3/25 c1 Juliasimon77
A masterwork of storytelling that pulses with raw intensity, weaving threads of fate , longing, and quiet revelation into an unforgettable tapestry. Every character breathes with a depth that defies the page flawed yet luminous, their struggles carving echoes of our own joys and sorrows. The prose is a symphony: elegant yet unforced, each word chosen with the precision of an artist shaping light and shadow. Scenes unfold with a cinematic grace moments of hushed vulnerability giving way to thunderous emotion, leaving an imprint that lingers long after the final passage. Neither confined by genre nor bound by convention, this is a story that transcends, a journey that doesn’t just unfold but unravels, drawing the reader into a world at once distant and deeply intimate. It is not merely read it is felt, an experience to be carried, pondered, and revisited like a beloved relic of time itself.

3/4 c11 Guest
Did Naruto meet Rocket and Groot PRIOR to this chapter?

3/3 c10 marquis.shax
someone from Uzu (mainly Boruto) messing with the Tesseract definitely can't end well probably even worse than in the Avengers Movie lol

3/3 c11 4Monster King
Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing

3/2 c11 4freedomringer
The better question is, is Loki ready for the ass kicking from the children of a being who routinely spits in the face of fate and common sense

3/2 c11 1Naruto30
Doesn't Thor have the all speak? Why can't he understand Groot?

Excellent chapter. Waiting for your next update

3/1 c10 Schuldig Zero
When it comes to Captain Marvel, I'd say yes. The character could use some help because Marvel keeps throwing her under the bus, both in comics and on screen. The problem with her MCU version is that Marvel Studios keeps treating her like an afterthought. Her IW and Endgame scenes were done before they even had a full script for her solo film. Her solo film set up for an epic clash against the Kree and had a script that seemed like the cast had to ad lib everything. Even worse was The Marvels skipped the epic clash entirely, only existing as a film that sets up future events like a Young Avengers team and the Multiverse incursions. At this point it seems like they only added her just to have someone that could wreck space ships barehanded before vanishing. I think they don't really know how to use her on screen since she kinda breaks the setting in terms of physical feats and runs into the same problem people have with Superman films in how the only way to be a threat to her without significant setup is to either have someone with similar powers or negate her powers, which both her films have done already.