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31Greed720
Not going to lie, I was enjoying this story up until this chapter. The whole giving his abilities to other people and handing them out like candy, it is kind of a turn off. Ot almost certainly means you're gonna give the RWBY and JNPR teams plus the other fan favourite character the abilities which is a massive turn off. They have their own abilities and style, they don't need a deux machina buff. I'll probs stick with it for a moment, but my enjoyment has been somewhat soured by this classic SI trope of the MC just giving away all his secrets and abilities for no reasons except the lols
31Greed720Not going to lie, I was enjoying this story up until this chapter. The whole giving his abilities to other people and handing them out like candy, it is kind of a turn off. Ot almost certainly means you're gonna give the RWBY and JNPR teams plus the other fan favourite character the abilities which is a massive turn off. They have their own abilities and style, they don't need a deux machina buff. I'll probs stick with it for a moment, but my enjoyment has been somewhat soured by this classic SI trope of the MC just giving away all his secrets and abilities for no reasons except the lols
5/12 c55 Guest
interesting meeting with Roman and Neo
interesting meeting with Roman and Neo
5/12 c55 Reader20448
Another good chapter and the romance blooms and Roman got cooked, Neo skedaddle but she got them digits indeed. The date continues and it get's interrupted again, Winter mad don't get her in way. I await for the next one to come.
Another good chapter and the romance blooms and Roman got cooked, Neo skedaddle but she got them digits indeed. The date continues and it get's interrupted again, Winter mad don't get her in way. I await for the next one to come.
5/12 c55 Yang34
that was a nice date before grimm. lol neo wants coal to.
im sure of it. coal will be emperpr of remnant, with harem. acrn will be coutr jesters, haha
that was a nice date before grimm. lol neo wants coal to.
im sure of it. coal will be emperpr of remnant, with harem. acrn will be coutr jesters, haha
5/12 c55 Guest
Love it
Happy to see Roman and Neo make a appearance to
Love it
Happy to see Roman and Neo make a appearance to
5/12 c55 1MasterDarkElf
Well, this was a nice chapter. Surprisingly calm despite the interruptions. And so opens the floodgates to the harem, haha. Looking forward to more.
1MasterDarkElfWell, this was a nice chapter. Surprisingly calm despite the interruptions. And so opens the floodgates to the harem, haha. Looking forward to more.
5/12 c55 3Raidentensho
very nice. I can see that whatever outing the 3 go on will be interrupted. never mind a possible grimm tide if he desides to purpose with a self-made ring. this will be epic. until then, later!
3Raidentenshovery nice. I can see that whatever outing the 3 go on will be interrupted. never mind a possible grimm tide if he desides to purpose with a self-made ring. this will be epic. until then, later!
5/8 c54 Livedark
the dialog got 1.5 times better that bumps it up to a solid 6.6/10 hell maybe even a 6.8/10 ima check ya other story after i get through the patreon stuff
the dialog got 1.5 times better that bumps it up to a solid 6.6/10 hell maybe even a 6.8/10 ima check ya other story after i get through the patreon stuff