a mother as he claims he would get custody of his son... or will that not match the lifestyle he wants to live because sex means more to him than anything else in the world?
Stopping kissing yourself man. And stop making excuses.
If Edward hates his marriage so much, end it.
He claims not want money and prestige, yet here he is.
He isn't the little bunny, yet he can't cut himself loose?
He isn't the victim he portrays himself to be. If Vera is bad a mother as he claims he would get custody of his son... or will that not match the lifestyle he wants to live because sex means more to him than anything else in the world?
Stopping kissing yourself man. And stop making excuses.
8/22 c10 Guest
Edward is an asshole.
Anyone who decides to cheat on a spouse, failing marriage or not, is an asshole.
Have to decency to end the marriage first. Or is money, prestige and chasing women for sex all that he cares about?
Edward is an asshole.
Anyone who decides to cheat on a spouse, failing marriage or not, is an asshole.
Have to decency to end the marriage first. Or is money, prestige and chasing women for sex all that he cares about?
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