for Dooku's Gambit4/23 c32 EleonoraDalijskaya
Очень хорошо написано. Но где продолжение? Я страдаю... И очень жду) Это толстый намек — пишите дальше.
Очень хорошо написано. Но где продолжение? Я страдаю... И очень жду) Это толстый намек — пишите дальше.
3/5 c32 
17DS2010
Nice to see Padme defend Anakin and Dooku being surprised they married without him knowing.
17DS2010Nice to see Padme defend Anakin and Dooku being surprised they married without him knowing.
3/1 c32 Guest
Obi-wan was a fool in more ways than one. Same with the Jedi. Palpatine was able to manipulate them. Unfortunately, he and Senator Clovis told them that Dooku turned Anakin to the dark side by promising him Padme. Never mind they're married. Anakin now knows that Palpatine was never his friend and that he's the Sith Lord the Jedi were looking for. Great writing! I loved it! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you!
Obi-wan was a fool in more ways than one. Same with the Jedi. Palpatine was able to manipulate them. Unfortunately, he and Senator Clovis told them that Dooku turned Anakin to the dark side by promising him Padme. Never mind they're married. Anakin now knows that Palpatine was never his friend and that he's the Sith Lord the Jedi were looking for. Great writing! I loved it! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you!
2/28 c31 princesselsaamidala22
Oh my gosh! I hope Padme and Ani don't get arrested for treason for betraying the Republic.
Oh my gosh! I hope Padme and Ani don't get arrested for treason for betraying the Republic.
2/28 c31 2anakin and padme skywalker
Thank you for all the reviews:
Guest 1 on Feb 14, Spectacular Webhead on Feb 14 for chapters 30 and 31, and Guest 3 on Feb 17: Thank you so much for the review.
Guest 2 on Feb 14: Yes Dooku still has a lot of information he wants to dump on Anakin and Padmé, but first they still need to believe him about Sidious. Dooku did give up a lot, but he knew that he would need to give up more if Anakin didn't join him. Thank you so much for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
2anakin and padme skywalkerThank you for all the reviews:
Guest 1 on Feb 14, Spectacular Webhead on Feb 14 for chapters 30 and 31, and Guest 3 on Feb 17: Thank you so much for the review.
Guest 2 on Feb 14: Yes Dooku still has a lot of information he wants to dump on Anakin and Padmé, but first they still need to believe him about Sidious. Dooku did give up a lot, but he knew that he would need to give up more if Anakin didn't join him. Thank you so much for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
2/17 c29 Guest
Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter
Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter
2/14 c31 Guest
Dooku helped save Padme and he revealed that Sheev Palpatine was the Sith Lord they were looking for. Anakin and Padme are still reluctant to accept that, even though they agreed to join the Separatists. Dooku gave up a lot to get them on his side. He also revealed that they have a underground movement to free the Clones, who are a slave army for the Republic. Dooku didn't mention the Clones have chips that Sidious plans to use order 66 and destroy the Jedi. I figure he plans to tell them later when he presents more proof that Sheev Palpatine is Darth Sidious. Great writing! I LOVED it! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
Dooku helped save Padme and he revealed that Sheev Palpatine was the Sith Lord they were looking for. Anakin and Padme are still reluctant to accept that, even though they agreed to join the Separatists. Dooku gave up a lot to get them on his side. He also revealed that they have a underground movement to free the Clones, who are a slave army for the Republic. Dooku didn't mention the Clones have chips that Sidious plans to use order 66 and destroy the Jedi. I figure he plans to tell them later when he presents more proof that Sheev Palpatine is Darth Sidious. Great writing! I LOVED it! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
2/14 c31 Guest
Let's see how this goes..
Let's see how this goes..
2/14 c1 Ensley Williams
This story is a fascinating reimagining of Star Wars lore, blending rich characterization with a compelling moral dilemma. Count Dooku’s internal conflict adds depth to his character, making him more than just a Sith pawn. The dialogue is engaging, and the tension is well-paced, keeping readers invested in Dooku’s risky gambit. The setting of Tatooine is vividly described, making the harsh desert feel alive and dangerous.
This would translate beautifully into multiple mediums. A **comic or webtoon** would highlight the dramatic visuals—the vast desert, the bustling Mos Espa, and the intense rescue mission. **A motion comic** would add another layer of depth, enhancing the tension with voice acting and subtle animations, making Dooku’s struggle feel even more immersive.
I'd be happy to discuss further over Discord or email! I'll reach out to you on **Ensley32519** so we can collaborate efficiently.
This story is a fascinating reimagining of Star Wars lore, blending rich characterization with a compelling moral dilemma. Count Dooku’s internal conflict adds depth to his character, making him more than just a Sith pawn. The dialogue is engaging, and the tension is well-paced, keeping readers invested in Dooku’s risky gambit. The setting of Tatooine is vividly described, making the harsh desert feel alive and dangerous.
This would translate beautifully into multiple mediums. A **comic or webtoon** would highlight the dramatic visuals—the vast desert, the bustling Mos Espa, and the intense rescue mission. **A motion comic** would add another layer of depth, enhancing the tension with voice acting and subtle animations, making Dooku’s struggle feel even more immersive.
I'd be happy to discuss further over Discord or email! I'll reach out to you on **Ensley32519** so we can collaborate efficiently.
2/14 c30 2anakin and padme skywalker
Thank you for all the reviews:
Spectacular Webhead 11 for Chapter 28 and 29 on Feb 7: Anakin will have to make a choice when it comes to Dooku in the next episode
Guest 1 on Feb 7: Thank you for the review.
Guest 2 on Feb 8: You're completely right about Sidious not caring about Padmé while Dooku would. You'll see how Dooku leverages his proof about Sidious's real identity and showing that proof to the Jedi Council. Sidious will have to be on the defense in the next chapter.
DS201 on Feb 10: Lucky thing that Dooku had the cure for the poison with him.
2anakin and padme skywalkerThank you for all the reviews:
Spectacular Webhead 11 for Chapter 28 and 29 on Feb 7: Anakin will have to make a choice when it comes to Dooku in the next episode
Guest 1 on Feb 7: Thank you for the review.
Guest 2 on Feb 8: You're completely right about Sidious not caring about Padmé while Dooku would. You'll see how Dooku leverages his proof about Sidious's real identity and showing that proof to the Jedi Council. Sidious will have to be on the defense in the next chapter.
DS201 on Feb 10: Lucky thing that Dooku had the cure for the poison with him.
2/8 c30 Guest
Dooku is manipulating Anakin and Padme, but there's a difference between him and Sheeve Palpatine. Palpatine wouldn't care if Padme was saved, Dooku does. Anakin and Padme get all the proof they need they can still go their own way, join Dooku. Dooku has proof that Sheev Palpatine is Darth Sidious and shows that to Ani and Padme then Anakin joining Sidious is off the table. It still is a good idea that they present the proof to the Jedi Council, even if it's after they take care of Sidious. Great writing! I loved it! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!
Dooku is manipulating Anakin and Padme, but there's a difference between him and Sheeve Palpatine. Palpatine wouldn't care if Padme was saved, Dooku does. Anakin and Padme get all the proof they need they can still go their own way, join Dooku. Dooku has proof that Sheev Palpatine is Darth Sidious and shows that to Ani and Padme then Anakin joining Sidious is off the table. It still is a good idea that they present the proof to the Jedi Council, even if it's after they take care of Sidious. Great writing! I loved it! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!